Difference between revisions of "Talk:Kamisama no Memochou:Volume 1 Chapter 2"

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It's in past tense. I'll change it to hime-sama then. [[User:Zephyrus|Zephyrus]]
 
It's in past tense. I'll change it to hime-sama then. [[User:Zephyrus|Zephyrus]]
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ok thank you, I'll try to finish editing this chapter tomorrow--[[User:J112|J112]] 20:32, 16 December 2011 (CST)

Latest revision as of 04:32, 17 December 2011

For the line “Why is your Highness so sharp about these things?” I got flustered and accidentally blurted out honorifics. I think it may be more appropriate to say something like hime-sama than your Highness, I haven't checked the raw yet to see if it was originally like that though; I will leave it for now.

Also can you tell me if the narration is in past or present tense, it seems to be in past tense but I am not sure. --J112 19:43, 16 December 2011 (CST)

It's in past tense. I'll change it to hime-sama then. Zephyrus

ok thank you, I'll try to finish editing this chapter tomorrow--J112 20:32, 16 December 2011 (CST)