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7 June 2015
9 December 2014
5 November 2014
- 01:4901:49, 5 November 2014 diff hist +3 m Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari →Calmira Island Arc and Beyond
11 July 2014
9 July 2014
- 06:0806:08, 9 July 2014 diff hist −289 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 2 Chapter 2 Some more minor edits. Changed all multi-dots to an ellipsis.
- 06:0306:03, 9 July 2014 diff hist +125 User talk:TJYYEO →SnRK vol.2 ch.2 Major Edit: new section
- 04:5304:53, 9 July 2014 diff hist −6 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 2 Chapter 1 Lots of minor edits. Mostly switching to past tense for the narratives, and fixing punctuation errors.
28 June 2014
- 22:5822:58, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 colon before a description
- 22:5622:56, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 The sentence is not a question.
- 22:5422:54, 28 June 2014 diff hist −2 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 Since Raymond was speaking generally, the indefinite article "a/an" is the appropriate article to use.
- 22:5322:53, 28 June 2014 diff hist −2 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 "Speaking of" is a synonym to "with regard to" or "on that note"; "talking about" is not an acceptable replacement.
- 22:4922:49, 28 June 2014 diff hist +3 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 The sentence structure implied that people not daring to get close to him caused others' impression of Raymond to be destroyed; that is not the case and using a relative pronoun reduces this ambiguity somewhat.
- 22:4122:41, 28 June 2014 diff hist −1 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 removed unnecessary comma
- 22:4022:40, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 Removes ambiguity, namely the fact that the sentence could've meant that you could only see the whole field if you were standing on the window itself.
- 22:3722:37, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 hyphen is unneeded for this
- 22:3622:36, 28 June 2014 diff hist +12 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 added definite articles before all "Apollo House"s
- 22:3422:34, 28 June 2014 diff hist +4 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 definite article used before a noun that is known (mentioned in the sentence before it)
- 22:3222:32, 28 June 2014 diff hist −1 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 second part was a sentence fragment; colon used before explanation
- 22:3022:30, 28 June 2014 diff hist +4 Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 definite article used before a noun that is assumed to be unique.
- 22:2022:20, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 The second part is a sentence fragment. Colon used before an explanation. Added a conjunction in between the last two clauses (search comma splice)
- 22:1422:14, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 narrative: changed to past tense
- 22:1322:13, 28 June 2014 diff hist −11 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 redundant to mention the object of the sentence twice; numbness on the skin while a related action is being performed on the skin is implied
- 22:1222:12, 28 June 2014 diff hist −1 User talk:TJYYEO →Use of ellipsis
- 22:1122:11, 28 June 2014 diff hist +242 User talk:TJYYEO →Use of ellipsis: new section
- 22:1022:10, 28 June 2014 diff hist +2 Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 waist-long -> waist-length; waist-length is the proper adjective to use, and waist-long is not a word at all
- 22:0722:07, 28 June 2014 diff hist 0 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 narrative changed to past tense
- 22:0722:07, 28 June 2014 diff hist +3 Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1 either is used instead of too for statements in negative form
- 22:0522:05, 28 June 2014 diff hist +1 m Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Prologue nonessential explanations sandwiched between commas
22 June 2014
- 18:3018:30, 22 June 2014 diff hist +777 User talk:TJYYEO No edit summary
- 17:5017:50, 22 June 2014 diff hist +10 N User talk:Frenzy85 Created page with "Talk page!"
- 17:4917:49, 22 June 2014 diff hist +24 N User:Frenzy85 Created page with "... dot dot dot Ellipsis" current
- 17:4717:47, 22 June 2014 diff hist +321 User talk:TJYYEO →Editor: Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi