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He had a feeling that he had already caught a glimpse of that concept called romantic.
 
He had a feeling that he had already caught a glimpse of that concept called romantic.
   
Last night he could make everyone happy more than usual and passed the time in a sweet atmosphere.
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Last night he could make everyone happy more than usual and passed the time in sweet atmosphere.
   
{If you could grow until you could create that kind of flow deliberately, then My King will become an excellent playboy!}
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{If you could grow until you could create that kind of flow deliberately, then you will become an excellent playboy!}
   
 
Leme came transmitting her voice with Telepathy.
 
Leme came transmitting her voice with Telepathy.
   
No, it was one kind of training to acquire skills and knowledge for the sake of spending an even better time with his precious people. It was not like he was aiming to become a playboy or something but….
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No, it was one kind of training to acquire skill and knowledge for the sake of spending an even better time with his precious people. It was not like he was aiming to become a playboy or something but….
   
The problem was that everything he had done yesterday could go well because the other parties were the amiable people of the Witch’s Manor. He didn’t know if it would also go well if he did the same thing to Kazuha-senpai.
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Only the problem was that everything he had done yesterday could go well because the other parties were the amiable people of the Witch’s Mansion. He didn’t know if it could also go well if he did the same thing to Kazuha-senpai.
   
However…nothing would change if he didn’t even do anything. To face the [romantic] problem assigned to him by senpai seriously was the responsibility of the one who kissed senpai forcefully.
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However…nothing would change if he didn’t even do anything. To face the [romantic] problem assigned to him by senpai seriously was the responsibility of him who kissed senpai forcefully.
   
As a Hayashizaki swordsman, he couldn’t run away from romance!
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As the swordsman of Hayashizaki, he couldn’t run away from romantic!
   
{However when Leme thought will something happen…or nothing will happen…}
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{However when I thought will something happen…or nothing will happen…}
   
 
…What?
 
…What?
   
{No, it’s nothing. My King, don’t worry and make the girl fall!}
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{No, it’s nothing. O King, don’t worry and make the girl fall!}
   
As always, the yell from Leme that made him feel bad superbly, he thought.
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As always the yell from Leme that made him feel bad superbly, he thought.
   
After school, Kazuki finally came to the Sword Division’s school building searching for Kazuha-senpai’s figure.
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After school, Kazuki finally came at the Sword Division’s school building searching for Kazuha-senpai’s figure.
   
 
With Leme’s ability―the power of <Positivity Level Map>, he could perceive that for some reason today too Kazuha-senpai was at the abandoned school building. Most likely she was just alone.
 
With Leme’s ability―the power of <Positivity Level Map>, he could perceive that for some reason today too Kazuha-senpai was at the abandoned school building. Most likely she was just alone.
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“Wa, please wait a second senpai!?”
 
“Wa, please wait a second senpai!?”
   
Kazuki chased her in a panic. The story was different with what she said yesterday when she didn’t even give him a chance to talk.
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Kazuki chased her in panic. The story was different with what she said yesterday when she didn’t even give him a chance to talk.
   
 
“Hayashizaki, don’t tell me you…you are coming here to do something romantic!?”
 
“Hayashizaki, don’t tell me you…you are coming here to do something romantic!?”
   
While escaping, Kazuha-senpai looked back. Her cheeks had already become slightly red.
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While escaping, Kazuha-senpai looked back. That cheeks of hers had already became slightly red.
   
 
“Even though senpai is the one that said if I didn’t do something romantic you will cut ties with me, why are you running away!? I won’t be able to do anything romantic like this!!”
 
“Even though senpai is the one that said if I didn’t do something romantic you will cut ties with me, why are you running away!? I won’t be able to do anything romantic like this!!”
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“I, it’s fine even if you don’t do it! As I thought it’s fine even if you don’t do anything romantic!!”
 
“I, it’s fine even if you don’t do it! As I thought it’s fine even if you don’t do anything romantic!!”
   
What irrationality. With this the chance that she promised to give was only a lie and she was going to cut ties without any questions asked. No…Kazuha-senpai’s positivity level was not that low that she would cut ties that absurdly.
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What irrationality. With this the chance that she promised to give was only a waste paper and she was going to cut ties without any question asked. No…Kazuha-senpai’s positivity level was not that low that she would cut ties that absurdly.
   
 
Or perhaps had senpai came to become embarrassed later on after she demanded that [romantic kiss]!? The senpai at that time was in an absurd temperament after all, it was not impossible….
 
