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| − | == Volume 01, Chapter 04 Discussion == |
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| − | == Current Discussion - New Points Discussed Here == |
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| − | == Volume 04 Title Discussion == |
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| − | http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=284 |
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| − | == Dialogue syntax issues == |
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| − | As you can tell from the first chapter, Kyon represses a significant amount of his thoughts during conversations. Most of these thoughts take the form of a silent aside that the other characters are not aware of. However, there are times when Kyon's inner dialogues are leaked out into the open but the parenthesis is left out. For example, in Chapter 1: |
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| − | ''After class, Taniguchi, with his mystified face, tried to corner me. Taniguchi, you look like a total moron with that expression of yours! |
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| − | "Be quiet! I don't care what you say. Anyway, just what magic did you cast?"'' |
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| − | From what thelastguardian tells me, the lack of parenthesis is the author's style. The reason I bring this up is because a casual reader might be confused in certain places when deciding whether Kyon speaks or not. I believe the author's style should be reverted with no parentehsis added. What is your opinion? |
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| − | Another issue is how place the "Haruhi said" and other such lines that directly reference to a character's line. In the current format, such lines are separated by a space. I'm of the opinion these spaces should be closed and the short commentary following a line should be closed. Already, this has been taken care of by others and myself in a few instances. |
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| − | ''"Which is why I'm going to obtain one now," Haruhi said, like a hunter looking for its prey.'' |
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| − | But before I start linking dialogue to commentary, what do you think? --[[User:Baltakatei|Baltakatei]] 23:32, 21 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | :Agreed on closing some of the linebreaks for dialogue syntax. Breaking a new line all over the place probably looks right with Japanese text, but English novels are written with "Haruhi said" descriptions and following commentaries on the same line as the dialogue (as well as further dialogue by the same person). Then again, Kyon's inner voice commentaries and asides I'd count as 'dialogue' and therefore require a change in line. For example, from Ch 2: |
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| − | :''"I see... I understand."'' |
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| − | :''What did you understand?'' |
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| − | :''"I'll quit the Calligraphy Club, and join your club..." Her voice is so full of sadness. "But, I don't know what the Literature Club does." '' |
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| − | :Oh and just to clarify, I don't think we need to add any 'somebody said,' descriptions if they're not already there - as was discussed it is pretty easy to guess who's speaking what line even if we don't get "verbalised accents" (such as trademark deviations from Standard Japanese and -yo, -desu endings). |
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| − | :--[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 03:48, 22 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | ::Though on second thought, ''"her voice is so full of sadness"'' and many other such descriptions feel like 'dialogue'/'monologue commentary' since this is Kyon First Perspective afterall. Mmm... maybe making a finer distinction like this would just cause more trouble. Ok, I guess only doing the no-linebreak thing with "lines that directly reference a character's line" cases would be sensible, as Baltakatei originally suggested. |
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| − | ::--[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 10:42, 22 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | === Sentence order of interleaved dialogue and description. === |
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| − | Note in this example from [[Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter3|Volume 1, Chapter 3]], how Kyon's dialogue is before its description, which is the opposite of normal English usage and expectation. |
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| − | EX.1a |
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| − | :... let's begin searching!" |
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| − | :"......What are we looking for?" |
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| − | :'''Since no one else asked, I decided to do it myself.''' |
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| − | EX.1b |
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| − | :... let's begin searching!" |
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| − | :'''Since no one else asked, I decided to do it myself.''' |
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| − | There are actually quite a few examples of this pattern in the text, and I assume this sounds very natural in Chinese/Japanese. In some cases this can be worked around by rewording, while still preserving order, and in some cases it can't. In particular, it's hard to do so when the description follows a long passage of dialogue, as in [[Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter6|Volume 1, Chapter 6]] - Haruhi's monologue. Even in cases where it can be worked around, it usually sounds awkward to do so. |
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| − | So my question is: Are there any objections to changing the sentence order in order to reflect the expectations of an English reader? In particular, are there any places where doing so would change the meaning/impact of the text? Of course, the second question is largely rhetorical, since nobody ''(except maybe Nagato Yuki)'' could mentally perform the transformation, and immediately post the results. |
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| − | In any case, I'm willing to make the changes, but hopefully someone with access to ''(and understanding of)'' the original text can check to see that it doesn't break anything subtle, like parallelism or who-knows-what. |
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| − | --[[User:The naming game|The naming game]] 21:25, 30 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * In that respect the first one, you cited is the one i'll expect a English speaker would say. |
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| − | I think limited rewording is for the best, but large ones i think we need to consult the translators on it. |
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| − | Preserving the "impact" makes more sense for me. After all thats what that part of the story was suppose to communicate to the original Japanese readers, so it would be an insult to not attempt to change the sentence to give the same effect for the English readers. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 23:43, 30 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * First off, let me say that I have tempered my stance. |
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| − | What convinced me, in particular, was your comment that the story was originally meant to "communicate to the original Japanese readers." And I agree that in no shape or form, should we attempt to hide the fact that this was originally a book written by a Japanese person, for a Japanese audience. ''(Let's put aside for the moment that the chapters under discussion came from the Chinese translation.)'' In this light, I'd rather have things sound slightly awkward, rather than have the meaning altered in order to facilitate a smoother English reading. I believe people can mentally compensate for most aspects of style, as long as the meaning is there. ''(I enjoyed reading the chapters, even before all the editing took place.)'' |
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| − | ''(Don't read any further unless you enjoy semantics and English usage/feel issues. You have been warned!)'' |
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| − | That having been said, I still feel my second example to be slightly more natural sounding -- though I ''am'' starting to see how the other could be taken as natural sounding as well. I'm curious as to opinions on the following examples. My own comments are at the end. |
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| − | :... let's begin searching!" |
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| − | :No one else is going to ask? Fine, I'll do it. |
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| − | :"......What are we looking for?" |
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| − | EX.1d |
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| − | :... let's begin searching!" |
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| − | :"......What are we looking for?" |
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| − | :-- Since no one else had asked, I'd decided to do it myself. |
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| − | The following is also from Volume 1, Chapter 3. |
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| − | EX.2a (original) |
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| − | :"Right, let's now begin the first SOS Brigade meeting!" |
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| − | :Haruhi, who was standing on the commander's seat, suddenly shouted. Please stop startling people by suddenly shouting! |
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| − | :"Right, let's now begin the first SOS Brigade meeting!" |
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| − | :-- A sudden shout from Haruhi, while standing on the commander's seat. Please stop startling people by suddenly shouting! |
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| − | :Haruhi, who was standing on the commander's seat, suddenly shouted. |
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| − | :"Right, let's now begin the first SOS Brigade meeting!" |
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| − | :Please stop startling people by suddenly shouting! |
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| − | This is from Volume 1, Chapter 6. |
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| − | EX.3a (original) |
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| − | :Haruhi stood by the railway tracks, sorry, the railway path, and began to talk. |
