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Cracks ran through the space of <Itsuki☆Channel>.
 
Cracks ran through the space of <Itsuki☆Channel>.
   
The light that was produced from those cracks repainted the area in the blink of an eye.
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The light that was produced from those cracks repainted the area in a blink of eye.
   
 
When they noticed, Kazuki, Kazuha-senpai and Kamimura-san had returned once again to Yomotsu Hirasaka.
 
When they noticed, Kazuki, Kazuha-senpai and Kamimura-san had returned once again to Yomotsu Hirasaka.
   
“…It’s better if we hurry through the return path. [Those guys] will be coming when they catch the scent of a living person.”
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“…It’s better if we hurry through the return path. ''Those guys'' will be coming when they sniff the scent of a living person.”
   
Kamimura-san said that and began running down the slope.
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Kamimura-san said that and began to run down the slope.
   
Feeling unrest in those words, both Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai complied with her.
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Feeling unrest in those words, Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai too complied to her words.
   
 
Without even needing to ask, they soon became aware of the meaning of those words.
 
Without even needing to ask, they soon became aware of the meaning of those words.
   
Kazuki and the others felt an eerie presence behind them. When they looked back while running, a distortion appeared in the space far beyond their back. Human shadows emerged out from there.
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Kazuki and others felt an eerie presence behind them. When they looked back while running, a distortion appeared in the space far beyond their back. Human shadows emerged out from there.
   
Old women were born from the space behind them. Not just one person. One after another countless old women were created. Those old women looked down the hill and sprinted with all their strength in their direction!
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Old women were born from the space behind them. Not just one person. One after another countless old women were created. Those old women looked down the hill and sprinted with all their strength in this direction!
   
“…That’s Yomotsu Shikome. The old women who leads the evil spirits that live in Yomotsu Hirasaka.”
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“…That’s Yomotsu Shikome. The old woman who leads the evil spirits that live in Yomotsu Hirasaka.”
   
 
Kamimura-san explained while desperately running without even looking back.
 
Kamimura-san explained while desperately running without even looking back.
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The space behind them was still distorting even further. What appeared from there was not only old women, even more small living things that looked like demons were created in swarms.
 
The space behind them was still distorting even further. What appeared from there was not only old women, even more small living things that looked like demons were created in swarms.
   
“That’s Yomotsu Ikusa. Evil spirits that are the soldiers of Yomotsu Hirasaka.”
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“That’s Yomotsu Ikusa. Evil spirit that is the battle soldiers of Yomotsu Hirasaka.”
   
 
Inside the darkness even more lights were arising in flickers *bachi bachi*, eight large globes of light scattering sparks burst out. These too were coming in pursuit of Kazuki and the others from behind by flying.
 
Inside the darkness even more lights were arising in flickers *bachi bachi*, eight large globes of light scattering sparks burst out. These too were coming in pursuit of Kazuki and the others from behind by flying.
   
“That’s Yakusano Ikadzuchi. Yomotsu welcomes the people that come to this world, however they didn’t allow people to leave. They are coming to chase you around and drag you back. If you are captured by those, you will get a serious sickness like magic intoxication and you won’t be able to wake up anymore in the real world.”
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“That’s Yakusano Ikadzuchi. Yomotsu welcome the people that come to this world, however they didn’t allow people to leave. They are coming to chase you around and drag you back. If you are captured by those, you will get a serious sickness like magic intoxication and you won’t be able to wake up anymore in the real world.”
   
Hearing those words Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai went ‘Hieee’ and panicked. The old women that came running at them at full power were especially scary.
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Hearing those words Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai went ‘Hieee’ and panicked. Especially the old women that came running at them at full power was scary.
   
 
“Why are they here?”
 
“Why are they here?”
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“When they think that humans of the present world are trying to go to a world of a different dimension, a suitable compensation is needed. Although I’m really sorry that Yatagarasu didn’t explain that at all and still invited you two here.”
 
“When they think that humans of the present world are trying to go to a world of a different dimension, a suitable compensation is needed. Although I’m really sorry that Yatagarasu didn’t explain that at all and still invited you two here.”
   
Kazuki and the others began to descend down Yomotsu Hirasaka at full speed.
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Kazuki and others began to descend down Yomotsu Hirasaka at full speed.
   
…Nevertheless this was a mysterious sensation. It had been like this since they came to the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave but their body senses felt awfully real, their consciousness felt far too clear compared to when they fell into magic intoxication and wandered around Astrum. The sensation of running down Yomotsu Hirasaka felt as if their physical bodies were really there.
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…Nevertheless this was a mysterious sensation. It had been like this since they came to the Gate of the Celestial Rock Cave but their body senses felt awfully real, their consciousness felt far too clear compared to when they fell into magic intoxication and wandered around Astrum. The sensation of running down Yomotsu Hirasaka felt as if their flesh body were really there.
   
