Talk:Leviathan:Volume 3 Chapter 2
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A few lines that I'm not confident enough I would change correctly. --Cthaeh (talk) 23:37, 4 November 2015 (UTC)
- Furthermore, neither Hazumi nor Minadzuki were present at Haneda's offshore.
- -I don't think "offshore" has an official definition as a noun, as it is used here, so I would have changed to "present offshore of Haneda" if there weren't other possible revisions with different meanings that could fit.
- And on the right shoulder—was a green head of a dragon's.
- -same comment regarding possesive use as previous chapter