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| − | :Haruhi said endlessly as though giving a speech in a debate. When she finished she gave an expression of regretting ever saying all that, and looked at the sky in anguish. |
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| − | EX.3b |
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| − | :Haruhi stood by the railway tracks, sorry, the railway path, and began to talk. |
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| − | :Haruhi said this without pausing, as though giving a speech in a debate. When she finished she gave an expression of regretting ever saying all that, and looked at the sky in anguish. |
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| − | :Haruhi stood by the railway tracks, sorry, the railway path, and began to talk. She spoke without pausing, as though giving a speech in a debate. |
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| − | :When she finished she gave an expression of regretting ever saying all that, and looked at the sky in anguish. |
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| − | '''My comments:''' |
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| − | EX.1c is how I mentally read EX.1b, and I suspect Onizuka's reading of EX.1a was closer to EX.1d's clarification. I find EX.1c more colloquial than EX.1d, but either is reasonably natural sounding. If I had to pick an "official" version, I'd go with EX.1d, though I really like the "Kyon commentary" aspect of EX.1c. |
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| − | EX.2a doesn't make sense to me -- unless you want to try reading it in the Harry Potter style. ''(shudder)'' Even though EX.2c changes the sentence order, it sounds more natural to me than EX.2b, though I find either better than EX.2a in terms of making sense. |
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| − | EX.3a, English grammar issues aside, has odd semantics to me. The meaning seems to be that Haruhi spoke some words after the explicit dialogue. However, I don't believe this to be the case, based on previous patterns in the text. Perhaps a translator could clarify? |
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| − | Ex.3b gives an unambiguous interpretation of EX.3a's meaning. EX.3c has the same meaning as EX.3b, but exchanges the dialogue/description order. I don't have a preference for either EX.3b, or EX.3c, so I would go with EX.3b, as it preserves order. |
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| − | By the way, I believe it's a testament to the author that I wasn't particularly bored going over these examples along with the text. "The Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruhi" has excellent replay value. Hoping one day to reread it in the original Japanese... |
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| − | --[[User:The naming game|The naming game]] 10:00, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * ...I'am temporarily speechless. |
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| − | That is some very impressive detail analysis you have there, to be honest I can't really comment on it. |
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| − | I think it's best I allow the project Editors/Translators to discuss this with you, as I feel my average English Literature isn't really up to the task. (^^;) |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 10:17, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * I prefer the EX1.d wording to preserve the original expectation you mentioned. My reason for this is because the style of the Japanese novel retains this separate (dialogue) + (commetary) formatting. Much work will be involved should we decide to reword all the sentences of our translators (who seem to be following the novel's formatting). |
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| − | For Example 3, I prefer the EX3b rewording with "this" because of the long length of Haruhi's speech. |
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| − | Overall, I believe retaining the original order of the dialogue and following commentary is the best way since order/expectation is not an issue. However, the presence of a space between the speech and commentary seems to be unnecessary. The formatting of the Wiki seems to make the space between separate lines more pronounced than is present in the original Japanese novel. Therefore, I'm in favor of connecting commentary to the dialogue except in the cases of long speeches such as in EX3. [[User:Baltakatei|Baltakatei]] 17:28, 3 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I finally read through all the possible stylistic variations you mentioned above The naming game. Now here's what I think of the options, which I decided before reading your footnotes to understand your viewpoint. |
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| − | I'll list it in a mathematical order for ease (where the symbol > means greater than what the "pointy end" points at. Basic math.) |
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| − | EX1b > EX1c > EX1d > EX1a |
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| − | Initially, after reading those four variations, the first thing that struck me was the lack of distinction between the speakers, present in both the versions EX1d and EX1a. It isn't immediately apparent that Kyon raised the question or the reason for it (although normal people would definitely question Haruhi's actions...). |
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| − | I also noted a difference between the two sets of styles, that being EX1b & EX1c vs. EX1d & EX1a. The difference is that EX1b & EX1c suggests that there was a noticeable time lag between Haruhi's statement and Kyon's interjection (which makes it seem logical for Kyon to think to himself "Since no one else is asking... etc"). EX1d & EX1a however, suggests a more sudden, if not immediate interjection from Kyon, making it seem less sensible as to what Kyon considers as a time delay for people to react (in this case, to ask Haruhi what they were to do). |
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| − | After reading The naming game's footnotes however, one aspect that makes this novel appealing is the appearance of Kyon's musings every so often, which often serve as his immediate reaction (before he ever considers speaking or in direct response to a ridiculous statement of some sort). Thus, I conclude that Kyon's contemplations or "inner speech" that is often directed at the reader should be retained. However, I believe the issue on the time delay that I mentioned should also be addressed if possible. |
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| − | EX2a > EX2b > EX2c |
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| − | First of all, I like J.K. Rowling's style of writing, which in fact is the preferred mode of writing here in Britain mind you. In any case, personal preferences aside, again, these three variations can be differentiated into two categories: |
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| − | EX2a & EX2b vs. EX2c |
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| − | Both EX2a & EX2b deliver Haruhi's shout to be sudden and has the effect of startling the reader (although it didn't startle me...). The reason for this is that it does not announce what the character is about to do before the character actually performs the action. Putting this into perspective, imagine we had a film, say Star Wars: The Empire Strikes Back and we were hinted at what Darth Vader was about to say to Luke: |
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| − | e.g. Darth Vader paused, with his crimson light-saber ever primed, he prepared himself to deliver five words that would send Luke's psyche into complete and utter disarray. "Luke. I am your father." |
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| − | Actually, now that I think about it, it doesn't seem quite that wrong here; in fact I think it worked fairly well... I guess I used a bad example... |
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| − | Anyway, the point is that EX2c removes the added element of surprise by specifying that Haruhi stood on her seat and was about to shout whatever words came after the word shout. EX2b is inferior to EX2a by the fact that it appears to be grammatically weaker, or seems less fluid in terms of wording. |
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| − | EX3b > EX3a > EX3c |
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| − | My opinions on this are similar to The naming game's. |
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| − | EX3b is a clear and succinct description of what the entire monologue of Haruhi was like. It also helps to further reinforce the reader's thoughts of what they interpreted of the long passage of Haruhi's past coming from the notorious Haruhi herself (or at least I believe it would reinforce what the reader would think). By this I mean it reinforces certain thoughts after the reader has read through the monologue and then read the description of how the monologue was delivered. |
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| − | EX3a is identical to EX3b except for the use of "spoke endlessly" as opposed to "spoke without ever pausing". The term "endlessly", like another point I mentioned above (if not related to all of them), does not specify time. By this I mean and endless speech could be a university lecturer who would speak endlessly in a lecture over a period of an hour, putting everyone to sleep with the voice of a lullaby. In contrast, a university lecturer who spoke without ever pausing would probably hold all of the students’ attention due to the rate of his/her speech (e.g. a hyperactive or eccentric lecturer). Therefore, the usage of "spoke without ever pausing" seems to suit and define the character of Haruhi much better than that of "spoke endlessly". |
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| − | EX3c is less to my liking for the same reason that I disliked EX2c. In general, it is often far more interesting to leave the reader to imagine how an action might be performed before stating the mode by which it was performed or delivered (for this kind of style, it is typically speech). This would give the reader a bit more freedom to engage themselves into the story by conveying words into imagination before reading further to find that it was to their expectation or it wasn't (bursting their bubble). |
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| − | --[[User:Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 02:12, 5 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | === Overall style and flow of translations. === |
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| − | Since there isn't a pre-existing topic that stands regarding this, I've added a new topic I'd like to address. The current form of the translations and edits appear to be really good but there's one thing that bugs me every so often: ''sometimes, the language doesn't really flow too well''. I note that this is far less apparent after the editors (and translators) have done their vigorous rounds cleaning up each chapter. |
