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'''Claire glared intently at Kamito with her eyes of ruby.'''
 
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Suggestion: Claire glared intently at Kamito with her ruby eyes.
 
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--[[User:Tasear|Tasear]] ([[User talk:Tasear|talk]]) 09:36, 5 December 2013 (CST)
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I don't really see any significant difference. You can change if you feel strongly about it. --[[User:Zzhk|Zzhk]] ([[User talk:Zzhk|talk]]) 16:52, 5 December 2013 (CST)

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Claire glared intently at Kamito with her eyes of ruby.

Suggestion: Claire glared intently at Kamito with her ruby eyes. --Tasear (talk) 09:36, 5 December 2013 (CST)

I don't really see any significant difference. You can change if you feel strongly about it. --Zzhk (talk) 16:52, 5 December 2013 (CST)