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“Lotte…what’s with that appearance?”
 
“Lotte…what’s with that appearance?”
   
Lotte was wearing something that looked like a blue string swimsuit and on her back, showy wings decorations were attached. The high exposure rate looked similar to a Magic Dress but it was a little different.
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Lotte was wearing something that looked like a blue string swimsuit and on her back, a showy wings decoration was attached. The high exposure rate looked similar to a Magic Dress but it was a little different.
   
“Fufufu, this is the cosplay of <Bashful Angel Chirariel>, Chirariel <ref>The name is a pun, chirari mean glance</ref> Blue desu!”
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“Fufufu, this is the cosplay of <Bashful Angel Chirariel>, Chirariel<ref>The name is a pun, chirari mean glance</ref> Blue desu!”
   
Bashful Angel Chirariel―Kazuki also watched that anime together with Lotte and Karin. Collecting the gaze of people with their embarrassing appearance, they amassed [Glance Energy] and fought. It was the tale of angel girls of justice.
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Bashful Angel Chirariel―Kazuki too watched that anime together with Lotte and Karin. Collecting the gaze of people with their embarrassing appearance, they amassed [Glance Energy] and fought. It was the tale of angel girls of justice.
   
At a glance, it seems like a cunning setting to aim for the perverted hearts of the male viewers, but that was nothing more than a front to gather sponsors. The content was filled with the staff's obsession for diehard battles that knew no bounds. Unrolling the figure of flowery beautiful girls, it developed stylish battles that fired up the viewer. That gap collected great reviews, not only from the male viewers, but also from the female viewers-a masterpiece of an anime.
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At a glance, it seems like a cunning setting to aim for the perverted hearts of the male viewers, but that was nothing more than a front to gather sponsors. The content was filled with the staff's obsession for diehard battles that knew no bounds. Unrolling the figure of flowery beautiful girls, it developed stylish battles that fired up the viewer. That gap collected great evaluations, not only from the male viewers, but also from the female viewers-a masterpiece of an anime.
   
“Chirariel Blue appeared to be cool but with heavy emotion, she is a good character really. It’s fine for you to cosplay, however running around in the Witch’s Manor’s halls is no good, okay?”
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“Chirariel Blue appeared to be cool but with heavy emotion, she is a good character really. It’s fine for you to cosplay, however running around in the Witch’s Mansion’s corridor is not good, okay?”
   
 
“Sorry desu…” Lotte meekly hung her head down.
 
“Sorry desu…” Lotte meekly hung her head down.
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“…Certainly, I didn’t realize as a person that was involved in it myself, but that was amazingly romantic huh.”
 
“…Certainly, I didn’t realize as a person that was involved in it myself, but that was amazingly romantic huh.”
   
“Right now, I’m perfectly content with this desu♪ That’s why right now, I want to go searching for anime rather than something romantic desu. Changing the shameful heart into blue healing….CHAAAAAANGE! CHIRARIEEEEEEELLL! BLUEEEEEE!!”
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“Right now, I’m perfectly content with this desu♪ That’s why right now, I want to go searching for anime chick rather than something romantic desu. Changing the shameful heart into blue healing….CHAAAAAANGE! CHIRARIEEEEEEELLL! BLUEEEEEE!!”
   
 
Lotte took a transformation pose with movement that had sharpness in it.
 
Lotte took a transformation pose with movement that had sharpness in it.
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“That voice…! So you are in this kind of place huh, Chirariel Blue!”
 
“That voice…! So you are in this kind of place huh, Chirariel Blue!”
   
From one end of the Witch’s Manor, a voice could be heard along with the sounds of someone dashing through the stairs.
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From one end of the Witch’s Mansion, a voice could be heard along with the sounds of someone dashing through the stairs.
   
 
“That voice…Chirariel Red!” Lotte also raised her voice.
 
“That voice…Chirariel Red!” Lotte also raised her voice.
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Karin. When Karin noticed Kazuki’s existence, her face blushed bright red and she hid her own body.
 
Karin. When Karin noticed Kazuki’s existence, her face blushed bright red and she hid her own body.
   
“Wro, wrong, this is, because Charlotte said that she wanted to play with me…”
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“Wro, wrong, this is that, because Charlotte said that she wanted to play with me…”
   
 
“Karin-oneesan! To lose against your shameful heart…you don’t have the quality to introduce yourself as Red desu!!”
 
“Karin-oneesan! To lose against your shameful heart…you don’t have the quality to introduce yourself as Red desu!!”
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It was an expression completely like she was noticing that she almost threw away something important to her by her own hand.
 
It was an expression completely like she was noticing that she almost threw away something important to her by her own hand.
   
