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Yō was lying on the ground, but she suddenly raised her head.
 
Yō was lying on the ground, but she suddenly raised her head.
   
There was no change in her surroundings, the blizzard painted everything pure white. On the other side of the blizzard the twin-headed dragons were still most likely nearing their target, causing loud tremors in the process. However, it was odd. The presence of the twin-headed dragons could be felt this close, yet they still haven't started attacking the refugees.
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There was no change in her surroundings, the blizzard painted everything a pure white. On the other side of the blizzard, the twin-headed dragons were still most likely nearing their target, causing loud tremors in the process. However, it was odd. The presence of the twin-headed dragons could be felt this close, yet they have not started their attack on the refugees.
   
To Yō, who knew very well how ferocious those twin-headed dragons were, this was clearly unnatural.
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It was clear to Yō, who knew very well how aggressive those twin-headed dragons were, that this was clearly unnatural.
   
 
As if they were hindered by a giant wall. Just as this thought formed in Yō's mind ——
 
As if they were hindered by a giant wall. Just as this thought formed in Yō's mind ——
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"Grraaaarghhh!!!"
 
"Grraaaarghhh!!!"
   
Maxwell let out a scream from the shock of the sudden attack. Not having anticipated being on the receiving end of an attack, Maxwell took the blows of the tempest and after a few magnificent spins, impacted the ground.
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Maxwell let out a scream from the shock of the sudden attack. Not having anticipated being on the receiving end of an attack, Maxwell took the blows of the tempest and after a few magnificent spins, smashed into the ground.
   
 
However that was not the end of it.
 
However that was not the end of it.
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"Wh-......who......!?"
 
"Wh-......who......!?"
   
At first everyone thought the twin-headed dragons started attacking.
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At first everyone thought that those were the attacks of the twin-headed dragons.
   
 
However Maxwell was attacked by focused flashes of tempest.
 
However Maxwell was attacked by focused flashes of tempest.
   
Similar, but different to the attacks of the twin-headed dragon before. When the second war cry echoed, only Yō noticed that it wasn't from the twin-headed dragons.
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They were similar, but different to the attacks of the twin-headed dragon she had fought before. It was only when the second war cry echoed, that Yō noticed the attacks to be from someone other than the twin-headed dragons.
   
 
"This voice...... it's not from a twin-headed dragon"
 
"This voice...... it's not from a twin-headed dragon"

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