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"And finally her most salient features; voluminous and wavy violet hair, and horns like a goat."<br />[[User:Vanant|Vanant]] ([[User talk:Vanant|talk]]) 04:14, 8 July 2014 (CDT) | "And finally her most salient features; voluminous and wavy violet hair, and horns like a goat."<br />[[User:Vanant|Vanant]] ([[User talk:Vanant|talk]]) 04:14, 8 July 2014 (CDT) | ||
Feel free to make as many edits as you feel are necessary to chapters I've posted. My translations are rough as my Japanese is rough. That line was one I was pretty unsure on in the first place. --[[User:Dark Kaito|Dark Kaito]] ([[User talk:Dark Kaito|talk]]) 04:20, 8 July 2014 (CDT) | |||
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そして極めつけは、ボリュームのあるウェーブのかかった紫色の髪と、山羊のような角。
"Then rather unique purple colored hair with a lot of volume trapped in something like a web, in an shape similar to a goat."
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"And finally her most salient features; voluminous and wavy violet hair, and horns like a goat."
Vanant (talk) 04:14, 8 July 2014 (CDT)
Feel free to make as many edits as you feel are necessary to chapters I've posted. My translations are rough as my Japanese is rough. That line was one I was pretty unsure on in the first place. --Dark Kaito (talk) 04:20, 8 July 2014 (CDT)