Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume5 Chapter6: Difference between revisions

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Her destructive <Death Gaze> – her Nidhogg had displayed immense overwhelming force to destroy the flying craft's military spirits.

This line needs changing (Her destructive <Death Gaze> makes not much sense where it appears, <Death Gaze> doesn't belong to Claire or Leonora, I suggest The destruction of <Death Gaze> by her Nidhogg..

--Drowzycow (talk) 17:36, 22 February 2013 (CST)