“Change the shameful heart into a flame of justice….CHAAAAAAANGE! CHIRARIEEEEEEEELL! REEEEEDDDD!!” Karin stopped hiding her body and took a sharp transformation pose.
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“Change the shameful heart into flame of justice….CHAAAAAAANGE! CHIRARIEEEEEEEELL! REEEEEDDDD!!” Karin stopped hiding her body and took a sharp transformation pose.
   
‘What are they doing, these girls’…that’s not what Kazuki was currently thinking.
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‘What are they doing, these guys’…that’s not what Kazuki was currently thinking.
   
 
Kazuki too loved that anime. Confronting Blue and Red like this, his spirit reflexively blazed up.
 
Kazuki too loved that anime. Confronting Blue and Red like this, his spirit reflexively blazed up.
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“Takashi! More…look at me more!” Lotte yelled while she kept puffing out her chest.
 
“Takashi! More…look at me more!” Lotte yelled while she kept puffing out her chest.
   
“Takashi! The one who you have to look at is just me!” Karin too yelled while shaking her butt.
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“Takashi! The one who you have to look at is just me!” Karin too yelled while dancing out her butt.
   
 
“Which one I…should look at…”
 
“Which one I…should look at…”
   
Kazuki held his head in his hands and kneeled on the spot. At that time Kazuki was making Takashi’s conflict as his own, the hall of the Witch’s Manor transformed into the battlefield of the two girls who stopped being angels.
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Kazuki held his head in his hands and kneeled on the spot. At that time Kazuki was making Takashi’s conflict as his own, the corridor of the Witch’s Mansion transformed into the battlefield of the two girls who stopped being angels.
   
 
“…What in the world are you all doing here?”
 
“…What in the world are you all doing here?”
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Suddenly―a voice of absolute zero dragged Kazuki and the other two back from the delusional world into the world of reality.
 
Suddenly―a voice of absolute zero dragged Kazuki and the other two back from the delusional world into the world of reality.
   
Koyuki opened her door unnoticed by anyone and stuck out her head into the hall.
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Koyuki opened her door unnoticed by anyone and stuck out her head into the corridor.
   
 
“You two…are you sane?”
 
“You two…are you sane?”
   
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Lotte and Karin returned to their own respective rooms while Kazuki was remonstrated by Koyuki in the hall.
 
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Lotte and Karin returned to their own respective rooms while Kazuki was remonstrated by Koyuki in the corridor.
   
 
“Making them dress shamelessly like that and making impure poses, what are you doing?”
 
“Making them dress shamelessly like that and making impure poses, what are you doing?”
   
Though Koyuki was also such a girl that always wore only a white shirt put on top a pair of panties as her casual wear.
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Though Koyuki was also such a girl that always wore only a white shirt put on top of a single panty as her casual wear.
   
 
“No…we were just a little, heated up too much in playing around…”
 
“No…we were just a little, heated up too much in playing around…”
   
When he thought back, Kazuki, Lotte and also Karin didn’t go through a normal childhood.
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When he thought back, Kazuki, Lotte, and also Karin didn’t go through a normal childhood period.
   
Kazuki, who was a senior in his orphanage, always held the awareness of [I have to be dependable] and matured prematurely through his childhood. He never had fun playing some make-believe game innocently even once.
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Kazuki, who was a senior in his orphanage, always held the awareness of [I have to be dependable] and matured prematurely through his childhood period. He never had fun playing some make-believe game innocently even once.
   
Karin, who was also an orphan like him, and Lotte who was raised in an imperial court too, their circumstances were without a doubt, similar to his.
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Karin, who was also an orphan like him, and Lotte who was raised in an imperial court too, their circumstances were without a doubt similar to his.
   
 
The three of them, somewhere in their hearts, they might yearn for that kind of childlike playing.
 
The three of them, somewhere in their hearts, they might yearn for that kind of childlike playing.
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“Romantic…is it?”
 
“Romantic…is it?”
   
“Things like what you are yearning for in that kind of situation.”
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“Things like what you are yearning for in this kind of situation.”
   
 
After Koyuki hesitated to say for a little while in shyness, she opened her mouth timidly.
 
After Koyuki hesitated to say for a little while in shyness, she opened her mouth timidly.
   
“I…I yearn for a wall bang…”
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“I…I yearn for wall bang…”
   
 
“Wall bang?”
 
“Wall bang?”
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“Cornered close to the wall…then the right elbow banged the wall to block the escape path…”
 
“Cornered close to the wall…then the right elbow banged the wall to block the escape path…”
   
Blocking the escape path? He didn’t understand why Koyuki yearned for that kind of thing, but Kazuki thought he would try it for real. He smoothly approached Koyuki as if cornering her to the wall of the hall.
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Blocking the escape path? He didn’t understand why Koyuki yearned for that kind of thing, but Kazuki thought he would try it for real. He smoothly approached Koyuki as if cornering her to the wall of the corridor.
   
