Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1: Revision history

22 August 2018

• curprev 11:2811:28, 22 August 2018 Zxzxzx talk contribs m 64,481 bytes −4 Patrol doesn't need to be in uppercase. Also simplified the sentence structure for that line.

21 August 2018

• curprev 10:5610:56, 21 August 2018 Ayushdeep4 talk contribs m 64,485 bytes 0 →Part 7

2 July 2017

• curprev 05:5205:52, 2 July 2017 JFerg talk contribs m 64,485 bytes +4 →Part 8

15 November 2016

• curprev 02:4702:47, 15 November 2016 Raptor980 talk contribs m 64,481 bytes +3 →Chapter 1 - Eco the Dragon Girl
• curprev 02:2002:20, 15 November 2016 Raptor980 talk contribs m 64,478 bytes −410 →Chapter 1 - Eco the Dragon Girl
• curprev 02:1202:12, 15 November 2016 Raptor980 talk contribs m 64,888 bytes −2,140 Various grammar edits

28 June 2016

• curprev 10:0310:03, 28 June 2016 Hp2 talk contribs m 67,028 bytes −1 No edit summary

13 October 2015

• curprev 21:3921:39, 13 October 2015 Yoyoyo5678 talk contribs m 67,029 bytes +10 Reverted edits by Nscorz (talk) to last revision by Cthaeh
• curprev 17:5317:53, 13 October 2015 Nscorz talk contribs m 67,019 bytes −10 →Part 7

26 August 2015

• curprev 00:5500:55, 26 August 2015 Cthaeh talk contribs m 67,029 bytes 0 Protected "Seikoku no Ryuu Kishi: Volume 1 Chapter 1": project staff request ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

24 August 2015

• curprev 22:2622:26, 24 August 2015 Platypi4E4 talk contribs 67,029 bytes +2,565 Part 1 of many potential edits to Volume 1

8 October 2014

• curprev 16:3316:33, 8 October 2014 Mielu talk contribs m 64,464 bytes 0 →Part 7: The skills required here now,

21 September 2014

• curprev 17:3017:30, 21 September 2014 Wololo talk contribs m 64,464 bytes −3 →Part 9

28 June 2014

• curprev 22:5822:58, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,467 bytes 0 colon before a description
• curprev 22:5622:56, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,467 bytes 0 The sentence is not a question.
• curprev 22:5422:54, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,467 bytes −2 Since Raymond was speaking generally, the indefinite article "a/an" is the appropriate article to use.
• curprev 22:5322:53, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,469 bytes −2 "Speaking of" is a synonym to "with regard to" or "on that note"; "talking about" is not an acceptable replacement.
• curprev 22:4922:49, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,471 bytes +3 The sentence structure implied that people not daring to get close to him caused others' impression of Raymond to be destroyed; that is not the case and using a relative pronoun reduces this ambiguity somewhat.
• curprev 22:4122:41, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,468 bytes −1 removed unnecessary comma
• curprev 22:4022:40, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,469 bytes 0 Removes ambiguity, namely the fact that the sentence could've meant that you could only see the whole field if you were standing on the window itself.
• curprev 22:3722:37, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,469 bytes 0 hyphen is unneeded for this
• curprev 22:3622:36, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,469 bytes +12 added definite articles before all "Apollo House"s
• curprev 22:3422:34, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,457 bytes +4 definite article used before a noun that is known (mentioned in the sentence before it)
• curprev 22:3222:32, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,453 bytes −1 second part was a sentence fragment; colon used before explanation
• curprev 22:3022:30, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs 64,454 bytes +4 definite article used before a noun that is assumed to be unique.
• curprev 22:2022:20, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,450 bytes 0 The second part is a sentence fragment. Colon used before an explanation. Added a conjunction in between the last two clauses (search comma splice)
• curprev 22:1422:14, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs 64,450 bytes 0 narrative: changed to past tense
• curprev 22:1322:13, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,450 bytes −11 redundant to mention the object of the sentence twice; numbness on the skin while a related action is being performed on the skin is implied
• curprev 22:1022:10, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs 64,461 bytes +2 waist-long -> waist-length; waist-length is the proper adjective to use, and waist-long is not a word at all
• curprev 22:0722:07, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs m 64,459 bytes 0 narrative changed to past tense
• curprev 22:0722:07, 28 June 2014 Frenzy85 talk contribs 64,459 bytes +3 either is used instead of too for statements in negative form

26 May 2014

• curprev 16:3216:32, 26 May 2014 Nick Halden talk contribs m 64,456 bytes −8 No edit summary

16 May 2014

• curprev 03:5203:52, 16 May 2014 Madoka2029 talk contribs m 64,464 bytes −1 →Part 8: fixed possessive and grammar for extremely->extreme

18 April 2014

• curprev 21:5521:55, 18 April 2014 Doomr talk contribs 64,465 bytes −3 →Chapter 1 - Eco the Dragon Girl
• curprev 21:5421:54, 18 April 2014 Doomr talk contribs 64,468 bytes +4 →Chapter 1 - Eco the Dragon Girl

4 April 2014

• curprev 15:5315:53, 4 April 2014 Denormative talk contribs m 64,464 bytes +11 Probably should be a <ref> like the rest of the clarifications.
• curprev 15:5115:51, 4 April 2014 Denormative talk contribs m 64,453 bytes +1 Missing .

4 March 2014

• curprev 20:2020:20, 4 March 2014 Yoyoyo5678 talk contribs 64,452 bytes −85 →Part 8: Take of doubles sentence, grammar, typo

15 February 2014

• curprev 07:4807:48, 15 February 2014 Mhas talk contribs m 64,537 bytes +1 →Part 8
• curprev 06:1506:15, 15 February 2014 はじめ talk contribs 64,536 bytes −11 Whoops! Made a minor mistake.
• curprev 05:5605:56, 15 February 2014 はじめ talk contribs 64,547 bytes +4,299 No edit summary
• curprev 05:5105:51, 15 February 2014 はじめ talk contribs 60,248 bytes −334 Undo revision 323361 by Aoi uchuu (talk)
• curprev 05:5005:50, 15 February 2014 はじめ talk contribs 60,582 bytes +12 Undo revision 323365 by Aoi uchuu (talk)

26 January 2014

• curprev 01:5901:59, 26 January 2014 Aoi uchuu talk contribs 60,570 bytes −12 spelling
• curprev 01:3501:35, 26 January 2014 Aoi uchuu talk contribs 60,582 bytes +334 Grammar, words and phrases.

24 December 2013

• curprev 03:0403:04, 24 December 2013 1.123.135.77 talk 60,248 bytes +8 →Part 4
• curprev 03:0203:02, 24 December 2013 1.123.135.77 talk 60,240 bytes 0 →Part 4

5 December 2013

• curprev 21:5221:52, 5 December 2013 58.106.140.251 talk 60,240 bytes −1 No edit summary

3 December 2013

• curprev 08:2108:21, 3 December 2013 Kenji talk contribs 60,241 bytes +2,538 →Part 8

26 November 2013

• curprev 12:0712:07, 26 November 2013 Kenji talk contribs 57,703 bytes +1,778 →Part 8