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| − | In any case, what I hope to address is that the writing style of the novel be maintained. Despite having no access to the original source material, I presume that if these novels were to be classified, they would be classified as young-adult science fiction. Based on that, it would imply that the use of obscure words and terminology (and Tolkien-esque writing) should be limited to enhance the smooth and unhindered amusement that these novels have to offer. |
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| − | Basically, please continue to keep this in mind while translating/editing as you have done so far. |
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| − | (If you feel I have made a needless point, please feel free to remove this topic.) |
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| − | '''EDIT''' -- 18:56, 9 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | * I can now confirm that this series of novels are classified as [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Light_novel "'''Light Novels'''"]. Please ensure you know what this means and keep this in mind when you continue to translate and or edit these novels. |
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| − | --[[User:Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 21:01, 6 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | Kyon's Narration Tense is something we should quickly agree on I think. I point to the small conversation that started on this |
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| − | [[Talk:Format_guideline#It_is_as_if_to_her.2C_the_guys_are_pumpkins_or_potato_sacks.2C_and_she_couldn.27t_care_less. | in Ch 1's discussions]] regarding how I think we ought to first agree on what 'the present' is for Kyon's Narration. |
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| − | I think uniform past tense in the prologue sounds better for sure, but if he's not revealing foreknowledge in the rest of the chapters, then present tense would seem to be more logical. |
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| − | personally I agree, i mean Kyon speak for the present, he doesn't speak with the knowledge of the future of past. |
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| − | He's the vocal of the audience. |
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| − | I guess with have to check with an a translator to know if he ever does start to speak with hindsight/foresight. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 19:07, 21 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | There are certainly times when he speaks about the future, for example, from Chapter 1: "As I said, at first I felt very irritated, but later on I learned that all those people graduated from East Junior High." --[[User:Ryukaiser|Ryukaiser]] 20:24, 21 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | :Yes but that's an example from chapter 1, which I've already suggested as being a "Let me tell you how I got to where I am in this newly formed, I-have-no-idea SOS-dan" backstory session. So Chapter 1 should also be in past tense I think. Chapter 2 onwards (perhaps right from the start of it, thus setting 'the present' to just after Haruhi's Inspiration for a club) should be present tense narration. |
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| − | :Of course, if it's explicitly clear he suddenly adds in a comment from future hindsight, then we do that in past tense. But I think it's pretty clear when those happen - incidentally do they happen much beyond chapter 1? |
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| − | it gets more complicated already. |
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| − | i'll leave it up to you lot ^^; |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 20:39, 21 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Is there anything in the Japanese text that would make the present tense an obvious choice? If not, it shouldn't be used. The present tense is very, very rarely used in professional-level English writing because it is so awkward and difficult to read. Usually, it's only used when aiming for a specific style or with some other framing narrative that gives a specific reason for it. Even then, though, it is normally considered undesirable; every writing course I've ever taken has emphasized the fact that the present tense is to be avoided. An extremely skilled writer can get away with it, but usually when they do so they'll be using it to ''deliberately'' trip their readers up or make their text seem strange (it's sometimes employed to that end in magical realism, for instance.) I doubt that's the case here. Anyway, it might be too late to say this, but in English-language fiction the past tense should usually be used unless you have an overwhelming reason to do otherwise; in almost all cases it is going to be clearer and flow more smoothly. As one of my teachers once said, if you (as an inexperienced writer) are ever uncertain as to what tense you should be using, it is almost absolutely certain that you ought to be using the past tense. --[[User:Aquillion|Aquillion]] 23:31, 27 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Hmm, I can't find any disputes to your point - once I get Immediate Past Tense in my head to distinguish from "Far Backstory Past Tense", then I see no objection. It usually is easy to feel when the Present Tense is the best choice which is indeed rare. Ok, I'll wait to see if others have an opinion on this and we'll change the Format Guideline accordingly - I don't think it's too late and besides somebody can always do this Tense stuff for a chapter they haven't looked at before. |
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| − | (Oh btw, Wiki hint: type four ~'s together and it'll automatically generate a timestamp and your name) |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 03:25, 28 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I went back to the Japanese text and found that past tense is used a lot in straightforward event narration. The thing is that Japanese just has past and non-past. Translators have to use context to determine whether to use the myriad tenses of English: past perfect, present perfect, etc. |
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| − | Perhaps the best rule of thumb would be to use present tense for the lines that are obviously Kyon's commentary, if you are using the Chinese novels as your material. |
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| − | [[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 03:35, 28 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | == anything to put on the front page? == |
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| − | just wondering if you lot got any guides you wanna put up yet? |
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| − | it looks funny with those bits at the bottom. |
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| − | unless this is not necessary, then i'll remove it. it's kinda bugging me now :/ |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 06:05, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Hmm... it seems people are continuing to deal with the chapter-specific stuff in each chapter's Talk page so the chapter-specific discussions that were cloned above can just be moved back I guess. Regarding overall issues, well discussion seems to have stopped. For now, why not put up the points made in the Dialogue Syntax section? i.e. |
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| − | I'd like to also put up the point of setting Kyon's narration tense with the 'Kyon is telling the story in the present from Vol 1 Ch 2 onwards, and before that he was giving backstory' rule of thumb. However, the lack of discussion on this point means we can't really put it up yet - there are valid alternate rules of thumb (e.g. most things after prologue/backstory-Ch-1 in immediate past tense) and we need to agree on one (even if that is as simple as 'whatever the original text uses'). |
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| − | Perhaps getting clearing the redundat chapter-specific discussions above would highlight how this has yet to be discussed? |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 08:59, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | ok. well i'll just put those two points up for now. |
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| − | It'll look better with something to complain about then nothing to look at. like now. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 09:31, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Regarding the "Narration Tenses" issue: to be honest, so long as we agree to stick to a consistent Tense processing standard, I'm not really bothered with what we decide on - I tend to naturally focus more on where the English doesn't seem to flow right and what tense is being used usually doesn't register as a problem to me. So, if no further discussion happens on this, shall we just say "stick with whatever tenses the original text uses" for preservation purposes and be done with this stagnant subject? I think the translators are naturally preserving the tenses from the original text so asking them to stick with that policy seems good enough to me. |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 09:35, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I think it's best we start discussing a solution to this, best to nip it in the buds, as this has potential to happen again. |
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| − | One idea I have in the future to have a translator "declare" which chapters they will commence work actively, one only. You cannot, "reserve" a chapter or do one chapter partly only to return to complete another one. Or alternativelr you could all agree together which should do which one, and we will note it down somewhere so that everyone sticks to it. |
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| − | It will be easier for Editors to standardlize the entire chapter, then to have more then one translator working, as experienced in chapter 05 ([http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/index.php?title=Talk:Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter5#Translation_Issues|Chapter Chapter 05 Translation Issue]). |
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| − | But then this will reduce the efficency, as most translators work faster then others, and this could result in random chapters being completed before others. at this moment i have't thought of a solution. |
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| − | but from the top of my head, we could split the chapters perhaps? and have fall back agreements,meaning that if a chapter is not completyed for whatever reason, the assigned translator for that chapter will know that another agreed translator will take over. |
