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Seeing Kazuki who suddenly appeared out of nowhere, Kazuha-senpai showed a forced scowl.
 
Seeing Kazuki who suddenly appeared out of nowhere, Kazuha-senpai showed a forced scowl.
   
“I know, I heard from Kohaku. Usually senpai ate Kohaku’s homemade box lunch together with her at the abandoned clubroom, but unexpectedly she has work in the Sword Division’s student council during the lunch break so senpai is having bread from the canteen right? But isn’t it lonely to just eat bread alone?”
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“I know, I heard from Kohaku. Usually senpai ate Kohaku’s homemade box lunch together with her at the abandoned clubroom, but unexpectedly she has work in the Sword Division’s student council during the lunch break so senpai is having bread from canteen right? But isn’t it lonely to just eat bread alone?”
   
 
Because of the Chief Student Council President’s sudden entrance, the surrounding students of the Sword Division were making a stir.
 
Because of the Chief Student Council President’s sudden entrance, the surrounding students of the Sword Division were making a stir.
   
“He's taking consideration for Tsukahara-san who lost her lunch companion.”
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“He is taking consideration for Tsukahara-san who lost her lunch companion.”
   
“The Chief Student Council President <ref>I shortened this because it seemed strange to say the full title in a casual conversation. Also because it’s a pain to keep writing the full title.</ref> is so kind~”
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“The Chief President<ref>I shortened this because it seemed strange to say the full title in a casual conversation. Also because it’s a pain to keep writing the full title.</ref> is so kind~”
   
Listening on the surrounding conversations, Kazuha-senpai was grumbling “gunu” and making a bitter face. Kazuki was also a little surprised by the surrounding reactions and looked around restlessly, but then he chose not to mind and continued to talk.
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Listening on the surrounding’s conversations, Kazuha-senpai was grumbling “gunu” and making a bitter face. Kazuki too was a little surprised on the surrounding’s reaction and he looked around restlessly, but then he chose not to mind and continued the talk.
   
“Tha, that might be, but…there is no reason to eat together with you just because of that.”
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“Tha, that might be so but…there is no reason to eat together with you just because of that.”
   
“Senpai, didn’t you say before that my box lunch was delicious?”
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“Senpai, didn’t you say before that my lunch box was delicious?”
   
“Even the bread from the canteen is tasty.” Kazuha-senpai turned her back in a huff.
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“Even the bread from canteen is tasty.” Kazuha-senpai turned her back in a huff.
   
“Hohou…does senpai like bread that much? Cheap bread with cheap quality that has unbalanced nutrition. …Senpai’s desire to improve yourself as a swordsman is only to that degree in the end.”
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“Hohou…does senpai like bread that much? A cheap bread with cheap quality that has unbalanced nutrition. …Senpai’s desire to improve yourself as a swordsman is only to that degree in the end.”
   
The canteen of the Sword Division, because it wasn’t provided with a satisfactory budget until now by the Knight Academy, they only stocked up from vendors that could be called anything but first class. Of course this matter is also one of Kazuki and his group’s targets for reform.
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The canteen of the Sword Division, because it wasn’t provided with satisfactory budget until now by the Knight Academy, they only stocked up from vendors that couldn’t be said to be first class. Of course this matter is also one of Kazuki and his group’s target for reformation.
   
“Wha, what did you say!” Against Kazuki’s cheap provocation, Kazuha-senpai quickly turned back.
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“Wha, what did you say!” Against Kazuki’s cheap provocation, Kazuha-senpai turned back so quickly.
   
 
The moment she turned back, Kazuki took hold of Kazuha-senpai’s hand tightly,
 
The moment she turned back, Kazuki took hold of Kazuha-senpai’s hand tightly,
   
“I brought senpai a box lunch with a more balanced nutrition, so let’s eat together. I won’t overlook this aspect as your master in swordsmanship.”
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“I brought senpai a box lunch with a more balanced nutrition, so let’s eat together. I won’t overlook this aspect as your master in sword.”
   
