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10:4510:45, 12 November 2013 diff hist −1 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter5 No edit summary
10:3410:34, 12 November 2013 diff hist +5 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter5 No edit summary
09:5009:50, 12 November 2013 diff hist +1 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter5 No edit summary
08:5408:54, 12 November 2013 diff hist −7 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter5 In this paragraph, Linda was the one that said the line about "pressuring her" and about a "partner", which is why Banri felt embarrassed.
08:3308:33, 12 November 2013 diff hist +3 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter5 No edit summary
07:5107:51, 12 November 2013 diff hist −1 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter4 No edit summary
07:1207:12, 12 November 2013 diff hist −4 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter4 The word "for" here makes it seem like certain sides of the room are for exclusive use of the 3rd years or something.
07:0707:07, 12 November 2013 diff hist 0 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter4 No edit summary
03:1003:10, 12 November 2013 diff hist +14 Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter4 It's Kouko that's sweating here, not Banri. Also, the part after that was a bit awkward, so I tried to fix it a bit.

08:4908:49, 2 November 2013 diff hist −4 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter3 This line is more like she's correcting him for making a silly mistake, and not just her starting who she is as if he doesn't know. Can't think of a better way to explain that at the moment.
08:4008:40, 2 November 2013 diff hist +18 Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter3 No edit summary
06:1906:19, 2 November 2013 diff hist −2 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter3 No edit summary
06:1006:10, 2 November 2013 diff hist −2 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter3 This line sounded so awkward (and somewhat incorrect here and there) that I had to fix it up a bit.
05:4505:45, 2 November 2013 diff hist +3 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter3 Minor typo
05:2005:20, 2 November 2013 diff hist +13 m Golden Time:Volume1 Chapter3 There were two instances of this that was romanized instead of translated like all other instances so I changed it to be completely consistent.

07:1807:18, 19 January 2013 diff hist +5 m Sword Art Online:A Spot of Sunshine in the Winter No edit summary
07:1607:16, 19 January 2013 diff hist +6 m Sword Art Online:Caliber SS Among various grammar fixes, I also changed "One" to "A", since "one" gives the impression that only one group is doing such an action, while "a" simply states that among everyone, Kirito noticed a particular group doing it.

02:0102:01, 9 October 2012 diff hist +394 N Talk:Sword Art Online:Volume 8 Chapter 1 Part 8 Created page with "Regarding the first instance of "Kains" in this section: the comment from the translator said that the LN said Kains even though it obviously should be Schmitt, so he/she left..." current

20:0220:02, 9 June 2012 diff hist +92 m User talk:Vexed Added postscript
19:5919:59, 9 June 2012 diff hist −7 m User talk:Vexed typos and grammar fixes
19:5419:54, 9 June 2012 diff hist +64 m User talk:Vexed Forgot to add a signature/timestamp... (I always forget to do something before submitting it. LOL)
19:5319:53, 9 June 2012 diff hist +2,373 User talk:Vexed No edit summary

20:3320:33, 6 June 2012 diff hist +69 m User talk:Vexed Added a reference for your convenience.
20:3120:31, 6 June 2012 diff hist +2,155 User talk:Vexed Follow-up to response.

04:1004:10, 5 June 2012 diff hist +66 m User talk:Vexed Minor formatting correction.
04:0804:08, 5 June 2012 diff hist +4,401 User talk:Vexed Response and comparison for the Rika Text translation.

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