Talk:Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Prologue
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the doe with hit’s heart pierced through
This sentence doesn't make sense, do you mean the doe that was hit had it heart pierced? Or the hit pierced the heart?
Gold girl seems odd in english, but I note that you've already reverted an attempted change to blonde? So other suggestions golden haired/gold haired? --Drowzycow (talk) 15:17, 9 April 2014 (CDT)
