Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 7: Revision history

31 March 2021

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19 January 2015

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28 December 2014

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24 November 2014

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30 August 2014

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28 August 2014

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21 July 2014

• curprev 20:3720:37, 21 July 2014 Redak talk contribs 66,481 bytes 0 How about you check the forum first? Undo revision 371851 by Simon (talk) undo
• curprev 20:2720:27, 21 July 2014 Simon talk contribs 66,481 bytes 0 →Part 2: Reverting the changes made to the characters name., replaced: Julie → Yurie (97) undo

20 July 2014

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• curprev 16:3216:32, 20 July 2014 Mashiro talk contribs 66,481 bytes −20 →Chapter 7 『We Are Jumping!』 undo

5 July 2014

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11 June 2014

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7 June 2014

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6 June 2014

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5 June 2014

• curprev 22:2422:24, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,440 bytes +2 →Part 2: Changing discriminate to see, discriminate from what? You need something to follow up on it can't just leave it as discriminate them,doesn't make sense. undo
• curprev 22:2322:23, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,438 bytes −12 →Part 2: Changing discriminate to see, discriminate from what? You need something to follow up on it can't just leave it as discriminate them,doesn't make sense. undo
• curprev 22:1722:17, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,450 bytes +19 →Part 2: brandish what? can't just leave it as Yurie brandished, needs a noun after the brandish the verb, like her swords or Doubles.the silver looks normal from what I can see, silver girl, eyes or what? undo
• curprev 22:0422:04, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,431 bytes +1 →Part 2: It’s also quite fun to make a beauty like you into something hard to straight at. To straight at? That sounds wrong/doesn't make sense. undo
• curprev 21:5521:55, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,430 bytes +7 →Part 2: Changing from circle storage to circular storage, it clearer; implies that he has storage in with a circular shape, circle storage isn't as clear and is actually the name of a storage company undo
• curprev 21:4621:46, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,423 bytes −8 →Part 2: There was probably between our physique and age but. This part seems like it's missing some words maybe no difference between our physique and age. undo
• curprev 21:2821:28, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,431 bytes +24 →Part 2: After we advanced into the big hole that was opened up when it got destroyed. It as in the wall? Can't just leave it as it, would mean the hole was open it b/c it destroyed itself, changing to floor change if wrong. undo
• curprev 21:2121:21, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,407 bytes +14 →Part 2: We promised Lealith’s request while running through. This sentence doesn't flow added to accomplish between promised and Lealith. undo
• curprev 20:5320:53, 5 June 2014 Yoyoyo5678 talk contribs m 66,393 bytes +4 fixing Nav tag undo
• curprev 20:4520:45, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,389 bytes +25 →Part 2: I put battle in this sentence seems like it's missing a word. I gasped when I saw a giant ring form blade in the hall battle. Changed if wrong. undo
• curprev 20:3920:39, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,364 bytes +17 →Part 2: Just to clarify it's one man. so one battle suit, not battle suits. If the man is wearing multiple suits then it should be the man with the battlesuits or something like that. undo
• curprev 19:3719:37, 5 June 2014 Dual Blades talk contribs 66,347 bytes +2 →Part 1: The flow of this sounds so "stiff", I already tried to improve it a bit. undo
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• curprev 05:5905:59, 5 June 2014 RikiNutcase talk contribs 66,327 bytes +66,327 complete