Talk:Papa no Iu Koto o Kikinasai!:Volume 4 Chapter 2

I had no Idea I'd make so many grammatical errors, Thank you for all the apostrophe's and grammar fixes (my excuse is I teach Physics and not English).

First sale of the year, they called it a 'first' sale and the store is called Western Style Hips...weird name but oh well, and its a different store than "heels".

Note: When editing, Segawa thinks from first person and everyone talks from first person while other peoples thoughts seem to be third person as Segawa observes them, on top of that the author appears to make some 3rd person observations about the story, (helps with editing so everyone knows what perspective to edit from.

I plan to keep this page small so we don't get lost as our conversations keep going.