Talk:Seirei Tsukai no Blade Dance:Volume6 Chapter4

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At the very end of part 1, regarding the following lines,

He did miss the slightly hurt expression that only flashed across the girl's face momentarily--
The boy felt a mysterious sense of turmoil stirring within himself.

With word choice "He did miss ..." in the first line, and the context in the second line, I'm guessing that the first line was intended to be "He did not miss ..."? --Cthaeh (talk) 22:49, 3 February 2013 (CST)

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