 
“Like this?”
 
“Like this?”
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Koyuki’s eyes were wet with tears, yet a heart mark flew from her chest. That appearance of hers was truly cute.
 
Koyuki’s eyes were wet with tears, yet a heart mark flew from her chest. That appearance of hers was truly cute.
   
“You're saying that but, you don’t hate it right? Next what do you want to be done to you while we're like this?”
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“You are saying that in your mouth but, you don’t hate it right? Next what do you want to be done to you while we are like this?”
   
“I want a lot of embarrassing things…to be done to me…. Even though, I am made unable to escape…”
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“I want a lot of embarrassing things…to be done to me…. Despite so I am made unable to escape…”
   
 
“Embarrassing things, for example what kinds of things?”
 
“Embarrassing things, for example what kinds of things?”
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While trembling in shivers, Koyuki came appealing to him. Kazuki said “You are cute” and kissed her pure white cheek to convey his honest feelings. Koyuki closed her eyes tightly as if to endure the excitement in her chest. While doing that she said self-torturing things like “Lies…someone like me is cute, that’s…”.
 
While trembling in shivers, Koyuki came appealing to him. Kazuki said “You are cute” and kissed her pure white cheek to convey his honest feelings. Koyuki closed her eyes tightly as if to endure the excitement in her chest. While doing that she said self-torturing things like “Lies…someone like me is cute, that’s…”.
   
“You're still saying something like that. Then I’m going to continue kissing you until you believe me.”
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“You are still saying something like that. Then I’m going to continue kissing you until you believe it.”
   
 
Not only her cheek, but also her forehead, chin, nose tip, Kazuki rained down kisses to all the places he could reach on her face. While he gently stroked her sensitive ear with his left hand, he caressed her whole face with his lips dearly. “Hauu…” Raising a frail voice, Koyuki leaked out rough breaths from her enchanting half opened mouth.
 
Not only her cheek, but also her forehead, chin, nose tip, Kazuki rained down kisses to all the places he could reach on her face. While he gently stroked her sensitive ear with his left hand, he caressed her whole face with his lips dearly. “Hauu…” Raising a frail voice, Koyuki leaked out rough breaths from her enchanting half opened mouth.
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“Af, after this…even though it’s embarrassing, my clothes are stripped off forcefully…”
 
“Af, after this…even though it’s embarrassing, my clothes are stripped off forcefully…”
   
Kazuki stopped playing with Koyuki’s ear and moved his hand to the button on the shirt’s collar. Koyuki stared at that hand manner as if seeing a dream. One, two buttons were unfastened, and then the white shirt fell under the floor in a flutter. Koyuki who now only wore a single pair of panties was trembling with a vroom in shame.
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Kazuki stopped playing with Koyuki’s ear and moved his hand to the button on the shirt’s collar. Koyuki stared at that hand manner as if seeing a dream. One, two buttons were unfastened, and then the white shirt fell under the floor in flutter. Koyuki who now only wore a single piece of panty was trembling with a vroom in shame.
   
 
“This kind of thin body…is embarrassing…”
 
“This kind of thin body…is embarrassing…”
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“That’s not true. It’s a really beautiful body.”
 
“That’s not true. It’s a really beautiful body.”
   
The skin that was white like snow drew a gentle-sloping line, forming the still unripe bulges. Kazuki’s sight unconsciously became nailed down on the reddening tip on those bulges. This is bad, he thought.
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The skin that was white like snow drew gentle-sloping line, forming the still unripe bulges. Kazuki’s sight unconsciously became nailed down on the reddening tip on those bulges. This is bad, he thought.
   
 
“…After this, how does Koyuki want to be treated?”
 
“…After this, how does Koyuki want to be treated?”
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<nowiki>*</nowiki>puni* Kazuki pinched Koyuki’s cheek. Koyuki’s rough breath calmed down little by little. Her eyes that were like looking at a dream returned to the color of reality slowly.
 
<nowiki>*</nowiki>puni* Kazuki pinched Koyuki’s cheek. Koyuki’s rough breath calmed down little by little. Her eyes that were like looking at a dream returned to the color of reality slowly.
   
“…Puu. Then for the last please kiss me on the lips, gently.”
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“…Puu. Then for the last please kiss me at the mouth, gently.”
   
Embracing tightly the Koyuki who was only wearing a single pair of panties, Kazuki sucked Koyuki’s lips as strong as he could.
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Embracing tightly the Koyuki who was only wearing a single piece of panty, Kazuki sucked Koyuki’s lips as strong as he could.
   
 
Koyuki’s spine was trembling in shivers.
 
Koyuki’s spine was trembling in shivers.

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