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| − | food for thought. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 10:08, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | For small groups of people, it's best to keep things simple. Your suggested system may be necessary if we had 6+ active translators or so, but until then we can make do with a much simpler system: |
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| − | Create a page where translators announce the status of their work - what chapter and roughly how much of it they've translated. I'd imagine it would be most natural to work on one chapter at a time, but in case it's not... well have the translators discuss such points between themselves? Such discussion is easy in a small group like this provided necessary information (the status page) is readily available. |
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| − | mmm...I suppose so. |
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| − | But at this moment , there seems to be an agreement that Kinny will do Volume 01. |
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| − | As for the others volumes beyond that, well that is open to debate. |
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| − | Kinny and Thelastguardian favours a volume to volume approach, while i'am aware of the favouable arguments for it, i still do not believe it will ultilize the translators efficently. |
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| − | however i do like your idea, it is best to show all transparency, |
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| − | I think it's best to inform everyone and discuss this matter. |
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| − | Disptes fears that more then one translator operating one volume will yield lower quality for faster times. |
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| − | There is a happy medium that i believe we can reach, too many translators perhaps but surely having a few quality translators on one volume with editors to suppport them will more then compensate for the fears of "inconsistent style" after all, isn't this the point of this page? |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 11:20, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | == Standard English Words? i.e. "Consortium" == |
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| − | Just read the added contribution from kinny on Chapter 05. |
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| − | noticed you used the word, "Consortium" |
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| − | sounds strange, i've heard other alternatives such as The "Organisation". |
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| − | "Consortium" seems to imply a planet wide group yet Itsuki mentioned it only consists of 10 known members. when put with that even "Organisation" seems a bit grand. |
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| − | perhaps "brotherhood" sounds better? |
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| − | Either way i think its best we agree what words we should use, and also other important ones. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 10:21, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I vote for "Instrumentality" -- see discussion page for Chapter 5. |
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| − | --[[User:Freak Of Nature|Freak Of Nature]] 13:57, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | A couple of other standardising suggestions: |
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| − | 1) "Literature Club" not "Literacy Club" |
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| − | If no other discussion is generated on these two points after 2 days, I'll put them on the Format page |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 16:04, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I completely endorse [[User:Psieye|Psieye]]'s two points. These seem like simple and obvious standard translations. |
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| − | --[[User:Freak Of Nature|Freak Of Nature]] 16:13, 23 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Agreed. |
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| − | --[[User:Adelina|Adelina]] 14:25, 24 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Got nothing to complain about that. |
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| − | So i guess that's sorted. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 14:49, 24 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | == Common Japanese terms carried over == |
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| − | Notably "Moe" vs 'Turn-On Factor' - this is something most people are familiar with and those who aren't can be pointed to an easy reference. [[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] made an edit to Ch 2 implementing Moe which I think is perfectly reasonable, but it does bring up the issue of whether we want to completely avoid all mention of Japanese words or we allow ourselves to use ones which are widely known by the general Anime fan population. |
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| − | The other issue is to use "-sempai" or "-senpai": I'm going with the former. |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 05:09, 27 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I believe Moe to be fine even with normal readers, because in the very next line it says "turn on factor", so the explanation is built into the text. |
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| − | --[[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 17:00, 27 April 2006 (EST) |
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| − | Yes, i have noticed [[Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] constant activitives, anymore and i might have to put him/her on the new editors list. (^^;) |
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| − | I'm fine with Moe, As i tihnk majority of reads can understand it, but we can't assume that everyone knows this. Perhaps it's best to link the word to an explaination. We already began to do this already with certain words, except the linking. |
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| − | As for the senior issue, well it has been general accepted that the romanji spelling of that word is "Senpai" i have yet to see anyone use "sempai", not even in fansubs, although i've seen it some dictionaries, but those are 10yrs out of date so i guess it doesn't count. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 05:36, 27 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Actually, most appearances in Ch 2 are in the "Sempai" spelling ^^;; Well that can be changed - so we're going to stick with the "Senpai" version then? |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 06:23, 27 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Agreed. |
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| − | Best to put those points up, while your at it. |
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| + | == Unresolved Issues == |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 06:55, 27 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| + | The link that says that this page [format guidelines] is available in Spanish is incorrect. If you click on the Spanish link, the language displayed is actually Portuguese. I will change the label if I can. --[[User:Popocatepetl|popocatepetl]] ([[User talk:Popocatepetl|talk]]) 13:30, 3 June 2013 (CDT) |
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| − | Well, senpai ''is'' the romanization of the word... [[Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] |
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| + | === [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=307 Where's the "References & Translator's Notes" section?] === |
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| − | I vote for ''senpai'', too. --[[User:Freak Of Nature|Freak Of Nature]] 14:04, 27 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | == Where's the "References & Translator's Notes" section? == |
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So we've agreed to link terms and references in some separate Notes/References section, but where should this be? ['''Option 1'''] The Discussion pages of each chapter? If so, we'll have to clean up those pages - old discussions archived away (or just deleted) while leaving space for current issues to still be debated. GTO, perhaps they should be unified to look something like this? |
So we've agreed to link terms and references in some separate Notes/References section, but where should this be? ['''Option 1'''] The Discussion pages of each chapter? If so, we'll have to clean up those pages - old discussions archived away (or just deleted) while leaving space for current issues to still be debated. GTO, perhaps they should be unified to look something like this? |
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| − | == Chinese vs. Japanese Translation == |
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| + | === [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=16 Navigation] === |
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| − | I think we need to figure out a policy for second-hand translations; not to be rude to Kinny Riddle or anything, the translations are great. It's just that we need a double-check or at least some way of making sure everything was accurate compared to the actual Japanese novel itself. Maybe not now, maybe sometime later in the future, but it'd at least put to rest these translation nuances. Like a total checkover or something, if people don't get time to actually do the sort of stuff mentioned on the main page. --[[User:Velocity7|velocity7]] 0:05, 26 April 2006 (EDT) |
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| − | My point, must it be accurate to the Japanese novel? |
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| − | I just think that unless its a word that is absolute vital to the plot, then i don't think slight mistranslation would hinder it much. |
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| − | But then again, i don't see why we can't at leased check, if an editor has the time to do it. |
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| − | I'm not saying we should start correcting whole sentence just to fit the original, but within sensible reason. And not just for the sake of perfection. (which isn't fun, when it becomes serious.) |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 21:21, 25 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | As we'd discussed over at Animesuki, while it's nice to be as accurate as possible to the original works, we shouldn't get too stressed or lose too much time to striving for that perfection. That's why I've put up the disclaimer that some of these translations are based on the Chinese edition - they're not identical but they convey the story accurately enough (most people don't care for the trivial details). More Haruhi scripts of decent quality is preferred over few extremely perfect scripts. Deviations by the Chinese Edition that do get spotted in our scripts can be fixed as they are spotted by whoever happens to spot them (hence why Anonymous Edits have now been allowed). |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 21:33, 25 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | oh yeah! |
