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12 December 2018
- 02:2302:23, 12 December 2018 diff hist −57 m Masou Gakuen HxH:Volume 1 Prologue Re-wrote a paragraph to be more concise.
11 December 2018
- 10:0310:03, 11 December 2018 diff hist −2 m Masou Gakuen HxH:Volume 1 Prologue Fixed a misspelling of Himekawa and a few questionable word choices. I'm 99% certain "largely" was used incorrectly; I replaced it with "vivacious". While I think it's improved, I feel there could be a better word or way to phrase the sentence. Tag: Visual edit: Switched