From Kazuha-senpai, whose hand was caught, a heart mark came flying. However Kazuha-senpai still resisted.
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From Kazuha-senpai whose hand was caught, a heart mark came flying. However Kazuha-senpai still resisted some more.
   
 
“Do, don’t grip my hand! You are just too overbearing!!”
 
“Do, don’t grip my hand! You are just too overbearing!!”
   
“Hayashizaki-kun is so kind―!”
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“Hayashizaki-kun is so kind―!” “Don’t tell me you are refusing Chief President’s invitation, don’t be like that Tsukahara-san.”
“Don’t tell me you're refusing Chief President’s invitation, don’t be like that Tsukahara-san.”
 
   
The surrounding conversations were on Kazuki’s side. Kazuha-senpai was groaning “gununu”, and she continued to get dragged away by Kazuki. Just like that the both of them walked to the abandoned clubroom.
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The surrounding’s conversations were in Kazuki’s side. Kazuha-senpai was groaning “gununu”, and she continued to get dragged away by Kazuki. Just like that the both of them walked to the abandoned clubroom.
   
“Senpai, your positivity level just went up a little again you know?”
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“Senpai, your positivity level has just went up a little again you know?”
   
“You lie-! I don’t feel happy even a tiny little bit being treated like this―!!”
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“You lie-! I don’t feel happy for even a tiny little bit being treated like this―!!”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai kicked and struggled in vexation.
 
Kazuha-senpai kicked and struggled in vexation.
   
“Ah, senpai. I forgot to prepare chopsticks for two people. There's no other way except to feed senpai with ‘aa―n’ using my chopsticks then.”
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“Ah, senpai. I forgot to prepare the chopsticks for two people. There is no other way except to feed senpai with ‘aa―n’ using my chopstick then.”
   
 
“Youuu―!!”
 
“Youuu―!!”
   
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Of course there was no way he could devote all his time just following Kazuha-senpai around.
 
Of course there was no way he could devote all his time just following Kazuha-senpai around.
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Next they only need to print it and they would be in a situation where they could distribute it to the whole student body of the school.
 
Next they only need to print it and they would be in a situation where they could distribute it to the whole student body of the school.
   
The content was first about the introduction of Kazuki who became the Chief Student Council President and his declaration of opinion in the form of words, and also the introduction of the Magic Division and the Sword Division’s student councils. They also especially took pictures of the introduced characters and published it in the newspaper.
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The content was first about the introduction of Kazuki who became the Chief Student Council President and his declaration of opinion in the form of words, and also the introduction of the Magic Division and the Sword Division’s student councils. They also especially took picture of the introduced characters and published it in the newspaper.
   
And then the introduction of various policies that Kazuki thought he wanted to perform from now on, and also the collection of opinions from the students regarding his policies. It became that students could express their opinions by mailing it to the student council.
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And then the introduction of various policies that Kazuki thought he wanted to perform from now on, and also the collection of opinions from the students regarding his policy. It became that students could express their opinion by mailing it to the student council.
   
Furthermore, the newspaper also consolidated the fundamental introduction of the Magic Division and the Sword Division. It was because the Magic Division and the Sword Division didn’t know much at all about each other. What kind of system each Division had, what kind of classes they received, what kind of activity they spent their time on…the first edition of the newspaper became really varied in its content.
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Furthermore the newspaper also consolidated the fundamental introduction of the Magic Division and the Sword Division. It was because the Magic Division and the Sword Division didn’t know of most things about each other. What kind of system each Division had, what kind of classes they received, what kind of activity they spent their time with…the first edition of the newspaper became really varied in its content.
   
“Even though I wanted to write about battle articles if there was leftover space, or maybe a poetry corner.”
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“Even though I wanted to write about battle articles if there is leftover space, or maybe a poem corner.”
   
