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Kazuha-senpai welcomed him happily.
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Kazuha-senpai gave him a welcome happily.
   
 
Both of them faced each other in the central fountain plaza that separated the Magic Division and the Sword Division.
 
Both of them faced each other in the central fountain plaza that separated the Magic Division and the Sword Division.
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The Sword Division was once destroyed from the attack of the Quad Core Magica, but while Kazuki and the others were fighting at west Japan, the reconstruction had been finished.
 
The Sword Division was once destroyed from the attack of the Quad Core Magica, but while Kazuki and the others were fighting at west Japan, the reconstruction had been finished.
   
Not only was it built back to how it was before, its facility was also expanded. The Sword Division’s facilities were inferior in various aspects compared to the Magic Division, but the disparity had begun to be negated.
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Not only it was built back to how it was before, its facility was also expanded. The Sword Division’s facilities were inferior in various aspects compared to the Magic Division, but the disparity had begun to be negated.
   
 
The opinion of Kazuki and Headmaster Amasaki’s opinion coincided with each other and they were bringing the Sword Division and the Magic Division closer to equality little by little.
 
The opinion of Kazuki and Headmaster Amasaki’s opinion coincided with each other and they were bringing the Sword Division and the Magic Division closer to equality little by little.
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Crossing the bridge above the pond that was filled with floating lotus flower, the both of them were walking following the path that was dotted with stepping stones and stretching up and down the artificial hills in the garden. In contrast with the Magic Division’s western garden that was divided orderly, the Sword Division’s Japanese garden imitated the nature in a jumble with deep charm. Whichever one that he walked, both garden had a very good atmosphere.
 
Crossing the bridge above the pond that was filled with floating lotus flower, the both of them were walking following the path that was dotted with stepping stones and stretching up and down the artificial hills in the garden. In contrast with the Magic Division’s western garden that was divided orderly, the Sword Division’s Japanese garden imitated the nature in a jumble with deep charm. Whichever one that he walked, both garden had a very good atmosphere.
   
“If senpai wants, we can link arms like the time in Ise, it will be better like that.”
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“If senpai want, we can link arms like the time in Ise, it will be better like that.”
   
 
While feeling the warmth of Kazuha-senpai’s palm, Kazuki talked with a light tone.
 
While feeling the warmth of Kazuha-senpai’s palm, Kazuki talked with a light tone.
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After Kazuki pointed that out, Kazuha-senpai groaned “Uu~” but she didn’t try to separate their hands.
 
After Kazuki pointed that out, Kazuha-senpai groaned “Uu~” but she didn’t try to separate their hands.
   
And then actually, while they were walking the students of the Sword Division that happened to pass by them sporadically were throwing their gaze at them and gossiping in whispers.
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And then actually, while they were walking the students of the Sword Division that happened to pass them through sporadically were throwing their gaze at this side and gossiping in whispers.
   
 
“Ah, it’s the Chief President and Tsukahara-san” “There is a rumor that their relation is good but, looks like it’s true” “Tsukahara-san, recently she became bright didn’t she” “Feels like she became easy to talk with” “A man really changes a woman eh~”
 
“Ah, it’s the Chief President and Tsukahara-san” “There is a rumor that their relation is good but, looks like it’s true” “Tsukahara-san, recently she became bright didn’t she” “Feels like she became easy to talk with” “A man really changes a woman eh~”
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“…Right. I got it, let’s go.”
 
“…Right. I got it, let’s go.”
   
Kazuha-senpai slapped her face with both her hand *PAN!* vigorously. By doing that she tightened her expression, then she took Kazuki’s hand and led him out from behind the school building.
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Kazuha-senpai slapped her face with both her hand *PAN!* vigorously. By dong that she tightened her expression, then she took Kazuki’s hand and led him out from behind the school building.
   
 
Once again, the tour was restarted while the students at their surrounding bantered about them.
 
Once again, the tour was restarted while the students at their surrounding bantered about them.
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Kazuha-senpai talked while pointing at a building that looked like a Japanese castle with tiled roof stacked like layers. When he came here before there was no high-rise building like this, it was supposed to be just a building in the style of row houses before.
 
Kazuha-senpai talked while pointing at a building that looked like a Japanese castle with tiled roof stacked like layers. When he came here before there was no high-rise building like this, it was supposed to be just a building in the style of row houses before.
   