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| − | ........ (has a memory of a Goldfish) |
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| − | er, I remember...Just wanted to inform our non-animesuki contributors over here. (^^;) |
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| − | So er, guess that's sorted then. ^^) |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 21:53, 25 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Hmm. Event though we agree to accept the slightly lowered standard of not having to stay true to the Japanese version, but accepting the second-hand translation from Chinese as a working standard, anyone who wants to fiddle with bringing the text in line with the Japanese version can still do so, right? |
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| − | --[[User:Freak Of Nature|Freak Of Nature]] 01:27, 26 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Yes that's right. We don't need to stress ourselves to get our drafts out at "identical in style, vocabulary and atmosphere to the Japanese novels" standard but anyone who wants to upgrade the text from our "acceptable" level to higher is free to tinker around. |
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| − | --[[User:Psieye|Psieye]] 03:24, 26 April 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | The two terms to be discussed are "'Shinjins" and "Locked Space" |
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| − | If there are no alternatives we will leave them as it is, but i would like to hear so alternatives. |
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| − | I feel we should give 'Shinjins" an english version, perhaps "behemoth" even "leviathan" or "colossus" |
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| − | As for "locked space" |
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| − | perhaps, "Locked Dimension" or "Closed Dimension"? |
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| − | please discuss. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 07:49, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | My general experiance with translating is that "special terms" are often better off untranslated. One good reason why is that later on, the terms may be clarified or expanded upon by the author - in such cases, if an english word or phrase had been used, it may well need changing. Naturally, untranslated terms should always be explained to readers - ie what it means and why it is left untranslated. The word "Shinjin" is an existing word, which could be translated as "godlike person" and in the world of Haruhi, I think that is close to the intended meaning. The word doesn't accurately describe the being, and is pretty vague anyway, so translating it into an english word doesn't necessarily help. A word like "Titan" implies something large and with a human-like shape but a "Shinjin" isn't a physical creature or even alive - maybe something like "Golem" would more appropriate, but even then it implies something solid and physical while a Shinjin certainly isn't. In the case of "Heisa Kuukan", "kuukan" is simply space or dimension in this case, while "heisa" could mean either "closed" (as in a factory being closed / shut-down) or "exclusive", "isolated" or "closed" (as in a "closed system" or "closed society"). I think the second meaning of "heisa" is the intended meaning for "Heisa Kuukan" - ie "Isolated Dimension". Not translating special terms also saves on long-running arguments as to the "best" translation :) |
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| − | --[[User:84.12.192.200|84.12.192.200]] 10:55, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * mm...I kinda like "Isolated Dimension" |
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| − | It does convey instant communication to what it means. |
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| − | Not so sure about the "shinjin" though.... |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 12:11, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Just brainstorming here: |
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| − | ''heisa kuukan'' : Sequestered space, disconnected space, dead continuum, dissociated space |
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| − | ''shinjin'' : Titans, Avatars, Colossi, Engrams |
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| − | --[[User:Freak Of Nature|Freak Of Nature]] 13:06, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | oh hey! "Engrams" sounds cool! It's somrthing i'll use to name my personal Mecha! But then again no one will understand what it's meant to be, but "Avatar" ...mmm... |
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| − | "Those blue creatures, we call them ''''Avatars'''', but, as I've told you before, they are greatly related to Suzumiya-san's mental condition. We're the same, of course. Once a Locked Space appears, once the ''''Engrams'''' begin their movement....." |
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| − | actually "Engrams" do sound good, but "Avatars" is just as good. Can't decide yet. |
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| − | As for the "locked space" i still like "Isolated Dimension" (^^;) |
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| − | Edit: Actually I gave it some thought, and "Avatar" seems to be the one i like best. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 13:16, 1 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | As pseudo-scientific as it is, "engram" is actually the closest thing you come to a term describing what the blue giants's function is. Of course, it is laden down with baggage from its use in Scientology and NLP. |
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| − | Since we're already using English translations for some of the other terms, it may be best to continue doing so for all other terms, in the interest of uniformity. SOS Brigade instead of SOS-Dan, or Information Entity. |
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| − | I'd go for Avatar for Shinjin, since those blue giants are manifestations of Haruhi's subconscious. If we want to go for (pseudo) scientific, why not take a leaf from Freud's book and call them Avatars of Id, Id being the part of us that operates solely on the basis of utility, not caring what other people think. Come to think of it, Haruhi is almost all Id. |
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| − | As for "Locked Space", something about that wording just makes me fidget. The kanji for heisa mean "Closed and Locked", so I'd like a term that adequately conveys both meanings, as well as being suitably poetic or descriptive. |
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| − | [[User:Eleutheria|Eleutheria]] 07:56, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | well, lets get this straight, are we going down the pseudo-scientific names or the descriptive non pseudo-scientific names? |
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| − | personally, I don't mind either, but it might be easier for us to decide on these matters if we decided which path to go before hand that will best suit the atmosphere of the novel. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 08:40, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | i believe we should use "sealed dimension" if it's decided that the group will use their own translation, as stated earlier, that the author might go more into it, though if anyone read all the novels out, they might be able to help. |
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| − | Do i need to post my uder here too? |
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| − | [[User: asukira|asukira]] 09:02, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Urk... anything but Engrams... why not just pop for "thetans" or "xenu" if you're gonna use that. I've got an idea... you could use "Engram" if you also use "Closet" for the locked space. Like "Tom Cruise has a huge engram trapped in his closet." (My apologies to scientologists... or not). Anyway, to suddenly become serious, I've always like idea of "pocket dimension" or "hammerspace"... so if you apply similar ideas to the fact that this is Haruhi's moods that dictate these things - how about "mood space" or "doom space" or "spontaneous dissociative personality disorder dimension" |
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| − | ps: is "Kyon" Japanese for "LRon"? |
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| − | [[User: chumsize|chumsize]] 15:37, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | *** LOLOLROFL! |
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| − | Some very creative & amusing alternatives, but let us not stray from the critical points here, and decide on an answer first to therfore know which types we should consider. |
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| − | (^^;) |
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| − | So I will ask the question again. |
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| − | '''are we going down the pseudo-scientific names or the descriptive non pseudo-scientific names?''' |
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| − | Which will it be? Which suit the novel best? |
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| − | If we agree it should have a more pseudo scientific theme, then "Engram", "Avatar of Id" or even the creative "thetan", "Xenu" "Combine" would fit the bill, but if we are simply going for a more descriptive English alternatives, "Avatar" , "Clossi" or "titan" it should be. |
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| − | By deciding on one of these paths,it will allow us to easily narrow down the choices for us the pick the most suitable. |
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| − | (^^) |
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| − | My personal choice on this matter after some thought suggest to me that a more pseudo-scientific term seems to be the most fitting. |
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| − | everyone please consider this question, and tell me what's your choice. |
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| − | P.S: No Chumsize, I do not believe "kyon" is Japanese for "LRon", as so much as "Dick" (which stands for "Richard") is English for "Rin" (^^;) |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 16:01, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I may not be an expert on what sounds good when translating Japanese to English, but my personal preference lies with just Shinjin. Although, I've never really been a big fan of Americanizing terms myself, but I don't see the point in trying to think of a unique term when there's already something fairly unique-sounding right in front of me... In any case, don't know about everyone else, but I've already grown quite fond of calling it just that. |
