Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume16 Chapter5: Difference between revisions

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  • This was an application of cutting-edge spirit engineering that even Areishia Spirit Academy did not have such a device.
-Suggest removing the words "such a device". Alternatively, could instead rearrange the beginning to something like "This application of spirit engineering was so cutting edge that". --Cthaeh (talk) 03:09, 31 March 2017 (CEST)