Or perhaps had senpai came to become embarrassed later on after she demanded that [romantic kiss]!? The senpai at that time was in an absurd temperament after all, it was not impossible….
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“Eh!?” Kazuha-senpai raised her voice and looked back at her front, but it was too late.
 
“Eh!?” Kazuha-senpai raised her voice and looked back at her front, but it was too late.
   
While she was looking back here, senpai, who was dashing through the Sword Division’s garden with Enchant Aura at full power didn’t notice the excellent pine tree that stood in front of her, then she splendidly collided with it head-on. “UWAAA!” She tottered while scattering away blue defensive magic power.
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While she was looking back here, senpai who was dashing through the Sword Division’s garden with Enchant Aura at full power didn’t notice the excellent pine tree that stood in front of her, then she splendidly collided with it head-on. “UWAAA!” She tottered while scattering away blue defensive magic power.
   
Kazuki caught up right there. All of a sudden, [wall bang chance] such an idea floated in his head. The escaping Kazuha-senpai was overlapping with Koyuki’s figure.
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Kazuki caught up right there. There upon all of a sudden, [wall bang chance] such idea floated in his head. The escaping Kazuha-senpai was overlapping with Koyuki’s figure.
   
 
Kazuki approached Kazuha-senpai and sandwiched her between his body and the pine tree. Kazuha-senpai turned to look his way. He thrust out his right hand through the side of her face to the trunk of the pine tree with a ‘DON’. Wall bang stance―success.
 
Kazuki approached Kazuha-senpai and sandwiched her between his body and the pine tree. Kazuha-senpai turned to look his way. He thrust out his right hand through the side of her face to the trunk of the pine tree with a ‘DON’. Wall bang stance―success.
   
“Senpai, please talk to me.”
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“Senpai, please listen to my story.”
   
 
Kazuki naturally brought his face closer. Kazuha-senpai meekly shrunk herself.
 
Kazuki naturally brought his face closer. Kazuha-senpai meekly shrunk herself.
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“Why are you running away? Isn’t this different from the promise?”
 
“Why are you running away? Isn’t this different from the promise?”
   
“Be, because when I thought about it calmly, what kind of romantic thing you were going to do, it’s strange I thought…”
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“Be, because when I thought about it calmly, what kind of romantic thing you are going to do, it’s strange I thought…”
   
“But I’m troubled if there's no chance for me to repair my relationship with senpai. Even though it’s for the sake of that, I plan to show that I will do whatever romantic things I have to do.”
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“But I’m troubled if there is no chance for me to repair my relation with senpai. Even though if it’s for the sake of that, I plan to show that I will do whatever romantic thing I have to do.”
   
“E, even if you become that overly serious to do something romantic…”
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“E, even if you become that overly serious to do something romantic in high spirit…”
   
“Please give me a chance to do something romantic. For that I'd done lots of training.”
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“Please give me a challenge to do something romantic. For the sake of that I had done training.”
   
 
“You said training…. …You don’t have any reason to be that attached to me right? Let’s stop this already, there are a lot of other girls after all…”
 
“You said training…. …You don’t have any reason to be that attached to me right? Let’s stop this already, there are a lot of other girls after all…”
   
“There's only one Kazuha-senpai though.”
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“There is only one Kazuha-senpai here.”
   
“……..Lusting for me that much, just stop it.” She was talking in a voice that became smaller and smaller.
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“……..Lusting for me until that much, just stop it.” She was talking in a voice that became smaller and smaller.
   
“Maybe this is lust, but I don’t want my bond with senpai to be gone. But, if senpai rejects me from the bottom of your heart then I'll give up, but like this, won’t the both of us just be left sad?”
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“Maybe this is lust, but I don’t want my bond with senpai to be gone. Also if senpai reject me from the bottom of your heart I will even give up, but like this won’t the both of us will just get sad?”
   
“…You can't do something like a proper kiss anyway…”
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“…You cannot do something like a proper kiss anyway…”
   
 
“I’m sorry, but that time there was no other choice except to kiss.”
 
“I’m sorry, but that time there was no other choice except to kiss.”
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Kazuki hugged Kazuha-senpai tightly altogether with the arms that were hitting him.
 
Kazuki hugged Kazuha-senpai tightly altogether with the arms that were hitting him.
   
“Why does senpai think that? There's no way I don’t like everything about senpai.”
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“Why is senpai thinking like that? There is no way I don’t like anything about senpai.”
   
 
Just like what Mio said, his own feelings had to be conveyed completely.
 