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| − | -UltimaLuminaire 16:41, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * We have already given unique Japanese terms the English equivalent, so unless there is a good reason for this to be an exception, it seems logical to keep this consistence. |
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| − | If people think it's fine as it is, let us hear your view, if the majority think it is fine them it will stay. |
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| − | But if it does, then we will have to put some notes just to inform the readers what this term means, or something. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 16:58, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I'd normally keep certain Japanese words "as is" in the translations simply due to words that can't be concisely tranlated in to another language, which is English in this case. |
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| − | That being said, may I ask what is the actual kanji that is used for both "Shinjin" and "Heisa kuukan"? |
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| − | The suggestions for Shinjin so far seem to be fair translations of what it is, considering it's a giant humanoid of unknown constitution. The term Avatar does appear to suit "Shinjin" best though, according to apropriated translation above. |
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| − | Locked space or closed space seem a little ambiguous as translations though, even if they may be direct translations of the original characters used. It appears to be more like an alternate or parallel reality, where some things exist and are identical to the "normal reality" and the rest are absent (that being presence of constructs and general lack of living organisms). To add the notion of the seperate "reality" being inaccessible to all but a tiny few, I suppose one could try to define it as a restricted/confined reality. I don't really think "space" or "dimension" are as good a translation as "reality", since the term reality in itself, implies what could happen if the restricted/confined reality was no longer as such. |
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| − | I personally won't mind the use of romanji or kanji-terms, they sound and look cooler anyways, and we all know what they mean. However, you guys might have to add footnotes saying how one should describe those terms, IF you are going to stay with the original translations. |
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| − | However, i still support the use of "Avatar" and "Sealed dimension", just because they sound better and fit better. |
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| − | [[User: asukira|asukira]] 05:31, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | * Unfortunately I do not know what the kanji are for "Shinjin" or "Heisa kuukan" but hopefully a Translator might provide you the characters. |
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| − | In the mean time lets summaries the status of this topic: |
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| − | There are two users who are supporting the current use of the Romanji |
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| − | For alternative English translation for "shinjin" the term "Avatar" has several users who find this to be favourable. |
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| − | For an alternative English translaton for "Heisa kuukan" there seems to be consensus that it should be changed, but no clear choice has yet to gain substantial favour. |
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| − | Contributors who have yet to expressive your views, please join in, to help resolve this debate. |
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| − | (^^) |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 17:50, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | shinjin - 神人 |
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| − | Heisa kuukan - 閉鎖空間 |
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| − | ...here you go |
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| − | [[User: asukira|asukira]] 18:11, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I'd vote for Titan. They were human-gods and they were huge. Avatar has nothing to do with Shinjin and is basically making something else up to describe it. |
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| − | My vote... actual vote... no jokes... |
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| − | shinjin = "demigod" - the english meaning of this word can mean "not quite man, not quite god"... seems viable |
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| − | Heisakuukan = "dissociated space" - I like the reading of heisa as "unsociable"... and this conveys it... |
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| − | [[User: chumsize|chumsize]] 21:38, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I also like the word "avatar" a lot, for the reasons others have already described. |
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| − | As for "heisa kuukan", I agree with Da~Mike's notion that the word "space" or "dimension" is insufficient as a translation. If we're already going with descriptive names, I too would prefer the term "reality" to "space" or "dimension". It invokes the connotation that "heisa kuukan" is akin to a parallel plane of existence altogether. The term "reality", in this case, is much more descriptive than "space" or "dimension" (not to mention that this usage of the word "dimension" is itself erroneous). |
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| − | As for the qualifier, I think "sealed" works really well (i.e. Sealed space, Sealed reality) -- it doesn't sound as awkward as "locked space" or "closed space", IMHO, and it accurately describes the properties of "heisa kuukan". |
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| − | So, to sum it up, votes for "avatar" and "sealed reality". |
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| − | [[User:Synecdoche|Synecdoche]] 21:53, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | To the person that said Avatar doesn't fit, that is not true. Look up the term Avatar at dictionary.com. It has many connotations that parallel the Shinjin. For one, the term Avatar is used to describe an entity that has manifested due to a source. Anyone who has knowledge of Dungeons and Dragons (ergo: Forgotten Realms) or any other fantasies thereof would understand this term and the uses it has (ie: an Avatar of a God or Goddess *wink wink*). However, that's one of the setbacks to such a term. It's more widely used than many would think, and holds a sort of redundance if it was used (and I don't know about you, but I'd prefer to have Suzumiya Haruhi stay low on the redundant side, which the translators and editors so far have done admirably). All the choices up till now have reflected well with the style of the anime, and I'm very biased towards afk's translations, so keep that in mind if you're reading this. ;) |
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| − | It's really up to you to see if Avatar really fits. |
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| − | As for Heisa Kuukan, all I can say is that after reading it as Sealed Dimension, it's hard to go back, but I'm also pretty open to Locked Dimension. They both sound fairly suave to me. I do not understand why the term Dimension is so erroneous here since it's connotations seem to be similar in fiction. |
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| − | UltimaLuminaire 23:00, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | :: (Re: UltimaLuminaire) |
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| − | :: The word "dimension" formally refers to any sort of a spatial extent: depth, height, width, height, for example. The concept is also very precisely and formally defined in the fields of mathematics and physics. |
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| − | :: Contemporary science fiction authors misuse the word to mean alternate or parallel universes and such (i.e. He travelled to another dimension.) -- and that just irks me. Although I guess you can argue that since this usage of the term has become so commonplace, it can no longer be considered erroneous. |
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| − | :: I guess I'm just being a prescriptivist prick. =P |
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| − | :: [[User:Synecdoche|Synecdoche]] 22:34, 2 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | mmmm..."sealed reality" doesn't seem to roll off the tongue as readily as "sealed dimension" or "Sealed space". |
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| − | How about a compromise? "dissociated Reality" sounds pretty good. |
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| − | Has the right amount of big words. (^^) |
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| − | As for "shinjin" it seems that "avatar" is more or less certain, unless there is more objections. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 05:17, 3 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I was surprised at the amount of discussion this issue has caused, even though I really shouldn't be, as I've known about the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Color_of_the_bikeshed bike shed] principle for awhile. This is the first time I've seen it on a scale like this though, as I've never participated in a distributed project before. |
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| − | '''My own thoughts on what makes a good name:''' |
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| − | # Can say less than the term means, but should never say more. |
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| − | #*You will be hearing the term so many times, that the meaning-associations will be set up, regardless, and you won't need whatever mnemonic it is that you wanted to build into the name. If you accidentally added extra meaning to your term, you'd be stuck having to mentally negate that meaning every time you read it. |
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| − | # Doesn't have any extra baggage. In other words, it doesn't bring to mind any images that you don't want associated with your term. |
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| − | #*Think of all the extra baggage that comes with terms like, say ... "Demon", "Demigod", "Titan", "Troll", "Behemoth" -- They all say something of what the Shinjin are, but at the same time, they add meanings and connotations that simply aren't there in the story. It's very counterproductive to add erroneous meanings, only to have to work to undo them afterwards. |
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| − | # Doesn't have any extra baggage. Especially extra emotional baggage. |
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| − | #*What if "Neon Genesis Evangelion" were released now, and the "Angels" were called "Terrorists" instead? The use of "Angels" carried plenty of emotional baggage, but it was baggage that was intended. |
