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Feel free to make as many edits as you feel are necessary to chapters I've posted. My translations are rough as my Japanese is rough. That line was one I was pretty unsure on in the first place. --[[User:Dark Kaito|Dark Kaito]] ([[User talk:Dark Kaito|talk]]) 04:20, 8 July 2014 (CDT) | Feel free to make as many edits as you feel are necessary to chapters I've posted. My translations are rough as my Japanese is rough. That line was one I was pretty unsure on in the first place. --[[User:Dark Kaito|Dark Kaito]] ([[User talk:Dark Kaito|talk]]) 04:20, 8 July 2014 (CDT) | ||
Since I'm translating as well as practice, when I check your work for reference at the end, if I see anything really out of place, if it's okay I'll just post the odd suggestion and leave it to the editor? [[User:Vanant|Vanant]] ([[User talk:Vanant|talk]]) 04:22, 8 July 2014 (CDT) | |||
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そして極めつけは、ボリュームのあるウェーブのかかった紫色の髪と、山羊のような角。
"Then rather unique purple colored hair with a lot of volume trapped in something like a web, in an shape similar to a goat."
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"And finally her most salient features; voluminous and wavy violet hair, and horns like a goat."
Vanant (talk) 04:14, 8 July 2014 (CDT)
Feel free to make as many edits as you feel are necessary to chapters I've posted. My translations are rough as my Japanese is rough. That line was one I was pretty unsure on in the first place. --Dark Kaito (talk) 04:20, 8 July 2014 (CDT)
Since I'm translating as well as practice, when I check your work for reference at the end, if I see anything really out of place, if it's okay I'll just post the odd suggestion and leave it to the editor? Vanant (talk) 04:22, 8 July 2014 (CDT)