Editing Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume3 Chapter4

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(I-It's of course out of obligation. The chocolate that I'll give him out of obligation.)
 
(I-It's of course out of obligation. The chocolate that I'll give him out of obligation.)
   
The practicing had effect, as she had been gradually been able to make them well.
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The practicing had effect, as she had been gradually being able to make them well.
   
 
Although she had stopped making a large amount of cinders, it should be good enough for her to be praised.
 
Although she had stopped making a large amount of cinders, it should be good enough for her to be praised.
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Claire also didn't clearly understand why she got such feelings.
 
Claire also didn't clearly understand why she got such feelings.
   
Her current feelings were almost like the smoldering fire of a hearth.
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Her current feelings were almost like the smoldering fire of a fireplace.
   
 
...These weren't Claire Rouge's flames.
 
...These weren't Claire Rouge's flames.

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