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| − | # Doesn't have any extra baggage. Including any unintended connotations as to the nature of the namer. |
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| − | #*That's why I'm against any strong pseudo-science namings. A name like that gives the impression that we know more than we do. Again, that extra information in a nice sounding name is just extra baggage -- especially if something later in the story directly contradicts what's in the name. |
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| − | #*On the other hand, since it is a group of paranormals who did the naming, it's perfectly reasonable to have a paranormal bent to the naming. |
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| − | # Doesn't have any extra baggage. |
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| − | '''That being said,''' |
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| − | :I'm perfectly content with |
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| − | ::*either "Shinjin" or "Godlike entity" ''(its generic English counterpart)'' for the glowing giants, |
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| − | :and |
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| − | ::*any one of "Locked/Sealed Space", "Locked/Closed/Sealed/Isolated Dimension", or even the romaji "Heisa kuukan." |
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| − | '''With respect to "Avatar":''' |
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| − | :*I feel that it adds images not present in the original term -- as per my #2 point. The emphasis is on the fact that it's a manifestation of Haruhi's frustration. The original naming emphasizes its capabilities, e.g. "godlike being." -- and this is the aspect people with paranormal capabilities would be more interested in, I believe. |
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| − | :*The first thing I think of when I think of the Shinjin ''(not the name, the thing)'' is "Holy hotcakes! Big glowing things! And they might destroy the world if they're not stopped!" Their power, in other words. |
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| − | :*Conclusion: Medium spicy objection. Not my favorite, but not the worst suggestion of this discussion. Please add a translator note, no matter what term you choose. |
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| − | '''With respect to "dissassociated reality":''' |
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| − | :*This immediately brings to mind the psychological concept, "disassociated from reality." And that ''definitely'' has a lot of extra baggage to deal with, semantic, emotional, usage-wise -- the works. |
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| − | :*Conclusion: Strong objection. Please use one of the more generic sounding terms. Again, at the very least, please add a translator note, no matter what. |
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| − | Whew. In closing, let me say that participating in this bikeshed discussion was rather fun. I guess that's why they're so popular! |
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| − | --[[User:The naming game|The naming game]] 09:24, 3 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Many thanks for the kanji asukira. |
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| − | Okay, I did quite a bit of looking up regarding both "Shinjin" and "Heisa kuukan" and I decided to break them down in to their constituent characters to try and understand how the term originated. Mind you, there's quite alot of mess associated with each character: |
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| − | shinjin - 神人 Heisa kuukan - 閉鎖空間 |
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| − | 神 = shin = myth, religion, mystery, God, nerves(??) |
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| − | 人 = jin = person, people |
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| − | 神人 = shinjin = God person |
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| − | 閉 = hei = closing, going out of business |
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| − | 鎖 = sa = chain |
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| − | 閉鎖 = heisa = closing/closed down |
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| − | 空 = kuu = sky, air |
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| − | 間 = kan = between, indirect, interval (time or space) |
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| − | 空間 = kuukan = space, room |
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| − | If we analyse the kanji and what they all refer to above, it seems quite shockingly apparent that the word "avatar" suits "shinjin" perfectly in almost every respect (except nerves of course...). The word "avatar" definitely seems to connotate the idea of an unknown, yet supernaturally powerful being in the image of a person. |
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| − | Moving away from whatever religious grounds I may be transgressing on to, from what I've read about the nature of the "shinjin" (from the translations provided), in my opinion, the word avatar appears to define "shinjin" aptly. |
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| − | (I had a feeling that if the word avatar popped up, someone would mention D&D. Although I must say that to anyone familiar to the Forgotten Realms/D&D/Ultima series, the term might seem a bit... out of place?... Being a fan of those books myself, I still support the usage of avatar as the translation.) |
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| − | "Heisa" appears to be pretty straighforward here. Although commonly associated with the closing/liquidation of a business, the kanji "sa" is related to a chain, thus the interpretation of locked or sealed is less ambiguous. |
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| − | "Kuukan" is as bad as I had imagined it to be. The terms of sky or space or room seems rather vague and a bit cliché. I still believe that the word "reality" better defines what it is described to be. However, I do understand the general sentiment that the word "sealed dimension" or "locked space" has a suave sound to it. |
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| − | I did look up for as many possible synonyms for sealed and locked that could sound catchy. |
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| − | Here's the list of options: |
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| − | * sealed |
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| − | * bound |
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| − | * confined |
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| − | * restricted |
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| − | * limited (very ambiguous term) |
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| − | * finite = limited = bound = least ambiguous |
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| − | As unambiguous as finite appeared to be, I expect there to plenty of conceptual problems with using that term, the primary being; if there is a finite reality, is there an infinte reality? |
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| − | That would be a headache... (same problem with limited) |
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| − | As a comparison check, let's use this sentence from chapter 6: |
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| − | "Sealed Realities / Bound Realities / Locked Realities / Confined Realities / Restricted Realities / Limited Realities / Finite Realities occur randomly. Sometimes it appears once every other day, and sometimes it appears once every several months. Yet, one thing's for sure..." |
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| − | Based on this, I'd say either Confined Reality or Restricted Reality seems to work. (Not dissociated reality... I whole-heartedly agree with The naming game on that point.) |
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| − | [[User: Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 17:31, 3 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | I was thinking about this unconsciously, in the recesses of my mind (I do this a lot, when there's something bugging me), and something occurred to me. So far as I can gather, what is happening with the ''heisa kuukan'' is that a part of normal spacetime is being cut off from the rest and isolated. So... with that in mind, why not '''sequestered topology'''? Granted, it's science-fictiony, but it somehow sounds like the kind of self-important term that Koizumi might use. |
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| − | On the topic of the ''shinjin''.... the phrase "Avatars of the Id" got me thinking about the ''Monsters of the Id'' phrase from the classic SF film '''Forbidden Planet'''. In a way, the Suzumiya stories tap into a lot of the old archetypical SF memes -- what we really need now, to complete the set, is a mad scientist! |
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| − | --[[User:Freak Of Nature|Freak Of Nature]] 15:41, 3 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | My first impression of "sequestered topology" was: "Wow. What an exotic phrase! It's catchy too!... but what does it mean???" |
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| − | In that respect, I must say it really does enchance the understanding of how dumbfounded Kyon was when Koizumi started telling his story. However, as lovely as it sounds, we must question two primary things: |
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| − | Without adhering to the latter of the two, it would become more of an adaptation rather than a translation and as far as I know, most adaptations have a habit of changing parts of a story completely. I don't think any of us want to do that so. |
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| − | To examine the relevance of "sequestered topology", let's break it down into its seperate words then. (Definitions copied and paster. Courtesy of Dictionary.com) |
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| − | Sequestered = |
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| − | # To cause to withdraw into seclusion. |
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| − | # To remove or set apart; segregate. See Synonyms at isolate. |
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| − | # Law. |
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| − | ## To take temporary possession of (property) as security against legal claims. |
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| − | ## To requisition and confiscate (enemy property). |
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| − | Topology = |
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| − | # Topographic study of a given place, especially the history of a region as indicated by its topography. |
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| − | # Medicine. The anatomical structure of a specific area or part of the body. |
