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− | Right where he was pointing at was Keima, who |
+ | Right where he was pointing at was Keima, who were looking at the row of countless new works through the transparent clothes. |
Behind him, Elsie was looking rather bored. |
Behind him, Elsie was looking rather bored. |
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“…Uu.” |
“…Uu.” |
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− | He moaned. The supervisor gave a one |
+ | He moaned. The supervisor gave a one that’s like those in Western movies. |
“That’s great. Looks like you still have some foresight.” |
“That’s great. Looks like you still have some foresight.” |
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And several other customers in the shop, |
And several other customers in the shop, |
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− | Some old-time gamers with foresight noticed it. |
+ | Some old-time gamers with foresight noticed it. some people, |
(Wha, what’s with this boy?) |
(Wha, what’s with this boy?) |
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“Has the price dropped?” |
“Has the price dropped?” |
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− | He muttered as he went between one shelf after another. To |
+ | He muttered as he went between one shelf after another. To really put, it was said that highly skilled people in martial arts could use the motion of chopsticks to rate each other. |
− | A pianist could hear the quality of a keyboard through a performance. A top-rate sushi chef could tell the level of |
+ | A pianist could hear the quality of a keyboard through a performance. A top-rate sushi chef could tell the level of one through even the basics of fried egg. |
In other words, a person’s subconscious action could present its hidden ability completely. |
In other words, a person’s subconscious action could present its hidden ability completely. |
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− | Keima was merely shopping around for game |
+ | Keima was merely shopping around for game softwares, but to the bystanders, |
''What kind of amazing gamer is he?'' |
''What kind of amazing gamer is he?'' |
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− | From his gaming style that no one else could match, to the speed and processing ability, even if no one knew whether it was true, they could conclude to a certain extent. Also, there was one thing everyone in the shop could feel. That was, |
+ | From his gaming style that no one else could match, to the speed and the processing ability, even if no one knew whether it was true, they could conclude to a certain extent. Also, there was one thing everyone in the shop could feel. That was, |
This boy’s really an enigma! |
This boy’s really an enigma! |
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Keima’s eyes sparkled. |
Keima’s eyes sparkled. |
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− | “Well, you really know your work. The goods in this shop are all in order, and |
+ | “Well, you really know your work. The goods in this shop are all in order, and there’s people who knows what the customers want.” |
“…” |
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“I always wanted to come to such a place!” |
“I always wanted to come to such a place!” |
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− | Because of such a strong request, Keima and Elsie entered a little café near the ‘OG Map’. At the third level of a certain shopping mall, the main road could be seen completely. The wooden colored wallpaper and the viewing plants looked really lush. It was a really |
+ | Because of such a strong request, Keima and Elsie entered a little café near the ‘OG Map’. At the third level of a certain shopping mall, the main road could be seen completely. The wooden colored wallpaper and the viewing plants looked really lush. It was a really small mountainside-styled café. |
Keima simply ordered red tea, and Elsie, |
Keima simply ordered red tea, and Elsie, |
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And also, |
And also, |
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− | “No, we can’t decide that. Emily hasn’t returned to the country yet. We can’t deny completely that we entered another route.” |
+ | “No, we can’t decide that. Emily hasn’t returned back to the country yet. We can’t deny completely that we entered another route.” |
− | The trio |
+ | The trio were all serious. |
And working hard. |
And working hard. |
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She put her fingers at her chin and summarized what she wanted to ask. |
She put her fingers at her chin and summarized what she wanted to ask. |
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− | “…What’s so interesting about games |
+ | “…What’s so interesting about games.” |
At this moment. |
At this moment. |
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“!” |
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− | Keima’s eyes suddenly widened as his eyes |
+ | Keima’s eyes suddenly widened as his eyes were blazing. |
“Wa! Th, this…cha, charm! I just want to know what’s so attractive about games! Be, because you see, there’re many people other than kami-sama who’s interested.” |
“Wa! Th, this…cha, charm! I just want to know what’s so attractive about games! Be, because you see, there’re many people other than kami-sama who’s interested.” |
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Keima only said this. He continued passionately, |
Keima only said this. He continued passionately, |
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− | “Get it? The female lead in a game can’t possibly have those unreasonable actions that girls in real life will do. All the actions or circumstances are all set up for |
+ | “Get it? The female lead in a game can’t possibly have those unreasonable actions that girls in real life will do. All the actions or circumstances are all set up for the only beautiful ending.” |
− | He said that with |
+ | He said that with much passion. |
− | Elsie thought that ‘once kami-sama got involved with games, he could |
+ | Elsie thought that ‘once kami-sama got involved with games, he could really be ‘fired up’. As for Keima, he was thinking that he had to explain it. |
Both of them, |
Both of them, |
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− | For some reason, the surroundings |
+ | For some reason, the surroundings was really hot, and white smoke floated in as the fire alarm rang. |
During the short time after. |
During the short time after. |