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"....I am still alive."
 
"....I am still alive."
   
Hisui, lying on the bed, murmured to himself.
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Hisui, lying on the bed, murmurs to himself.
   
He got up from the sick bed, and looked out of the window; it looked like daylight outside.
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He gets up from the sick bed, and looks out of the window; it look like daylight outside.
   
 
"Are you awake?"
 
"Are you awake?"
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"Please say thank you to that..."
 
"Please say thank you to that..."
   
Eruru looked at Rushella, who was sleeping by Hisui's bedside.
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Eruru looks at Rushella, who is sleeping by Hisui's bedside.
   
Looked like she was keeping Hisui company, her face was a bit pallid.
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Looks like she is keeping Hisui company, her face is a bit pallid.
   
 
"You are AB/Rh- type, which the Blood Bank doesn't have much in storage, so she decided to donate her blood to you. The two of you are the same type."
 
"You are AB/Rh- type, which the Blood Bank doesn't have much in storage, so she decided to donate her blood to you. The two of you are the same type."
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"But...receiving a vampire's blood, you know what will happen right? It is likely you will become an undead abomination."
 
"But...receiving a vampire's blood, you know what will happen right? It is likely you will become an undead abomination."
   
"True...we have considered the situation, but she refused to listen...all she wanted was to save your life. Also, [your body] shouldn't have any problems, right? In reality there is no issue?"
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"True...we have considered the situation, but she refused to listen...all she wanted is to save your life. Also, [your body] shouldn't have any problems, right? In reality there is no issue?"
   
 
"What do you think I am?"
 
"What do you think I am?"
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"But?"
 
"But?"
   
Holding his chest, Hisui smiled.
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Holding his chest, Hisui smiles.
   
 
"Miraluka paid with her life, to make my heart beat again. To let a heart beat again after it stopped, letting herself turn into ash."
 
"Miraluka paid with her life, to make my heart beat again. To let a heart beat again after it stopped, letting herself turn into ash."
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"It is so mysterious. It is disappointing I could not dissect you."
 
"It is so mysterious. It is disappointing I could not dissect you."
   
Eruru whispered without any expression. To be honest, she could do something that frightening.
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Eruru whispers without any expression. To be honest, she could do something that frightening.
   
 
"I investigated that Holy Sword of yours, it seem to be a treasure. One could say it is the Bane of all Vampires. The relative who left it with you..."
 
"I investigated that Holy Sword of yours, it seem to be a treasure. One could say it is the Bane of all Vampires. The relative who left it with you..."
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"Thank you."
 
"Thank you."
   
The half vampire's face turned red and left the sickroom. At the same time, Rushella woke up.
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The half vampire's face turned red and left the sickroom. At the same time, Rushella wakes up.
   
 
"You...are you ok?"
 
"You...are you ok?"
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"Ah, um...should be..."
 
"Ah, um...should be..."
   
Hisui mumbled, and Rushella flipped herself on to the bed, sitting right next to him.
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Hisui mumbles, and Rushella flip herself on to the bed, sitting right next to him.
   
"Really...no problem? It was clear you lost so much blood."
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"Really...no problem? It is clear you lost so much blood."
   
 
"Eh, why are you worrying so much?"
 
"Eh, why are you worrying so much?"
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"Not allowed to die."
 
"Not allowed to die."
   
She spat those out, word by word. Her scarlet eyes pierced his.
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She spit those out, word by word. Her scarlet eyes piercing his.
   
 
"Without my permission, you are not allowed to die. Even your death belongs to me."
 
"Without my permission, you are not allowed to die. Even your death belongs to me."
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"Ok Ok..."
 
"Ok Ok..."
   
Even though he gave a perfunctory reply, but Rushella still came close with a hug, then brought her eyes to meet Hisui's.
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Even though he gives a perfunctory reply, but Rushella still comes close with a hug, then brings her eyes to meet Hisui's.
   
 
"You don't want to?"
 
"You don't want to?"
   
It is not like I don't want to... that thought came unbidden. But Hisui still managed to swallow it down. One cannot just easily stop being human.
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It is not like I don't want to...that thought came unbidden. But Hisui still manages to swallow it down. One cannot just easily stop being human.
   
Because Rushella refused to move her gaze away, Hisui could only give her a concise and honest answer.
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Because Rushella refused to move her gaze away, Hisui could only give her a conscious and honest answer.
   
"I will help you, find out who you are.... investigate your past; I will definitely help."
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"I will help you, find out who you are....investigate your past; I will definitely help."
   
 
"Also have to add my dietary requirement as well. We did agree, right?"
 
"Also have to add my dietary requirement as well. We did agree, right?"
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"....Yes yes, ah, but you have to hold your end of the bargain as well, don't suck anyone else's blood."
 
"....Yes yes, ah, but you have to hold your end of the bargain as well, don't suck anyone else's blood."
   
"I know. I... know what it is like to have your blood sucked out. I can understand."
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"I know. I...know what is like to have your blood sucked out. I can understand."
   
 
"....It is so."
 
"....It is so."
   
