Talk:OreShura: Volume 1 Chapter 1

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General

You! Are! All! Garbage!

• This was changed from "You - Are - All - Garbage!" If I remember correctly. The original Japanese/Chinese splits all the words up by syllables. Should we do the same? Like, turn the "Garbage" --> "Garb-age?" Cloudii (talk)

Wildk used the terminology, "Junior High" whereas Cloud uses the terminology "Middle School. Which do you prefer?"

• I'm all for whichever you guys like. Cloudii (talk)

In my class 1-A, a rumor like this started to spread: Class 1-E's Harusaki Chiwa became super popular

• Wildk uses the terminology Class 1-A, etc. Is this how we typically translate Japanese class systems? The Chinese is like: Year 1 Class 1. Should I be using the 1-A stuff from now on? Cloudii (talk)

Awkward English Wording

Romance, that sort of thing, is nothing but an illusion. It's a disease. If you don't believe me, take a look at couples giggling every now and then in front of everyone. It's annoying to whoever sees them, praying for them to leave. As for their reason to flirt in public? That's because this is the real romance, unmasked: Morphine getting emitted everywhere inside the brain, making them lose their shame and all. My attitude towards those people? I always put up with it because I don't care. But when it comes to myself, that is another topic altogether. For me, even if it wasn't in public, I would never do such shameless acts.

• This paragraph is very convoluted. It would be really nice if we could clean this up. Cloudii (talk)

Wouldn't make much of a difference not doing pointless stuff

• Double negative :C Cloudii (talk)