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Terminus Est, which was swung downwards by Kamito, was repelled by Jio's sword.
 
Terminus Est, which was swung downwards by Kamito, was repelled by Jio's sword.
   
Kamito stepped further in and scythed down his sword. Jio slightly shifted his center of gravity and evaded by a paper-thin margin. He made a shrilling loud laughter, as he jumped straight up.
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Kamito stepped further in and scythed down his sword. Jio slightly shifted his center of gravity and evaded by a paper-thin difference. He made a shrilling loud laughter, as he jumped straight up.
   
 
Like a spider, he clung onto the ceiling as—
 
Like a spider, he clung onto the ceiling as—
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"...What?"
 
"...What?"
   
Jio's red eyes widened, and his expression distorted in hatred.
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Jio's red eyes widened, and his expression distorted in hatefulness.
   
 
"I too was fooled at first. Whether you were really using seventy-two contracted spirits. —However, I was wrong."
 
"I too was fooled at first. Whether you were really using seventy-two contracted spirits. —However, I was wrong."
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The reason Kamito realized that was that Jio never used the same spirit twice.
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The reason Kamito realized that was that Jio never used the same spirit again.
   
 
(...Besides, he was also using several sword spirits of the same type.)
 
(...Besides, he was also using several sword spirits of the same type.)
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Unless one planned on using and throwing them away from the start, there was no point in contracting a large quantity of sword spirits in that way. Compared to handling several sword spirits, it should be much more efficient to nurture one sword spirit.
 
Unless one planned on using and throwing them away from the start, there was no point in contracting a large quantity of sword spirits in that way. Compared to handling several sword spirits, it should be much more efficient to nurture one sword spirit.
   
Besides, no matter how powerful Est's elemental waffe was, it was strange that a sword spirit, famous for being the toughest in its endurance, was broken that easily.
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Besides, no matter how powerful Est's elemental waffe was, it was strange that a sword spirit, famous for being the toughest in its stamina, was broken that easily.
   
 
"...My point is that they're the same as the spirit crystal that Fianna had used and thrown away."
 
"...My point is that they're the same as the spirit crystal that Fianna had used and thrown away."
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Certainly, while he housed that many sealed spirits in his body, the fact that he could maintain his body was a definite success. If he was an ordinary person, he was sure to go crazy because of the spirits' rejection.
 
Certainly, while he housed that many sealed spirits in his body, the fact that he could maintain his body was a definite success. If he was an ordinary person, he was sure to go crazy because of the spirits' rejection.
   
However, it was greatly incomplete for him to call himself the Demon King— an elementalist.
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However, it was greatly imperfect for him to call himself the Demon King— an elementalist.
   
 
He pretended as if he was contracted with several spirits, it was no more than a deception.
 
He pretended as if he was contracted with several spirits, it was no more than a deception.

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