"Also, you addressed me by name right? Even though you are a servant."
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"Also, you address me by name right? Even though you are a servant."
   
 
"That...that was forced by the situation."
 
"That...that was forced by the situation."
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Ignoring the helpless Hisui, Rushella brought her lips close.
 
Ignoring the helpless Hisui, Rushella brought her lips close.
   
The two were in danger of touching each other.
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The two are in danger of touching each other.
   
But... her lips did not reach for his, but instead reached for his neck.
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But...her lips did not reach for his, but instead reached for his neck.
   
A lover's kiss was suppose to aim for the neck and not the lips.
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A lover's kiss is suppose to aim for the neck and not the lips.
   
 
"OUCH!!!! What are you doing so suddenly? I am still recovering from a great ordeal!"
 
"OUCH!!!! What are you doing so suddenly? I am still recovering from a great ordeal!"
   
"So what? I am only drinking a little bit! It was my blood anyway! I've been holding back for so long!"
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"So what? I am only drinking a little bit! They were my blood anyway! I've been holding back for so long!"
   
Rushella licked her lips and pushed Kujou down.
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Rushella licked her lips, pushing Kujou down.
   
Twin eyes blazed scarlet, no one could stop her anymore.
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Twin eyes blazing scarlet, No one can stop her anymore.
   
 
"HEY...DON'T....at least be gentle."
 
"HEY...DON'T....at least be gentle."
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"So noisy, behave yourself!"
 
"So noisy, behave yourself!"
   
Resistance was futile, Hisui thus got pinned to the bed, and had his blood and pleas dissolved into oblivion.
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Resistance is futile, Hisui thus gets pinned to the bed, and having his blood and pleas dissolved into oblivion.
   
 
"Hmm....so delicious <3"
 
"Hmm....so delicious <3"
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"...Are you a Demon? Ah, clearly you are a blood sucking [DEMON]! Ahh...."<ref>In Chinese, and I also assume in Japanese as well, the literal translation for vampire is "blood sucking demon" or "blood sucking monster", in here, Hisui is trying to highlight how Rushella is truly a "monster", but I couldn't exactly break it into something like VAMP-ire and have the same effect</ref>
 
"...Are you a Demon? Ah, clearly you are a blood sucking [DEMON]! Ahh...."<ref>In Chinese, and I also assume in Japanese as well, the literal translation for vampire is "blood sucking demon" or "blood sucking monster", in here, Hisui is trying to highlight how Rushella is truly a "monster", but I couldn't exactly break it into something like VAMP-ire and have the same effect</ref>
   
Kujou was feeling Rushella's body and temperature as she cozied up to him, while he mumbled in tears.
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Kujou is feeling Rushella's body and temperature as she cozied up on him, while mumbled in tears.
   
 
After that, each day at the hospital meant at least one such take down.
 
After that, each day at the hospital meant at least one such take down.
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She could not recall her memories before being bitten, but something remained in her heart. After Hisui returned to school, she said: "....Thank you."
 
She could not recall her memories before being bitten, but something remained in her heart. After Hisui returned to school, she said: "....Thank you."
   
She looked extremely shy, and for some reason kept staring at him during class, and tried to start a conversation whenever possible.
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She looked extremely shy, and for some reason kept staring at him during class, and tries to start a conversation whenever possible.
   
It looked like a return to normal life but Rushella, enemy of normal everyday life, still smiled and chattered non-stop with him every day after school.
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It look like a return to normal life--but Rushella-- enemy of normal day life--still smile and chatter non-stop with him every day after school.
   
 
"You started a club?"
 
"You started a club?"
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"Shut up and come with me."
 
"Shut up and come with me."
   
Rushella dragged Hisui towards an empty classroom, it was the same place where Mei pushed him down.
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Rushella dragged Hisui toward an empty classroom, it is the same place where Mei pushed him over.
   
There was always a dreadful feeling when he came here.
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There is always a dreadful feeling when he comes here.
   
 
"I brought someone over!"
 
"I brought someone over!"
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The vampire pushed the door open and dragged him in.
 
The vampire pushed the door open and dragged him in.
   
An emotionless voice greeted the two.
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An emotionless voice greets the two.
   
 
"You are so slow."
 
"You are so slow."
   
Without raising her head, the girl tapped away at the laptop. It was Eruru in a school uniform.
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Without raising her head, the girl pounded away at the laptop. It was Eruru in a school uniform.
   
 
"What are you doing here!?"
 
"What are you doing here!?"
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"Is that so..."
 
"Is that so..."
   
This girl's thinking was clearly not simple. It was better to be alert to her dissection wishes.
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This girl's thinking is clearly not simple. It is better to be alert to her dissection wishes.
   
 
"Then, why are you in this club?"
 
"Then, why are you in this club?"
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Rushella spoke with a leader like posture.
 
Rushella spoke with a leader like posture.
   
Mei looked as if she was watching a show.
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Mei looked as if she is watching a show.
   
 
Eruru silently pounded away at her keyboard.
 
Eruru silently pounded away at her keyboard.

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