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The interior design was not so different from Claire's room. However, Ellis' room had been neatly arranged.
 
The interior design was not so different from Claire's room. However, Ellis' room had been neatly arranged.
   
"You have tidied up nicely. That's just like the capable Ellis<!--ideally "hardworker Ellis" captures the sentence structure of the original text-->."
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"You have nicely tidied up. That's just like capable Ellis<!--ideally "hardworker Ellis" captures the sentence structure of the original text-->."
   
 
"Ahh, that's because if I don't tidy up, my overly-serious roommate will get angry."
 
"Ahh, that's because if I don't tidy up, my overly-serious roommate will get angry."
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"Y-You can say that. It's somewhat my hobby."
 
"Y-You can say that. It's somewhat my hobby."
   
Ellis was acting bashfully, like she was a bit embarrassed.
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Ellis was acting bashful like she was a bit embarrassed.
   
 
It was a sponge cake sprinkled with black tea powder on the surface. It had a simple taste since its sweetness was mild.
 
It was a sponge cake sprinkled with black tea powder on the surface. It had a simple taste since its sweetness was mild.
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As she wasn't wearing her armor, her quivering large breasts were being highlighted more than usual.
 
As she wasn't wearing her armor, her quivering large breasts were being highlighted more than usual.
   
Kamito was at a lost for words—
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Kamito was lost for words—
   
 
Ellis whispered with a seemingly uneasy expression.
 
Ellis whispered with a seemingly uneasy expression.
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Nevertheless—
 
Nevertheless—
   
"...I beg you. Spare me that way of calling me."
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"...I beg you. Spare me that way of calling."
   
 
Kamito groaned with a deadpan look.
 
Kamito groaned with a deadpan look.
   
"Um, even so, those two had said that this is the official way of calling you."
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"Um, even so, those two had said that this is the official way of calling."
   
 
"No, because you have been fooled, you know?"
 
"No, because you have been fooled, you know?"
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Kamito grumbled as he chewed on a cheese cutlet of one mouth-size.
 
Kamito grumbled as he chewed on a cheese cutlet of one mouth-size.
   
It had a crunchy batter that used the first-class wheat flour. The highest grade cheese, which was placed between the meat, was delicious as it melted on top of his tongue.
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It had a crunchy batter that used the first-class wheat flour. The highest grade cheese, which was placed between the meat, was delicious like it melted on top of his tongue.
   
 
"...Delicious. Normally delicious."
 
"...Delicious. Normally delicious."
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"Mm, it's normal?..."
 
"Mm, it's normal?..."
   
Ellis pouted her lips, seemingly frustrated.
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Ellis pouted her lips seemingly frustrated.
   
 
"I'm praising you. It's difficult to make normal things normally delicious."
 
"I'm praising you. It's difficult to make normal things normally delicious."
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"...Ahh, delicious."
 
"...Ahh, delicious."
   
Upon nodding once again, Ellis lightly giggled, seemingly delighted.
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Upon nodding once again, Ellis lightly giggled seemingly delighted.
   
 
(...Hmm. This is, as expected, a little embarrassing.)
 
(...Hmm. This is, as expected, a little embarrassing.)
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"Yes, it's not like we're blood related. She was once also expected to become a future {{Furigana|Twelve Knight Commander|Numbers|margin=12}} candidate, but— after she was defeated by that Ren Ashbell in the first match at the Blade Dance three years ago, that story had also disappeared."
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"Yes, it's not like we're blood related. She was once also expected as the future {{Furigana|Twelve Knight Commander|Numbers|margin=12}} candidate, but— after she was defeated by that Ren Ashbell in the first match at the Blade Dance three years ago, that story had also disappeared."
   
 
"...!?"
 
"...!?"
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She was a girl with a beautiful face of ice and beautiful blonde hair.
 
She was a girl with a beautiful face of ice and beautiful blonde hair.
   
"...My sister is like the person who embodied the image of the knight that I try to idealize."
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"...My sister is like the person, who embodied the image of the knight that I try to idealize."
   
 
Ellis exhaled a white breath as she muttered.
 
Ellis exhaled a white breath as she muttered.
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As a result of the attack incident the other day, including Ellis' two teammates, seven knights were forced to withdraw from the Sylphid Knights. The Sylphid Knights, which had lost a third of its members, was now in a state that it was not functioning normally.
 
As a result of the attack incident the other day, including Ellis' two teammates, seven knights were forced to withdraw from the Sylphid Knights. The Sylphid Knights, which had lost a third of its members, was now in a state that it was not functioning normally.
   
Indeed, as an acquaintance and besides as someone whose ability as an elementalist she also understood, Kamito could understand the reason she wanted to scout him.
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Indeed, as an acquaintance and besides someone whose ability as an elementalist she also understood, Kamito could understand the reason she wanted to scout him.
   
"Of course, I won't say it's for free. As a member of the Knights, you'll be paid a proper salary."
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"Of course, I won't say it's for free. As a member of the Knights, you'll be paid proper salary."
   
 
"...Why me? If you set up recruitment, won't there be girls applying?"
 
"...Why me? If you set up recruitment, won't there be girls applying?"
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However, that trust was swaying now.
 
However, that trust was swaying now.
   
Besides, her teammates and comrades who had always kept supporting her.
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Besides, her teammates and comrades who had always kept supporting.
   
 
Rakka and Reishia were also not present now.
 
Rakka and Reishia were also not present now.
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Being covered by her knights shoulder plate was the girl's slender shoulders.
 
Being covered by her knights shoulder plate was the girl's slender shoulders.
   
How much of a heavy pressure was she carrying on those shoulders of hers—
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How much heavy pressure was she carrying on those shoulders of hers—
   
 
"...The truth is I'm afraid."
 
"...The truth is I'm afraid."
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Then, Kamito noticed.
 
Then, Kamito noticed.
   
Claire's fingertips that were grabbing his arm were trembling bit by bit.
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Claire's fingertips grabbing his arm were trembling bit by bit.
   
 
"...I see, you're on Ellis' side again."
 
"...I see, you're on Ellis' side again."

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