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The Tokyo life sphere’s bay coast area, the abandoned harbor warehouse.
 
The Tokyo life sphere’s bay coast area, the abandoned harbor warehouse.
   
At the wharf where no sounds could be heard except the splashing sounds of the waves when it turned into night, there was the commanding voice of a girl ringing out.
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At the wharf where no sound could be heard except the splashing sounds of waves when it turned into night, there was the commanding voice of a girl ringing out.
   
The owner of the voice stood on the wharf, a student magician in the <Gunner> style whose body was wrapped in a Magi’s jacket based on a cowgirl’s outfit.
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The owner of the voice stood on the wharf, a student magician in <Gunner> style whose body was wrapped in Magi’s jacket based on cowgirl’s outfit.
   
 
While her blond hair that released faint light like gold dust was fluttering from the sea breeze, the girl was taking a stance with her <Gunner> style’s <Arms> that was a silver revolver.
 
While her blond hair that released faint light like gold dust was fluttering from the sea breeze, the girl was taking a stance with her <Gunner> style’s <Arms> that was a silver revolver.
   
The <{{furigana|leader|commanding officer}}> of New Tokyo Sorcery Academy’s 101st trainee platoon, Hoshikawa Sumika.
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The <{{furigana|leader|commanding officer}}> of New Tokyo Sorcery Academy 101th trainee platoon, Hoshikawa Sumika.
   
 
The girl right now was facing a single grotesque thing.
 
The girl right now was facing a single grotesque thing.
   
That grotesque thing was something that was around three times bigger than Sumika, a giant with a human body that had a head of a pig.
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That grotesque thing was something that was around three times bigger than Sumika, a giant with human body that had a head of a pig.
   
 
<Soldier class> demon, orc.
 
<Soldier class> demon, orc.
   
This orc was the vanguard of the invaders from another dimension that the human race had continued to fight from one hundred years ago.
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This orc was the vanguard of the invaders from another dimension that human race had continued to fight from one hundred years ago.
   
 
As a demon it was not categorized as strong.
 
As a demon it was not categorized as strong.
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It couldn’t even use any particular sorcery, what it could do only amounted to swinging around the giant club that it held in its right hand.
 
It couldn’t even use any particular sorcery, what it could do only amounted to swinging around the giant club that it held in its right hand.
   
―At best, its threat level was something like [an African elephant that held ill will towards humans].
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―At best, its threat level was something like [an African elephant that held ill will toward human].
   
Even for someone who was still a student, for a magician that had piled up training to defeat demons, this orc was an opponent that could be dealt with easily. That was exactly why, the girl―Sumika didn’t fear that monster for even a bit.
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Even for someone who was still a student, for a magician that had piled up training to defeat demon this orc was an opponent that could be dealt with easily. That was exactly why, the girl―Sumika didn’t fear that monster for even a bit.
   
“I’ll say it one more time. Stop making useless resistance.” <ref>This girl Sumika is always talking in polite language. Even against this demon.</ref>
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“I’ll say it one more time. Stop making useless resistance.” <ref>This girl Sumika is always taking in polite language. Even against this demon.</ref>
   
 
She announced her last warning.
 
She announced her last warning.
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If the girl put just a little more strength into her finger, a {{furigana|mythril|fake silver}} bullet coated in magic power would pierce the demon’s forehead from the gun muzzle.
 
If the girl put just a little more strength into her finger, a {{furigana|mythril|fake silver}} bullet coated in magic power would pierce the demon’s forehead from the gun muzzle.
   
If it was only something like a <Soldier class> than just a single attack would certainly result in death.
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If it was only something like <Soldier class> than just a single attack would certainly result in death.
   
Furthermore, using necromancy, a magician could bind a contract with the soul of a hero and through that they borrowed the hero’s power.
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Furthermore, using necromancy a magician bind a contract with the soul of a hero and through that they borrowed the hero’s power.
   
 
Sumika’s contracted hero was the <Gun Saint> Billy the Kid.
 
Sumika’s contracted hero was the <Gun Saint> Billy the Kid.
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“-…!”
 
“-…!”
   
Sumika’s expression distorted from those words. After all, what the orc said was right on the mark.
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Sumika’s expression distorted from those words. After all what the orc said was right on the mark.
   
 
Sumika couldn’t shoot. The reason was located in the orc’s left hand.
 
Sumika couldn’t shoot. The reason was located in the orc’s left hand.
   
There was a girl with a mini-ponytail clutched in the orc’s left arm with her face turning pale.
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There was a girl with mini-ponytail clutched in the orc’s left arm with her face turning pale.
   
