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It is a mysterious mythical beast which has come to appear occasionally from the ruins where the Drag-Rides were discovered about ten years ago.
 
It is a mysterious mythical beast which has come to appear occasionally from the ruins where the Drag-Rides were discovered about ten years ago.
   
There exists countless species and it was said that they would indiscriminately attack humans and animals once they came across them.
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There exists countless species and it was said that they would indiscriminately attack humans and animals once they come across them.
   
What separated them from common beasts was their strength, their mysterious mode of life and their unique abilities.
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What separated them from common beasts were their strength, their mysterious mode of life and their unique abilities.
   
 
Therefore, the majority of powerful nations placed forts, barriers and fort cities near the several ruins, and deployed Drag-Knights in preparation for unexpected circumstances.
 
Therefore, the majority of powerful nations placed forts, barriers and fort cities near the several ruins, and deployed Drag-Knights in preparation for unexpected circumstances.
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“W-Why is an Abyss suddenly appearing in a place like this––?!”
 
“W-Why is an Abyss suddenly appearing in a place like this––?!”
   
“Is that… a Gargoyle type recorded in the books!? Why didn’t the alarm ring!?”
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“Is that…, a Gargoyle type recorded in the books!? Why didn’t the alarm ring!?”
   
 
“Everyone, calm down! Lower-class students, do not draw your Sword Devices! Gather without panicking and take shelter in the school building!”
 
“Everyone, calm down! Lower-class students, do not draw your Sword Devices! Gather without panicking and take shelter in the school building!”
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Besides Officer Candidate Drag-Knights, there were very few students who had combat experience.
 
Besides Officer Candidate Drag-Knights, there were very few students who had combat experience.
   
Though the appearance rate of an Abyss was quite low, they are basically several times stronger than Drag-Knights.
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Though the appearance rate of an Abyss is quite low, they are basically several times stronger than Drag-Knights.
   
 
Furthermore, since they originally flew from the ruins, which were dozens of kilometers away from the Fort City, a notification of its appearance would generally come from the forts or barriers.
 
Furthermore, since they originally flew from the ruins, which were dozens of kilometers away from the Fort City, a notification of its appearance would generally come from the forts or barriers.
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In addition, if it happened that Drag-Rides were deployed in crowded areas like the audience seats, it was a foregone conclusion that the deployment would be delayed by the summons.
 
In addition, if it happened that Drag-Rides were deployed in crowded areas like the audience seats, it was a foregone conclusion that the deployment would be delayed by the summons.
   
When suddenly coming across a wild beast in a downtown, one would not have the time to leisurely load bullets in a gun in front of the beast.
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When suddenly coming across a wild beast in a downtown, one could not have time to leisurely load bullets in a gun in front of the beast.
   
 
Even the eight student Drag-Knights who were deployed to stretch the barrier of the audience seats were completely petrified in face of this sudden occurrence.
 
Even the eight student Drag-Knights who were deployed to stretch the barrier of the audience seats were completely petrified in face of this sudden occurrence.
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“What on earth happened…?”
 
“What on earth happened…?”
   
A female instructor, Raigree stared at the sky while gathering the students and put her hand on the Sword Device at her waist.
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A female instructor, Raigree stared at the sky while gathering the students and put her hand on the Sword Device to her waist.
   
 
The habits of an Abyss are quite similar to that of a carnivore.
 
The habits of an Abyss are quite similar to that of a carnivore.

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