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7 June 2012

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2 June 2012

• 02:5502:55, 2 June 2012 diff hist +161 User talk:Polarem →Thinking about going through a full editing pass for certain routes: ~
• 02:5302:53, 2 June 2012 diff hist −106 User talk:Delwack →Working in a full VN translation team
• 02:5202:52, 2 June 2012 diff hist +106 User talk:Delwack →Working in a full VN translation team

1 June 2012

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29 May 2012

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27 May 2012

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26 May 2012

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• 15:1115:11, 26 May 2012 diff hist +500 N User talk:Delwack Created page with "Clannad Full Edit Pass: May 2012: Current Route: KYOU SCENES HISTORY AND LOG: COMMON SEEN0414 Didn't review dubbing variations yet (effectively 1st play though after reinstal..."
• 00:0800:08, 26 May 2012 diff hist 0 m User talk:Polarem placed even more updated seen3513 diff comparison in the link

24 May 2012

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22 October 2008

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6 December 2007

• 17:0517:05, 6 December 2007 diff hist +140 User:Delwack updated active project section, rearranged sections
• 11:3511:35, 6 December 2007 diff hist +8 m Clannad:SEEN6800/0 →Text: updated section completetion %'s and line totals

27 November 2007

• 11:1611:16, 27 November 2007 diff hist −100 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter10 improved flow, and sentence structure, correcting grammar, italicized thoughts, added quotations on spoken parts.
• 10:1910:19, 27 November 2007 diff hist −254 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter10 Edited for flow, sentence structure, and grammar, (first 1/2 of chapter). Italicized some thoughts. Clarified some passages.
• 08:5708:57, 27 November 2007 diff hist −252 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter9 Revised the chapter to provide clarity for certain passages. Also attempted to improve flow, sentence structure, and grammar.
• 07:5707:57, 27 November 2007 diff hist −66 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter8 Corrections to previous edit (spelling and grammer mistakes, missed words, a few sentences were re-worked again.
• 07:3807:38, 27 November 2007 diff hist +344 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter8 Modified sentences to make more sense, for better structure and overall flow. Italicized some thoughts.
• 05:3205:32, 27 November 2007 diff hist −20 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter7 Edited for Sentence structure, flow, and grammar. Italicized some thoughts.

22 November 2007

• 22:2322:23, 22 November 2007 diff hist −6 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter5 clarification of ambiguous terms and sentences (as per forum discussion)

20 November 2007

• 13:2813:28, 20 November 2007 diff hist −109 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter6 Corrected grammar, edited for sentence structure, flow, and understanding. Italicized some thoughts.
• 11:5211:52, 20 November 2007 diff hist 0 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter8 going go sleep -> going to sleep
• 11:5011:50, 20 November 2007 diff hist −11 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter7 standardization to US English, spelling mistakes.
• 11:4311:43, 20 November 2007 diff hist +4 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter5 sounds better
• 06:1306:13, 20 November 2007 diff hist −6 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter10 Spelling errors + standardization to US English
• 06:0506:05, 20 November 2007 diff hist −100 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter5 edited for grammar, sentence structure, and overall flow
• 05:0705:07, 20 November 2007 diff hist −10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 Editing for flow, sentence structure, and gammar (second 1/2 of chapter)
• 04:2004:20, 20 November 2007 diff hist −204 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 Improved flow, sentence structure, and grammar (first 1/2 of chapter, again)

17 November 2007

• 17:5617:56, 17 November 2007 diff hist +412 m Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 →Yosenabe: yosenabe

16 November 2007

• 19:3819:38, 16 November 2007 diff hist +271 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 Yosenabe comment
• 19:3419:34, 16 November 2007 diff hist +16 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 →living in fear: edit for clarity
• 19:3319:33, 16 November 2007 diff hist +2,168 Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 added additional discussion topics
• 19:2619:26, 16 November 2007 diff hist −10 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 editing grammar, sentence structure, and general flow (first 1/2 of chapter)
• 18:0118:01, 16 November 2007 diff hist +551 N Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter4 New page: ==Edict== Throughout the chapter the word "edict" is used to refer to something Louise has to say during the Princess's wedding ceremony. 1. A decree or proclamation issued by an authori...
• 17:5117:51, 16 November 2007 diff hist −127 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter2 Editing to improve flow, sentence structure, and grammar, italized most thoughts (I think I got most of them now).
• 16:5616:56, 16 November 2007 diff hist −77 m Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter2 minor corrections to previously edited text
• 08:0508:05, 16 November 2007 diff hist +733 N Talk:Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter2 New page: ==Clarification requested== for the lines: Louise quickly turned the other way. Ugh, she must think I’m weird. The master thinks this mole is weird. Saito stared at the food served o...
• 07:5707:57, 16 November 2007 diff hist +237 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter2 Continued editing to improve flow, sentence structure, and readability. (first 1/2 of the chapter)
• 05:3705:37, 16 November 2007 diff hist −62 Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter2 →Louise’s Lovesickness: Editing to improve flow, readability and sentence structure. Italized some thoughts.