The girl was the same with Sumika, the 101st’s <{{furigana|Striker|close range combatant}}>. Her name was Ichinotani Chikori.
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The girl was the same with Sumika, the 101th’s <{{furigana|Striker|close range combatant}}>. Her name was Ichinotani Chikori.
   
That’s right, in other words, this was a hostage situation.
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That’s right, in other word this was a hostage situation.
   
As a demon, the orcs were a weak race, but in place of that it was using its intelligence.
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As a demon orc was a weak race, but in place of that it was using its intelligence.
   
In reality, the one that was cornered was Sumika.
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In reality the one that was cornered was Sumika.
   
 
{Weapon, throw away. If not, this girl, crushed.}
 
{Weapon, throw away. If not, this girl, crushed.}
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Pressed with choices, Sumika gritted her teeth.
 
Pressed with choices, Sumika gritted her teeth.
   
(Just against an orc, to be treated as it pleased like this…!)
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(Just against orc, to be treated as it pleased like this…!)
   
For Sumika, this situation was a humiliation.
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For Sumika this situation was a humiliation.
   
If asked why, it was because while Sumika was still a student, she was a genius magician that obtained the title of S-rank magician where there were only ten people in this world. Originally, just an orc or even ten orcs, she was an existence that could easily defeat them. ―The fact was, a few minutes before, this Sumika had instantly killed two orcs that were invading into the life sphere from a different place.
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If asked why, it was because while Sumika was still a student, she was a genius magician that obtained the title of S-rank magician where there were only ten people in this world. Originally just an orc or even ten orc, she was an existence that could easily defeat them. ―The fact was, a few minute before this Sumika had instantly killed two orc that was invading into the life sphere from different place.
   
 
But, trouble appeared when the third orc came invading.
 
But, trouble appeared when the third orc came invading.
   
The predicted place where the third orc would appear was in the side of the residential area, so beforehand Sumika made two of the 101st platoon members that were her subordinates to standby there, but―of all the things to happen, the moment the orc appeared one of the members got terrified of real battle and deserted the battle before the enemy’s presence. No, if it was only that then it was still fine, but―
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The predicted place where the third orc would appear was in the side of the residential area, so beforehand Sumika made two of the 101th platoon member that were her subordinate to standby there, but―of all thing to happen, the moment the orc appeared one of the member got terrified of real battle and deserted the battle before enemy’s presence. No, if it was only that then it was still fine but―
   
{If it’s just around three minutes before leader comes, then even I alone can hold back this enemy!}
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{If it’s just around three minutes before leader come, then even me alone can hold back this enemy!}
   
 
Like that, Chikori who couldn’t be expected as a battle strength just by her lonesome didn’t even hear her command to stop and rushed to the enemy by her own judgment.
 
Like that, Chikori who couldn’t be expected as a battle strength just by her lonesome didn’t even hear her command to stop and rushed to the enemy by her own judgment.
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(She cannot do it at all aren’t she―!)
 
(She cannot do it at all aren’t she―!)
   
As expected, she wanted to cry.
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As expected she wanted to cry.
   
And then, right now, under that situation she got cornered and that was why it was unbearable.
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And then right now, under that situation she got cornered and that was why it was unbearable.
   
 
{Quick, weapon! Throw away!!}
 
{Quick, weapon! Throw away!!}
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She wanted to shout angrily that it’s exactly your fault, but right now it was no use even if she blamed the girl.
 
She wanted to shout angrily that it’s exactly your fault, but right now it was no use even if she blamed the girl.
   
As a leader, as a magician, to do something like abandoning a human who was going to be killed by a demon right now was not something Sumika could do.
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As a leader, as a magician, to do something like abandoning human who was going to be killed by a demon right now was not something Sumika could do.
   
Right now she needed to continue this deadlocked situation for even a little longer, buy time, and wait until reinforcements arrived.
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Right now she needed to continue this deadlocked situation for even a little longer, bought time, and waited until reinforcement arrived.
   
 
―But, that sneaky consideration was read by the orc.
 
―But, that sneaky consideration was read by the orc.
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{Do it quick!}
 
{Do it quick!}
   
In order to hurry Sumika who was trying to buy time, the vein of the orc’s arm protruded out and its herculean strength constricted Chikori’s thin body like a vise.
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In order to hurry Sumika who was trying to buy time, the vein of the orc’s arm protruded out, its herculean strength constricted Chikori’s thin body like a vise.
   
 
“UAAAAA…-!”
 