Kazuki, who was still in the clothes they arrived here in, still had his katana attached on his hip. It looks like they could also turn back just like this and exchange blows with them.
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Kazuki who was still in his clothes just like when they arrived here still had his katana attached on his hips. It looks like they could also turn back just like this and exchange blows with them.
   
“…Now that you mentioned it, whatever happened to our real bodies right now? A fairly long time has passed, and isn’t it dangerous to leave our bodies lying around under the floor of the main temple?”
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“…Now that you mentioned it, whatever happened to our flesh body right now? A fairly long time has passed, and isn’t it dangerous to leave our body lying around under the floor of the main temple?”
   
 
“…The state of you two right now is not as simple as a separation between the mind and body…huff huff.”
 
“…The state of you two right now is not as simple as a separation between the mind and body…huff huff.”
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While running with her goth loli skirt trailing behind, Kamimura-san gave her response.
 
While running with her goth loli skirt trailing behind, Kamimura-san gave her response.
   
“Your state is completely different compared to when you fall into magic intoxication with your mind wandering inside Astrum. What is called Yomotsu Hirasaka is a tunnel that connects one world with another, but it also breaks down [an existence that belong under reality] like you and converts you into [an existence that belong under Astrum]. It’s something a little more complicated than just dragging your mind into Astrum …huff huff! There is no danger of yourself breaking up so it’s okay, you are the you that is properly living here right now. Un, understand?”
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“Your state is completely different compared to when you fall into magic intoxication with your mind wandering inside Astrum. What is called Yomotsu Hirasaka is a tunnel that connects one world with another, but it also breaks down [existence that belong under reality] like you and convert you into [existence that belong under Astrum]. It’s something a little more complicated than just dragging your mind into Astrum …huff huff! There is no danger of yourself breaking up so it’s okay, you are the you that is properly living here right now. Un, understand?”
   
Even though Kazuki understood...it still took a little time.
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Even though Kazuki understood but it took a little time.
   
“So Yomotsu Hirasaka is an entrance where people can enter the mental world’s Astrum altogether with their physical body?
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“So Yomotsu Hirasaka is an entrance where people can enter the mental world’s Astrum altogether with their flesh body.
   
“That comprehension is correct. What is called Astrum is a world where a maelstrom of colossal power that distorted reality whirled, [it’s defined by the mind], then such an entrance was created. And then the Divas of Japanese Mythology possessed the power to open and close this entrance…huff haa! Huff, when we are running desperately like this, don’t make me explain such complicated things…. I’m not like you two that are in the healthy faction after all…”
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“That comprehension is correct. What is called Astrum is a world where a maelstrom of colossal power that distorted reality whirled, ''it’s defined by the mind'', then such entrance was created. And then the Diva of Japanese Mythology possessed the power to open and close this entrance…huff haa! Huff, when we are running desperately like this, don’t make me explain such complicated thing…. I’m not like you two that are in the healthy faction after all…”
   
Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s breathing weren't ragged even a little bit, but Kamimura-san who just gave out a drawn-out explanation was breathing ragged and in pants. Kazuki lifted her up from the side with ‘hyoi’ and carried her in a princess carry.
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Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai’s breathing were not ragged for even a little bit, but Kamimura-san who just gave out a drawn-out explanation was breathing ragged and in pants. Kazuki lifted her up from the side with ‘hyoi’ and carried her in a princess carry.
   
 
“Sorry, I didn’t notice.”
 
“Sorry, I didn’t notice.”
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“Do- doing things like this and being kind to me without any reason at all is just…. Uuu, I cannot calm down. Are- are you okay? You are not tired? I’m not heavy?”
 
“Do- doing things like this and being kind to me without any reason at all is just…. Uuu, I cannot calm down. Are- are you okay? You are not tired? I’m not heavy?”
   
Kamimura-san was bewildered with a sobby expression.
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Kamimura-san was bewildered with sobby expression.
   
“You are so absurdly light that it makes me worried when I’m carrying you like this, Kamimura-san.”
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“You are absurdly light that it makes me worried when I’m carrying you like this, Kamimura-san.”
   
 
“Those guys chasing us from behind, are they strong if we fight them?”
 
“Those guys chasing us from behind, are they strong if we fight them?”
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Kazuha-senpai asked Kamimura-san from the side.
 
Kazuha-senpai asked Kamimura-san from the side.
   
