Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume1 Chapter2

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Translation Questions

1

An involuntarily raised voiced by Kamito, the young girl beating him from head to toe.

Shouldnt that be: With an involuntary raised voice against Kamito... ? --Darklor 04:06, 15 February 2012 (CST)

No, its more like Kamito was been hit because of what he said to the girl.... the "Black" as in the color of her underwear. --Black Dust

And she shouted at him too? --Darklor 06:24, 15 February 2012 (CST)

Ah aehm, can it be that it should have been: The involuntary raised voice of the girl is beating Kamito from head to toe. ? --Darklor 06:29, 15 February 2012 (CST)

Yes, its the girl. the sentence should be "The involuntary voice which was raised to Kamito from her belly, The young girl is beating him from head to toe".

2

Deep inside the office, a displease voice.

Can it be that there is a "heard" missing? --Darklor 06:34, 15 February 2012 (CST)

This I'll change this to "A displeased voice from the back of the office".

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