Talk:Leviathan:Volume 3 Chapter 4

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I didn't really understand this line, but that doesn't necessarily mean there's anything wrong with it (might just be me). Reading it, I expected "thirty" and "forty" to be swapped, such that he revised his plans to retire earlier than before. So I'm mentioning it just case something was up with the line instead of me. --Cthaeh (talk) 01:37, 25 November 2015 (UTC)

  • It even makes me want to revise the plan I've been brewing for many years, 'saving up a huge sum of money so as to retire in leisure at the age of thirty,' and correct it to the age of forty."