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“Hand movements? I still remember them well... Hyaaa!”
 
“Hand movements? I still remember them well... Hyaaa!”
   
The ending was that Louise pinched Siesta's ass. ''Hyaah!'' ''Aagghh!'' Whilst groaning, Siesta jumped up into air, but Saito and Henrietta were engrossed in their own world, and did not notice her. The ever joyous Guiche mistook Henrietta's furiously blushing face as a response to his loyalty, and, overcome by emotion, had fainted long ago.
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The ending was, Louise pinched Siesta's ass. ''Hyaah!'' ''Aagghh!'' Whilst groaning, Siesta jumped up into air, but Saito and Henrietta were engrossed in their own world, and did not notice her. The ever joyous Guiche mistook Henrietta's furiously blushing face as a response to his loyalty, and, overcome by emotion, had fainted long ago.
   
 
Kirche leaned flirtatiously against Colbert and said.
 
Kirche leaned flirtatiously against Colbert and said.
   
“It's really peaceful, rrrriiiigggghht Jean?
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“It's really peaceful, rrrriiiigggghht? Jean.
   
 
Staring at the scene before him with a troubled face, Colbert perspired.
 
Staring at the scene before him with a troubled face, Colbert perspired.
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“Oh well, after all, this is a brief rest. Isn't it good? By the way, Miss Zerbst, umm... can you not use 'Jean,' please?”
 
“Oh well, after all, this is a brief rest. Isn't it good? By the way, Miss Zerbst, umm... can you not use 'Jean,' please?”
   
Smiling sweetly, Kirche kissed Colbert on his cheek.
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Smiling sweetly, Kirche kissed Colbert at his cheek.
   
 
“N.O. And yeah, I have already asked many times. Just call me 'Kirche.'”
 
“N.O. And yeah, I have already asked many times. Just call me 'Kirche.'”

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