Just like what Mio said, his own feelings had to be conveyed completely.
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Exhaust all my words.
 
Exhaust all my words.
   
“The same magic swordsman like me, and you love kenjutsu even more than Summoning Magic. Even when you were at the very bottom of failure, you kept trying to crawl up with your sword and hard effort. That figure of senpai made me arbitrarily think of you as a companion that is similar to me.”
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“The same magic swordsman like me, you love kenjutsu beyond all else rather than Summoning Magic. Even when you were in the very bottom of failure, you kept trying to crawl up with your sword and hard effort. That figure of senpai made me arbitrarily think of you as a companion that is similar with me.”
   
“Don’t just think of me as someone similar to you as you please. At any rate, someone like me is completely weak…”
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“Don’t just think of me as someone similar with you as you please. At any rate, someone like me is completely weak…”
   
 
“Please don’t talk like that, I want to become stronger together with senpai.”
 
“Please don’t talk like that, I want to become stronger together with senpai.”
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“If you think like that, doesn’t that mean you only see me as a swordsman and nothing else…”
 
“If you think like that, doesn’t that mean you only see me as a swordsman and nothing else…”
   
He thought it was a little unexpected. Senpai’s way of talking just now could be thought as behaving like a spoiled child that wanted to depend on him.
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He thought it was a little unexpected. Senpai’s way of talking just now could be thought as behaving like a spoilt child that wanted to depend on him.
   
“That’s not true. Senpai is a lovely person with that straightforward personality of yours. You scold me not to hurt girls. I was anxious whether I was hated by senpai or not but senpai came to rely on me for your kenjutsu. Through one thing or another senpai worked really hard for the sake of my battle election that didn’t have any connection at all with senpai. You also cooperated with me even though it was for saving Karin who was an enemy…”
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“That’s not true. Senpai is a lovely person with that straight forward personality of yours. You scold me not to hurt girls. I was anxious whether I was hated by senpai or not but senpai came to rely on me for your kenjutsu. Through one thing or another senpai worked really hard for the sake of my battle election that didn’t have any connection at all with senpai. You also cooperated with me even though it was for saving Karin who was an enemy…”
   
 
The more he looked back at his memory, the more he realized that Kazuha-senpai was a [good person].
 
The more he looked back at his memory, the more he realized that Kazuha-senpai was a [good person].
   
“And then you got angry, you laughed, you got angry to hide your shyness…senpai is an energetic lovely girl. I don’t want to see such a senpai to have a sad face.”
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“And then you got angry, you laughed, you got angry to hide your shyness…senpai is an energetic lovely girl. I don’t want to see such senpai to have a sad face.”
   
 
“…Just like everyone else?”
 
“…Just like everyone else?”
   
“Yes. Just like everyone else, senpai is precious to me.”
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“Yes. Just like everyone else, senpai is precious for me.”
   
 
“Even though you understand my feelings you still say something like that, how unfair…”
 
“Even though you understand my feelings you still say something like that, how unfair…”
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Kazuki proclaimed such in Kazuha-senpai’s ear while hugging her body tightly. Senpai groaned “uuuu…” while burying her face into Kazuki’s chest―an avatar of a small key flew to Kazuki.
 
Kazuki proclaimed such in Kazuha-senpai’s ear while hugging her body tightly. Senpai groaned “uuuu…” while burying her face into Kazuki’s chest―an avatar of a small key flew to Kazuki.
   
It was the proof of a positivity level that surpassed a value of 65. She didn’t hate him, on the contrary.
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It was the proof of positivity level that surpassed a value of 65. She didn’t hate him, on the contrary.
   
 
“Senpai, just now, your positivity level had gone up.”
 
“Senpai, just now, your positivity level had gone up.”
   
“Wha!?” Kazuha-senpai opened her eyes wide, “Release me, release me, release me, release me alreadyyy―!!” She struggled violently and ran away from Kazuki’s arms. And then without delay she speedily slipped away through Kazuki’s side.
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“Wha!?” Kazuha-senpai opened her eyes wide, “Release me, release me release me release me alreadyyy―!!” She struggled violently and ran away from Kazuki’s arms. And then without delay she speedily slipped away through Kazuki’s side.
   
“I really…really, really don’t like someone like you at alll―!!”
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“I really…really really don’t like someone like you at alll―!!”
   
 
After shouting that, she turned her back to Kazuki and dashed away.
 
After shouting that, she turned her back to Kazuki and dashed away.

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