“Their level is just a little stronger than your average Demon Beast. What is troublesome is their unlimited numbers that keep gushing forth. But it’s okay. Because the speed of your running is above theirs, like this they cannot overtake us. The distance between us and them is widening very quickly.”
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“Their level is just a little stronger than your average Demon Beast. What is troublesome is their unlimited numbers that keep gushing forth. But it’s okay. Because the speed of your running is above theirs, like this they cannot overtake us. The distances between us and them is widening very quickly.”
   
“That’s the case if there is no one that will become a hindrance to us.”
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“That’s the story if there is no one that will become a hindrance to us.”
   
Kazuki opened his mouth as if interrupting the wishful observation of Kamimura-san. …That was exactly it, just a wishful observation. Kazuki had already sensed the presence of someone ahead of them as they finished descending this hill.
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Kazuki opened his mouth as if interrupting the wishful observation of Kamimura-san. …That was exactly just a wishful observation. Kazuki had already sensed the presence of someone ahead of them as they finished descending this hill.
   
“That's true isn’t it, if the situation had developed like this, it will be more unnatural if they don’t ambush us here instead.”
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“That is so isn’t it, if the situation had developed like this, it will be more unnatural instead if they don’t ambush us here.”
   
 
“Kazuki…this presence…”
 
“Kazuki…this presence…”
   
Kazuha-senpai also noticed what was going on.
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Kazuha-senpai too noticed what was going on.
   
 
When they finished descending the hill―before the long silhouettes of three people emerged out on their path.
 
When they finished descending the hill―before the long silhouettes of three people emerged out on their path.
   
“…I, who am the King of Susanoo can sense it you know. It appears that you have inherited the authority of Amaterasu haven’t you, swordsman of the Hayashizaki-style! With this the both of us have become destined existences even further! The two people that are battling for the seat of the strongest swordsman, and then as the two people vying for the throne of the Japanese Mythology’s true King!”
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“…I who am the King of Susanoo can sense it you know. It appears that you have inherited the authority of Amaterasu haven’t you, swordsman of Hayashizaki-style! With this the both of us have become destined existences even further! The two people that are battling for the seat of the strongest swordsman, and then as the two people concerning for the throne of the Japanese Mythology’s true King!”
   
 
Aisu Ikousai! And the two waiting at her back, the possessed Takasugi brothers!!
 
Aisu Ikousai! And the two waiting at her back, the possessed Takasugi brothers!!
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“GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!”
 
“GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!”
   
The Takasugi brothers howled like beasts. While those howls were audible from below the slope it was like the damned inside hell―the brothers’ silhouettes distorted like jelly while yelling.
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The Takasugi brothers howled like a beast. While those howls were audible from below the slope it was like the damned inside hell―the brothers’ silhouettes distorted like jelly while yelling.
   
The silhouettes of the two [lost the shape of humans and they were melting away like dissolving mud.]
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The silhouettes of the two ''lost the shape of human and they were crumbling down like mud.''
   
What in the world? Sensing the unknown phenomenon from afar, Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai reflexively stopped. However the army of Yomotsu was approaching from behind. This was exactly like the situation of a tiger by the front gate and a wolf at the rear gate.
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What in the world? Sensing the unknown phenomenon from afar, Kazuki and Kazuha-senpai reflexively stopped in place. However the army of Yomotsu was approaching from behind. This was exactly like the situation of tiger by the front gate and wolf at the rear gate.
   
 
From Kazuki’s arms, Kamimura-san jumped down with a hop.
 
From Kazuki’s arms, Kamimura-san jumped down with a hop.
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“Will you be fine alone against that army?”
 
“Will you be fine alone against that army?”
   
“I have Anthropophobia <ref>literally "fear of people"</ref>, that’s why that kind of opponent is easier for me. Besides, as far as it goes I can use the power of Amaterasu too…so, I can fight a little.”
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“I have Anthropophobia<ref>literally "fear of people"</ref>, that’s why that kind of opponent is easier for me. Besides as far as it goes I too can use the power of Amaterasu…so I can fight a little.”
   
In front of the approaching Yomotsu army, the girl performed Access.
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In front of the approaching near Yomotsu army, the girl performed Access.
   
“…O aurora of blessing ascending to the heavens! Thy name is <Amaterasu Oomikami>! O light of affection wishing not for conflict, just for now reside in my hand, become the bow and arrow of flashes that pierces through everything!”
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“…O aurora of blessing ascending to the heaven! Thy name are <Amaterasu Oomikami>! O light of affection wishing not for conflict, just for now reside in my hand, become the bow and arrow of flash that pierce through everything!”
   