“UAAAAA…-!”
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Chikori who was grasped in the orc’s left hand turned limp and became unmoving.
 
Chikori who was grasped in the orc’s left hand turned limp and became unmoving.
   
It would be really bad if more than that happened. She couldn’t buy time unskillfully. There was nothing that she could do except obeying obediently.
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It would be really bad if more than that happened. She couldn’t buy time unskillfully. There was nothing she could do except obeying obediently.
   
 
“Understood. I surrender…”
 
“Understood. I surrender…”
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That was the intuition that came from the girl’s contracted heroic spirit, <Gun Saint> Billy the Kid’s Hero Skill.
 
That was the intuition that came from the girl’s contracted heroic spirit, <Gun Saint> Billy the Kid’s Hero Skill.
   
What is called Hero Skill was the obtained special move or something like enchantment that came from being possessed by the soul of a hero.
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What is called Hero Skill was the obtained special move or something like enchantment that came from being possessed by the soul of hero.
   
From this, a magician became able to wield power that was equal with heroes of previous life.
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From this magician became able to wield power that was equal with heroes of previous life.
   
 
And then the danger signal that ran through Sumika’s brain at this time was <Gun Saint>’s Hero Skill <{{furigana|Back Sniper|Instinct Evasion}}>.
 
And then the danger signal that ran through Sumika’s brain at this time was <Gun Saint>’s Hero Skill <{{furigana|Back Sniper|Instinct Evasion}}>.
   
With this Hero Skill that was associated with Billy the Kid’s legend that said that he shot to death enemies behind him without even turning back, its effect was [perfect invalidation of blind spot]. The contractor of <Gun Saint> became able to detect all dangers of attack that came from blind spots with 100% accuracy using instinct. And then, this instinct was by no means inaccurate―
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With this Hero Skill that was associated with Billy the Kid’s legend that said he shot to death enemy behind him without even turning back, its effect was [perfect invalidation of blind spot]. The contractor of <Gun Saint> became able to detect all danger of attack that came from blind spot with 100% accuracy using instinct. And then, this instinct was by no means inaccurate―
   
 
“{{furigana|Protection|Barrier Expand}}!”
 
“{{furigana|Protection|Barrier Expand}}!”
   
Sumika immediately expanded a no element first grade magic barrier using sorcery.
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Sumika immediately expanded no element first grade magic barrier using sorcery.
   
 
Thereupon in a flash that barrier was hit by the orc’s club.
 
Thereupon in a flash that barrier was hit by the orc’s club.
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The orc once again swung its club.
 
The orc once again swung its club.
   
If she evaded this next attack the orc would unhesitatingly crush Chikori.
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If she evaded this next attack the orc would unhesitatingly crushed Chikori.
   
 
She couldn’t evade.
 
She couldn’t evade.
   
If it became like this then she could only become a sandbag while reducing the damage as much as she could using magic power.
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If it became like this then she could only became sandbag while reducing the damage as much as she could using magic power.
   
 
For Sumika that was a bitter choice.
 
For Sumika that was a bitter choice.
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(Even though I cannot die in this kind of place…!)
 
(Even though I cannot die in this kind of place…!)
   
Sumika had a dream. An important, strong wish that could even be called a craving.
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Sumika had a dream. An important, strong wish that could even be called craving.
   
 
Five years ago, the giant seven headed dragon that burned to ash everything in the world. <Demon King Typhon>.
 
Five years ago, the giant seven headed dragon that burned to ash everything in the world. <Demon King Typhon>.
   
That day, where everyone could do nothing except looking up to the closed sky, sinking into despair in front of the overwhelming power.
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That day, where everyone could do nothing except looking up at the closed sky sinking into despair in front of the overwhelming power.
   
 
―There was someone, who killed that dragon.
 
―There was someone, who killed that dragon.
   
That Typhon, who bore not even a single injury even with all the militaries of all the world’s countries challenging that monster …there was a magician who killed that monster just by his lonesome.
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That Typhon who bore not even a single injury even with all the military of all the world’s countries challenging that monster, …there was a magician who killed that monster just by his lonesome.
   
 
That day, Sumika watched up from the burning ground the full story of what happened.
 
That day, Sumika watched up from the burning ground the full story of what happened.
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For the sake of softening the blow for even a little.
 
For the sake of softening the blow for even a little.
   
She was waiting for reinforcements while receiving the orc’s blow.
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She was waiting for reinforcement while receiving the orc’s blow.
   
 
Having no option other than that, she could only brace herself by all possible means.
 
Having no option other than that, she could only brace herself by all possible means.
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Against the approaching strong blow, Sumika resolved herself and closed her eyelids.
 
