Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine: Revision history

31 August 2014

• curprev 02:5002:50, 31 August 2014 99.232.22.58 talk 47,550 bytes +122 →[Orange & Wine]: Comment on bath and me undo

5 June 2014

• curprev 15:0115:01, 5 June 2014 Kadi talk contribs m 47,428 bytes 0 No edit summary undo

28 February 2014

• curprev 15:3215:32, 28 February 2014 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 47,428 bytes −21 Removed unnecessary category. undo

14 April 2013

• curprev 09:1609:16, 14 April 2013 BladeUnderHeart talk contribs m 47,449 bytes −1 No edit summary undo

15 December 2011

• curprev 02:5002:50, 15 December 2011 Jonathanasdf talk contribs m 47,450 bytes −13 navbar undo
• curprev 01:1001:10, 15 December 2011 Jonathanasdf talk contribs m 47,463 bytes −18 navbar undo

27 October 2011

• curprev 04:1704:17, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,481 bytes −2 corrected word undo
• curprev 04:1504:15, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,483 bytes +1 normal phrasing undo
• curprev 04:1404:14, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,482 bytes −3 extraneous word undo
• curprev 04:1004:10, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,485 bytes +2 "underway" doesn't make sense; "by the time" implies duration, which is appropriate here undo
• curprev 04:0804:08, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,483 bytes +1 we normally wouldn't describe a house as "protrubing" undo
• curprev 04:0504:05, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,482 bytes +91 Question for translator undo
• curprev 04:0404:04, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,391 bytes 0 moved modifier to proper place undo
• curprev 04:0204:02, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,391 bytes +1 better rhythm undo
• curprev 03:3303:33, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,390 bytes +162 Question for translator undo
• curprev 03:3203:32, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,228 bytes +1 correct typo undo
• curprev 03:2203:22, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,227 bytes +190 Question for translator undo
• curprev 03:2003:20, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,037 bytes −5 removed typo undo
• curprev 03:1503:15, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,042 bytes 0 changed to correct word undo
• curprev 03:1403:14, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,042 bytes +4 added missing word undo
• curprev 03:1203:12, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,038 bytes −8 fixed grammar undo
• curprev 03:1103:11, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,046 bytes +4 made tense consistent undo
• curprev 03:1003:10, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,042 bytes +9 got rid of et al again. If "and others" becomes to repetitive, maybe some could be changed to "and crew" or "and friends" or "and his cohorts" undo
• curprev 03:0803:08, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,033 bytes −17 more natural phrasing undo
• curprev 03:0503:05, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,050 bytes +2 changed to standard phrase undo
• curprev 03:0403:04, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,048 bytes +5 read awkwardly, and wasn't logically true (if some random person in Iowa knew about the recipe, they'd still be acting friviously; it isn't important that nobody knew about it, only that they didn't know about it) undo
• curprev 03:0203:02, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,043 bytes 0 changed to correct word undo
• curprev 03:0103:01, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 47,043 bytes +67 Question for translator undo
• curprev 03:0003:00, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 46,976 bytes +9 et al doesn't really read well in fiction undo
• curprev 02:5802:58, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 46,967 bytes +163 Question for translator undo
• curprev 02:5602:56, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 46,804 bytes +101 Question for translator undo
• curprev 02:5402:54, 27 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 46,703 bytes +139 Question for translator undo

20 September 2011

• curprev 06:0906:09, 20 September 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 46,564 bytes −272 No edit summary undo
• curprev 02:5002:50, 20 September 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs 46,836 bytes +1,214 No edit summary undo

19 September 2011

• curprev 17:5017:50, 19 September 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs 45,622 bytes +704 No edit summary undo
• curprev 04:0204:02, 19 September 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs m 44,918 bytes +280 No edit summary undo

15 September 2011

• curprev 00:4800:48, 15 September 2011 84.194.112.212 talk 44,638 bytes +3 →[Orange & Wine] undo

10 July 2011

• curprev 16:5816:58, 10 July 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 44,635 bytes +272 No edit summary undo
• curprev 15:5415:54, 10 July 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs 44,363 bytes +506 more word choice and usage edits, some questions undo

12 June 2011

• curprev 21:3221:32, 12 June 2011 CarVac talk contribs m 43,857 bytes +4 →[Orange & Wine]: Strange wording... corrected? undo
• curprev 16:3416:34, 12 June 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs 43,853 bytes +43,853 Created page with "==[Orange & Wine]== Our classroom at the beginning of the week. Tsukimori greeted me with a warm smile upon seeing me, "Good morning." After wavering for a few seconds, I quic..."