Kamimura-san’s goth loli clothes were wrapped by light and broke down, transforming into her Magic Dress.
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Kamimura-san’s goth loli clothes were wrapped by light and broke down, transforming into Magic Dress.
   
 
That Magic Dress’ appearance was like the sublime ancient outfit of Amaterasu’s working mode, it was simplified just like that for the sake of ease in battle.
 
That Magic Dress’ appearance was like the sublime ancient outfit of Amaterasu’s working mode, it was simplified just like that for the sake of ease in battle.
   
In what way would this girl fight―he was deeply interested but he had no composure left to ascertain that with his own eyes.
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In what way the girl would fight―he was deeply interested but he had no composure left to ascertain that with his own eyes.
   
Kazuki faced the group of three standing in his way.
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Kazuki faced the three person group standing in his way.
   
 
“GAAAAAAAAA…!” The Takasugi brothers were still screaming even now.
 
“GAAAAAAAAA…!” The Takasugi brothers were still screaming even now.
   
Losing their human shape, the two that had turned into a small mountain of muddy flesh began to swell and bubble as if something was going to be born from their insides. The swelling silhouettes of those two overlapped with each other and were becoming one giant ball of meat.
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Losing their human shape, the two that had turned into a small mountain of muddy flesh began to swell bubblingly as if something was going to be born from their inside. The swelling silhouettes of those two overlapped with each other and were becoming one giant meatball.
   
That was…by no means a phenomenon that could be explained by just merely calling them God’s reliant. In Yatagarasu’s explanation, the human was not supposed to break down completely that far.
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That was…by no means a phenomenon that could be explained just by a mere word of God’s reliant. In Yatagarasu’s explanation, the human was not supposed to break down completely until that far.
   
Ikousai who stood on the side carelessly said.
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Ikousai who stood in the side carelessly said.
   
“Looks like they wanted strength so much didn’t they? …Separate from Take Mikadzuchi and Take Minakata that turned them into God’s reliant, they still called for even more from somewhere. That is something that gathers the extreme terror of people in Japanese Mythology, the most ominous [Mythology’s undulation]…it’s fine to see, let’s make you all know about its name as well! This is that…Yamata no Orochi!!”
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“Looks like they wanted strength so much don’t they? …Separate from Take Mikadzuchi and Take Minakata that turned them into God’s reliant, they still called for even more from somewhere. That is something that gather the extreme terror of people in Japanese Mythology, the most ominous [Mythology’s undulation]…it’s fine to see, let’s make you all know too about its name! This is that…Yamato no Orochi!!”
   
 
“AAAAAAAAAA-!!!”
 
“AAAAAAAAAA-!!!”
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The gigantic pile of flesh that lost its face and also its mouth raised a noticeably louder scream even though it had no mouth.
 
The gigantic pile of flesh that lost its face and also its mouth raised a noticeably louder scream even though it had no mouth.
   
From the gigantic lump of flesh, *ZUBOZUBOZUBO!* eight long necks and a tail extended out. The ball of meat was divided into eight and lengthened out twistingly. Its surface was changing into scales emitting black light―transforming into a giant snake with eight heads entangling with each other. It completely blocked the entire width of the hill road, a monster possessing the height of a tall building was towering there.
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From the gigantic lump of flesh, *ZUBOZUBOZUBO!* eight long necks and a tail extended out. The meatball was divided into eight and lengthened out twistingly. Its surface was changing into scales emitting black light―transforming into a giant snake with eight heads entangling with each other. It completely blocked the entire width of the hill road, a monster possessing the height like a building was towering there.
   
Yamata no Orochi―on the summit of the swaying eight necks, bright red eyes glinted bright and glared at them. It looked like there was not even a fragment of human personality left inside any more. The Takasugi brothers had already ceased to exist.
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Yamata no Orochi―on the summit of the swaying eight necks, bright red eyes glinted bright and glared at them. Looked like there was not even a fragment of human personality left already inside. Takasugi brothers had become completely inexistent already.
   
“…Wasn’t Yamata no Orochi supposed to be exterminated by Susanoo? How can it become possible for it to join hands with Susanoo?”
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“…Wasn’t Yamato no Orochi supposed to be exterminated by Susanoo? How can it become possible for it to join hands with Susanoo?”
   
 
The Shrine Maiden that had even more detailed knowledge of Japanese Mythology than Kazuki, Kazuha-senpai murmured.
 
The Shrine Maiden that had even more detailed knowledge of Japanese Mythology than Kazuki, Kazuha-senpai murmured.
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The Celebration King that stood back to back with them, Kamimura-san answered that question.
 
The Celebration King that stood back to back with them, Kamimura-san answered that question.
   