“It was reconstructed gorgeously like a castle. Everyone in the Sword Division is grateful to you for your stance of equality with the Magic Division. The rooms and the like turned out really spacious.”
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“It was reconstructed gorgeously like a castle. Everyone in the Sword Division is grateful to you for your stance of equality with the Magic Division. The room and the like turned out really spacious.”
   
 
Kazuha-senpai opened her hands wide and made a gesture, conveying her joy to Kazuki.
 
Kazuha-senpai opened her hands wide and made a gesture, conveying her joy to Kazuki.
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―However gazes that could be said to be filled with good will were mixed among those.
 
―However gazes that could be said to be filled with good will were mixed among those.
   
He could also feel some gazes that contained slight thorn.
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He could also feel sometimes gazes that contained slight thorn.
   
 
‘What’s with that’, Kazuki tilted his head. Perhaps it was not as simple as Kazuha-senpai said where all the students of the Sword Division gave their support to Kazuki.
 
‘What’s with that’, Kazuki tilted his head. Perhaps it was not as simple as Kazuha-senpai said where all the students of the Sword Division gave their support to Kazuki.
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Their destination was a farm in the rural area secluded from the capital city area.
 
Their destination was a farm in the rural area secluded from the capital city area.
   
It was named <Animal Contact Farm>.
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It was called with name <Animal Contact Farm>.
   
 
It was a facility not with the objective of raising animals for livestock but for sightseeing.
 
It was a facility not with the objective of raising animals for livestock but for sightseeing.
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Kazuki pulled her hand and led her to the stable inside the farm.
 
Kazuki pulled her hand and led her to the stable inside the farm.
   
It was a horse. The horse that entered inside the stable noticed Kazuki and Kaguya-senpai’s approach and it protruded its unexpected large face outside with a neigh. “Dohyaa~” Kaguya-senpai raised a strange voice.
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It was a horse. The horse that was entered inside the stable noticed Kazuki and Kaguya-senpai’s approach and it protruded its unexpected large face outside with a neigh. “Dohyaa~” Kaguya-senpai raised a strange voice.
   
 
A female caretaker handed Kazuki and Kaguya-senpai some boots.
 
A female caretaker handed Kazuki and Kaguya-senpai some boots.
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The magicians that were awakened in this present era could protect their body with the defensive magic power.
 
The magicians that were awakened in this present era could protect their body with the defensive magic power.
   
Because of that all kind of insurance and warranty were unneeded and in exchange service industry in the form of leisure with cheap price multiplied. It was limited to service for those in the age range between the later half of the tens until the twenties when they had vigorous magic power.
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Because of that all kind of insurance and warranty went unneeded and in exchange service industry in the form of leisure with cheap price multiplied. It was limited to service for those in the age range between the later half of the tens until the twenties when they had vigorous magic power.
   
 
Kazuki who had limited pocket money was of course choosing to reserve in this form.
 
Kazuki who had limited pocket money was of course choosing to reserve in this form.
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That white mantel faded away as it was standing out inside the darkness of the night.
 
That white mantel faded away as it was standing out inside the darkness of the night.
   
“My my, how strict. After all, Italia is a country that is like an extremely overbearing wife. …Well, you who is still staying as someone that cannot accomplish what you should do as a King and instead is amusing yourself with a lady are also at fault here. By the way, I wonder if I can hear your name once more from your own mouth.”
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“My my, how strict. After all, Itailia is a country that is like an extremely overbearing wife. …Well, you who is still staying as someone that cannot accomplish what you should do as a King and instead is amusing yourself with a lady are also at fault here. By the way, I wonder if I can hear your name once more from your own mouth.”
   
 
After Arthur saw off Regina, he turned back to Kazuki and smiled.
 
After Arthur saw off Regina, he turned back to Kazuki and smiled.
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Arthur presented one of his hand looking for a handshake.
 
Arthur presented one of his hand looking for a handshake.
   
“Being in the middle of your growth is not something to be embarrassed about. Being modest even while acting dignified, it’s evidently just like the samurai that I heard in legend. I’m looking forward to you becoming a worthy opponent for me.”
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“Being in the middle of your growth is not something to be embarrassed about. Being modest even while acting dignified, it’s evidently just like the samurai that I heard in legend. I’m looking forward that you can become a worthy opponent of me.”
   
 
Kazuki accepted his hand and squeezed back. There was no brawny place in that hand at all, it was a smooth hand like a porcelain. …Is this really a hand of a man?
 
Kazuki accepted his hand and squeezed back. There was no brawny place in that hand at all, it was a smooth hand like a porcelain. …Is this really a hand of a man?

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