Against the approaching strong blow, Sumika resolved herself and closed her eyelids.
   
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“Sheesh. Is the apprentice these days cannot deal with just a single orc.”
 
“Sheesh. Can the apprentices these days not deal with just a single orc.”
 
 
   
 
She heard that voice.
 
She heard that voice.
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Instantly, a blast resounded in the wharf.
 
Instantly, a blast resounded in the wharf.
   
It was the sound of a severe shockwave hitting and breaking the concrete surface.
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It was the sound of a severe shock wave hitting and breaking the concrete surface.
   
 
But that was not the sound of destruction of a blow that was produced by a club.
 
But that was not the sound of destruction of a blow that was produced by a club.
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The one who broke apart the concrete was, a lone young man.
 
The one who broke apart the concrete was, a lone young man.
   
Jumping down from a passenger plane that was flying in the far above sky at the height of ten thousand meters, the young man that split apart into two the orc’s body from its head until its crotch using an obsidian sword, was the one making the sound of the broken concrete and landing.
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Jumping down from a passenger plane that was flying in the far above sky at the height of ten thousand meter, the young man that split apart into two the orc’s body from its head until its crotch using obsidian sword, was the one making the sound of the broken concrete and landing.
   
 
The orc’s body was torn vertically, split into left and right.
 
The orc’s body was torn vertically, split into left and right.
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Of course, it died instantly.
 
Of course, it died instantly.
   
The hostage spilled out from the arm, that orc’s body changed into shining ashes in a rustle and scattered apart from the sea breeze.
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The hostage spilled out from the arm, that orc’s body changed into shining ashes in rustle and scattered apart from the sea breeze.
   
 
Inside that prism, the young man said.
 
Inside that prism, the young man said.
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“But, I’ll give you a passing mark for not abandoning the hostage.”
 
“But, I’ll give you a passing mark for not abandoning the hostage.”
   
A loose and disheveled, uncontrollable black hair.
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A loose and disheveled uncontrollable black hair.
   
 
The end of a long stole flapped like a wing, the young man looked down on Sumika with a listless eye. A look that didn’t seem far from Sumika in age.
 
The end of a long stole flapped like a wing, the young man looked down on Sumika with a listless eye. A look that didn’t seem far from Sumika in age.
   
 
Looking at that face, Sumika gulped her breath.
 
Looking at that face, Sumika gulped her breath.
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“Yo, you, are……!”
 
“Yo, you, are……!”
   
 
It was only natural. For magicians that lived in this age, there was no human that didn’t know that young man’s face.
 
It was only natural. For magicians that lived in this age, there was no human that didn’t know that young man’s face.
   
The grand magician that mastered all the sorcery that existed in this world, the human that employed the existences that were far more powerful and even far more evil than even the [Demon King], the <Evil God> like one would use a familiar, the <Evil God User>.
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The grand magician that mastered all the sorcery that existed in this world, the human that employed the existences that was far more powerful and even far more evil than even [Demon King], the <Evil God> like one would use a familiar, the <Evil God User>.
   
And then, on the <Walpurgis Night> five years ago, possessing the overwhelming power that subdued even god, the hero of salvation that just alone subjugated <Demon King Typhon> who burned 90% of the earth surface―
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And then in the <Walpurgis Night> five years ago, possessing the overwhelming power that subdued even god, the hero of salvation that just alone subjugated <Demon King Typhon> who burned 90% of the earth surface―
   
 
 
“Kamishiro, Homura……!”
 
“Kamishiro, Homura……!”
   
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“Yeah, that Homura-san. As for today I got assigned to 101th platoon. Well, take care of me okay.”
 
“Yeah, that Homura-san. As for today I got assigned to 101st platoon. Well, take care of me okay.”
 
   
Why did the hero that saved the world get assigned to a mere trainee student platoon―
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Why did the hero that saved the world got assigned to a mere trainee student platoon―
   
 
Even such an obvious question didn’t cross the head of the current Sumika.
 
Even such an obvious question didn’t cross the head of the current Sumika.
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That standing figure was powerful, beautiful, in that one moment Sumika even forgot all words and became entranced.
 
That standing figure was powerful, beautiful, in that one moment Sumika even forgot all words and became entranced.
   
It was as if time itself had come to a complete stop.
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It was as if the time itself had came to a complete stop.
   
 
And then, during the instant where everything stood still, Sumika obtained a single conviction somewhere inside her heart.
 
And then, during the instant where everything stood still, Sumika obtained a single conviction somewhere inside her heart.

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