“The Susanoo right now is not [the person that suppresses the country] talked about inside the Mythology, but he became [the person that disturbs the suppression]. Susanoo, who originally possesses the rough and wild element of <storm>, has some aspects in common with Yamata no Orochi that is the huge personification of the nature’s flood.”
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“The Susanoo right now is not [the person that suppress the country] talked about inside the Mythology but he became [the person that disturbs the suppression]. Susanoo who originally possesses the rough and wild element of <storm> has some aspects in common with Yamato no Orochi that is the huge personification of the nature’s flood.”
   
 
“…I see.” While nodding, Kazuha-senpai took a step forward.
 
“…I see.” While nodding, Kazuha-senpai took a step forward.
   
“Kazuki, I’ll take on that guy. …I also wanted to become strong for a long time, I continue to think of wanting to become strong even now. However…surely not like that.”
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“Kazuki, I’ll take on that guy. …I too want to become strong for a long time, I continue to think of wanting to become strong until now. However…surely not like that.”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai stood in front of the monster and leaked out a pained voice.
 
Kazuha-senpai stood in front of the monster and leaked out a pained voice.
   
What was in front of her was an opponent that she could sympathize with, yet how could they completely mistake their path in an unthinkable direction like this? The pain of that time that couldn’t be agreed with. Just like what Kazuki felt when he stood in front of Kaya….
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What was in front of her was an opponent that she could sympathize with, yet why could they completely mistake their path in an unthinkable direction like this? The pain of that time that couldn’t be agreed with. Just like what Kazuki felt when he stood in front of Kaya….
   
 
“Ahaha! I don’t have any intention of sympathizing with these kinds of guys at all, but I too can sympathize! What is called strength is something to use for one’s own sake! It only has worth when used for the sake of persisting in one’s own self and aesthetic! But like this…ahhahaha! What a totally pathetic pair of brothers!!”
 
“Ahaha! I don’t have any intention of sympathizing with these kinds of guys at all, but I too can sympathize! What is called strength is something to use for one’s own sake! It only has worth when used for the sake of persisting in one’s own self and aesthetic! But like this…ahhahaha! What a totally pathetic pair of brothers!!”
   
Aisu Ikousai laughed loudly at her own former comrades that sought strength and became a monster.
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Aisu Ikousai laughed loudly at her own former comrades that seek for strength and became a monster.
   
…She is wrong. What is called strength is not for one’s own sake, it was something for the sake of protecting one’s important people.
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…She is wrong. What is called strength is not for one’s own sake, it was something for the sake of protecting one’s important person.
   
 
“Kazuha-senpai…please take care of that monster. I’ll…settle my debt with her!”
 
“Kazuha-senpai…please take care of that monster. I’ll…settle my debt with her!”
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Kazuki glared at Ikousai. As if answering that, Ikousai was enveloped with the light of Access.
 
Kazuki glared at Ikousai. As if answering that, Ikousai was enveloped with the light of Access.
   
“I’m going full power right from the start here, this is not just some sport between swordsmen anymore. …O honored god of fury descending from the sky, establish forth the development of unheard-of troubles right here! Thy honored name is <Susanoo no-Mikoto>! Reside in my body, rage following your violent emotions!!”
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“I’m going full power right from the start here, this is not just some sport between swordsmen anymore. …O honored god of fury descending down from the sky, establish forth the development of unheard-of troubles right here! Thy honored name is <Susanoo no-Mikoto>! Reside in my body, rage following your violent emotion!!”
   
Aisu Ikousai's seductive kimono broke down into Prima Material, turning into a jet black hakama with tight sleeves―her appearance changed into a Magic Dress based on the clothing of ancient Yamato. Her original atmosphere that was like a prostitute's underwent a complete change.
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Aisu Ikousai's seductive kimono broke down into Prima Material, turning into a jet black hakama with tight sleeve―her appearance changed into Magic Dress based on the clothing of ancient Yamato. Her original atmosphere that was like a prostitute underwent a complete change.
   
Brave warrior: that was the personification of storms― Susanoo. And the one that was contracted to her, a magic swordsman.
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Brave warrior: that was the personification of storm― Susanoo. And the one that was contracted to her, a magic swordsman.
   
 
“Come, the first act where we fussed over only swords is over! Let’s open the curtain of the second act here while letting our Stigmata shine!!”
 
“Come, the first act where we fussed over only swords is over! Let’s open the curtain of the second act here while letting our Stigmata shine!!”
   
Aisu Ikousai smoothly drew her katana and directed its tip at Kazuki.
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Aisu Ikousai smoothly drew out her katana and directed its tip at Kazuki.
   
 
===Part 2===
 
===Part 2===

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