 
Mio pouted her lips and booed. Well, he had the feeling that he wanted to try and read such things though.
 
Mio pouted her lips and booed. Well, he had the feeling that he wanted to try and read such things though.
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Yumeno-san had the color of exhaustion peeking out a little in her expression, but she directed him a smiling face filled with a sense of accomplishment.
 
Yumeno-san had the color of exhaustion peeking out a little in her expression, but she directed him a smiling face filled with a sense of accomplishment.
   
“After that, for the time being, we're going to have Headmaster Amasaki do the last check including the design. Though I think there'll be no problem, because he had looked over the main manuscript.”
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“After that for the time being, we are going to have Headmaster Amasaki do the last check including the design. Though I think there will be no problem, because he had looked over the main manuscript.”
   
When Kazuki murmured that, the monitor that was attached on the wall of the student council room made a ‘putsun’ sound. It was receiving a signal and started automatically. On the monitor, Headmaster Amasaki’s face was projected.
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When Kazuki murmured that, the monitor that was attached on the wall of the student council room made a ‘putsun’ sound. It was receiving a signal and started automatically. In the monitor, Headmaster Amasaki’s face was projected.
   
 
This monitor was the hotline that connected the staff room with the student council room.
 
This monitor was the hotline that connected the staff room with the student council room.
   
{Hayashizaki Kazuki…not just you, but everyone else seems to be present. Well fine.}
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{Hayashizaki Kazuki…not just you but everyone else seems to be present. Well fine.}
   
“Headmaster? We're just finishing the academy newspaper here. We have also sent the data to the headmaster’s address but…do you have any business?”
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“Headmaster? We are just finishing the academy newspaper here. We have also sent the data to the headmaster’s address but…do you have any business?”
   
 
The time from when they had sent the newspaper data and him contacting right now was too fast for him to have finished checking already.
 
The time from when they had sent the newspaper data and him contacting right now was too fast for him to have finished checking already.
   
{This is something that I’m really not clear on either, so I’m getting right to the point…Board Chairman Takasugi had disappeared.}
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{This is something that I’m really not clear too so I’m going right to the point…the Board Chairman Takasugi had disappeared.}
   
 
“…What did you say? What is the meaning of this?”
 
“…What did you say? What is the meaning of this?”
   
{That’s also what I don't understand. He didn’t even leave a note of explanation, there is no trace of an incident. It’s just so sudden, that bastard’s figure vanished just like that. Even the guy’s family can't be contacted. There was a search request coming from the Knight Order.}
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{That’s why I also don’t get it. He didn’t even leave a note of explanation, there is no trace of an incident. It’s just so sudden, that bastard’s figure vanished just like that. Even the guy’s family cannot be contacted. There was a search request coming from the Knight Order.}
   
His family too, did that mean that the Takasugi brothers had also disappeared.
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His family too, did that mean that Takasugi brothers had also disappeared.
   
{Because of that, there will be a new Board Chairman coming in the near future. The front page for the newspaper’s next issue is decided already with this big scoop isn’t it? Hahhahha.}
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{Because of that there will be a new Board Chairman coming in the near future. The front page for the newspaper’s next issue is decided already with this big scoop isn’t it? Hahhahha.}
   
 
“…What hahhahha, this is not the time.” Kaguya-senpai was making an amazed face with all her heart.
 
“…What hahhahha, this is not the time.” Kaguya-senpai was making an amazed face with all her heart.
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Even so there was supposed to be some value left that could be used in the position of Board Chairman….
 
Even so there was supposed to be some value left that could be used in the position of Board Chairman….
   
In the end everything ended with their inability to grasp any proof of that man’s true colors.
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In the end it ended with their inability to grasp any proof of that man’s true colors.
   
In the end their excitement of finishing the newspaper was completely poured with cold water by this unknown uneasiness.
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In the end their exaltation of finishing the newspaper was poured with cold water completely by this unknown uneasiness.
   
 
===Part 6===
 
===Part 6===

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