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:Huh, I completely forgot about Petro-Canada, kinda odd considering I have one just down the road from me. Also got me thinking because I can't ever remember seeing/hearing a Petro-Can add that actually said petrol in it; only gasoline. [[User:Kory|<span style="color:Green;font:normal 10pt Papyrus, fantasy">Kory</span>]] 13:37, 2 June 2013 (CDT) |
:Huh, I completely forgot about Petro-Canada, kinda odd considering I have one just down the road from me. Also got me thinking because I can't ever remember seeing/hearing a Petro-Can add that actually said petrol in it; only gasoline. [[User:Kory|<span style="color:Green;font:normal 10pt Papyrus, fantasy">Kory</span>]] 13:37, 2 June 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | Would it be better as something along the lines of: Finally, the noise of the engine could no longer be heard [[User:Kory|<span style="color:Green;font:normal 10pt Papyrus, fantasy">Kory</span>]] 16:25, 6 June 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | I don't really see much of a difference. --[[User:Zzhk|Zzhk]] ([[User talk:Zzhk|talk]]) 18:40, 6 June 2013 (CDT) |
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Latest revision as of 01:40, 7 June 2013
I was wondering about the word 'petrol.' Would that be better switched to 'gasoline?' I know that elsewhere in the world petrol is often used but here in NA you'd almost never hear it. Kory 08:26, 2 June 2013 (CDT)
There is Petro-Canada, but anyway, go ahead and change it to gasoline. --Zzhk (talk) 09:14, 2 June 2013 (CDT)
- Huh, I completely forgot about Petro-Canada, kinda odd considering I have one just down the road from me. Also got me thinking because I can't ever remember seeing/hearing a Petro-Can add that actually said petrol in it; only gasoline. Kory 13:37, 2 June 2013 (CDT)
This line seemed a little odd,
Finally, the engine noise could be heard no longer
Would it be better as something along the lines of: Finally, the noise of the engine could no longer be heard Kory 16:25, 6 June 2013 (CDT)
I don't really see much of a difference. --Zzhk (talk) 18:40, 6 June 2013 (CDT)