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| − | # Mathematics. The study of the properties of geometric figures or solids that are not changed by homeomorphisms, such as stretching or bending. Donuts and picture frames are topologically equivalent, for example. |
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| − | # Computer Science. The arrangement in which the nodes of a LAN are connected to each other. |
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| − | First off, "topology" seems to be too vague, especially if it means a study of a place rather than being a place. Topography would be a better substitute for topology but it also pertains a greater proportion of ambiguity than either space or dimension, let alone reality. |
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| − | Sequestered originally seemed to be a good match until I noticed that it's also synonomous with isolated. The naming game already pointed out his distaste for that word in conjunction with reality so I guess not. |
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| − | Nice suggestion though. |
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| − | :--[[User:Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 00:24, 4 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | ==== 4th May End of Topic Deadline for "Shinjin" & "Heisa Kuukan" ==== |
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| − | I was surprised at the amount of discussion this issue has caused, even though I really shouldn't be...In closing, let me say that participating in this bikeshed discussion was rather fun. I guess that's why they're so popular! |
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| − | Why Thank you, It's my speciality. (^-^)/ |
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| − | So from what comments i've read so far, I think we are getting to the end of this discussion, so i would like to place a deadline on this topic, which will be as stated above. |
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| − | One of the reasons these discussions are so fun in my opinion, is for them to not drag on for too long. (^^) |
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| − | So, lets lets summarise the current status. |
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| − | No pseudo-scientific names, so there are no real objections to "Avatar" but further refinements are need in the form of notes, to make sepecial mention of "godlike being". |
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| − | As for "Heisa Kuukan" I have the general feeling that there are no real objection to using the second word of the term "reality", as it accurately describles the phenomenon, use of "confined", "restricted", "Limited", "sealed", "locked" or "finite" is better then "dissociated", and additional notes should be appended regardlessly of what terms are chosen. |
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| − | personally, if i was to choose one of those terms i do like "confined Reality". |
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| − | But I can settle for "sealed Reality" as a compromise. |
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| − | I can currently count in this discussion support for both terms, which at the moment would result in a deadlock. |
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| − | If there is no clear choice, by the end of the deadline i will make a decision, So I appeal to other users who have yet to decide to add your own comments, to list your support or objections, before its too late. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 11:48, 3 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | :'''A few quick notes on "reality"''' |
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| − | : before this deadline thing rolls around. ''(I keep getting sucked into this discussion...)'' |
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| − | :'''Consider:''' |
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| − | :* "Compared to mine, yours is a confined/restricted/limited reality." |
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| − | :* "You live in a confined/restricted/limited reality." |
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| − | :* "You're out of touch with reality." |
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| − | :There are negative associations that aren't there if we substitute a more generic word like "space" or "dimension." |
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| − | :'''If we ''do'' end up using "reality",''' ''(and it looks like we're going to)'' |
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| − | :* I'd favor one of the less familiar sounding compounds like "bound/sealed/locked reality" |
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| − | :* Also, the image of the Shinjin trying to break out of the "bound/sealed/locked space/dimension/reality" fits nicely, since that's essentially what it's trying to do. |
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| − | :**Now that I think of it, "confined" isn't all that bad of a choice, in this light. |
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| − | :** "Breaking out of a limited/finite reality" makes the Shinjin sound like a struggling philosopher. |
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| − | :** "Breaking out of an isolated reality" makes it sound like a mental patient. |
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| − | :** "Breaking out of a lonely reality" makes it sound emo. ''(Someone stop me before I rewrite all the chapters in a self-absorbed, whiny style!)'' |
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| − | :* Conclusion: I'm fine with any terms that don't have unintended emotional/metaphysical implications. |
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| − | :'''By the way, if the natives here are still restless for something else to discuss,''' |
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| − | :please stop by the talk pages [[Talk:Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter1| for Vol 1 Ch 1]], and [[Talk:Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter3| for Vol 1 Ch 3]], or [[Talk:Format_guideline#Sentence_order_of_interleaved_dialogue_and_description.| here on this page]] to give some input on the issues I asked about there. ''(Bikesheds galore!)'' |
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| − | :One more thing. ...Just realized that my chosen username is scarily appropriate, considering the current discussion topic. Ok. I'm really done this time. ''(I can quit anytime...)'' |
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| − | :--[[User:The naming game|The naming game]] 13:35, 3 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Hmmm... Interesting point you raised there on the possible negative implications of using reality The naming game. That aspect honestly never crossed my mind though, now that you mention it. |
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| − | However, I honestly don't think that people would think that way regarding that particular term (e.g. "confined reality") since the story goes on to explain the nature and context of a "confined reality" used for the story, and not it being a form of derisive language. |
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| − | Let's see what everyone else has to say about this though. If people aren't happy with the final decision, they can still go ahead and save a copy of the file for themselves and edit away to their heart's desire. |
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| − | I browsed through the other sections briefly and I'll look at them in more detail tomorrow. Preferably after I get tomorrow's exam out of the way... ^^;; |
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| − | :--[[User:Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 22:05, 3 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | I'll give this until 2300 (UTC) so user you still got some time left to add your own comments, on this matter. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 02:20, 4 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | I would think most people who come here who have at least a certain knowledge of japanese, and even if they don't, i'm quite sure if we put the kanji in a footnote, they'll find out what it means in translators, or we can provide the information. |
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| − | This way we can prevent any unseen explanation the author might give to these terms. |
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| − | However, I can see that most of us prefer to use a term that is easier to understand on plain sight. If that's the case, then I am supporting the decisions of the editors, because I find alot of them fitting to use |
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| − | --[[User:199.88.96.65|199.88.96.65]] 08:30, 4 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Right. It seems like it been sorted. |
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| − | I'll be putting up the terms now. |
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| − | Which are "Avatar" & "Sealed Reality" |
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| − | Notes will be need/or further clarification for them. |
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| − | Thanks for all your input, this bikeshed topic is now officially closed. |
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| − | \(^^)/ |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 14:25, 4 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | == Markup: CAPITALS, ''italics'' and '''bold''', oh my! == |
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| − | == Proposal to revised the number of Translators per volume == |
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| − | Hello, there are more Translators now, and it seems to me that we should revise how many translators can work on any one volume, |
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| − | So I think we should revised this guideline and allow three Translators to work on a volume, |
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| − | We have more then enought active Editors, who are very efficient so any doubts about inconsistancies are minimal in my opinion. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 07:05, 6 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| − | Mmm, worth a try I'd say. Now that we have better tracking of who translates what and a functional "Editors discuss matters to come to standardised decisions" atmosphere in place, worth testing it out. Though I'd still be wary - the more people on the project, the greater the administrative and organisational prowess needed (and coming up with large-scale procedures that don't bog down into uber legalese etc is hard). |
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| − | What I mean by this is that having too many people might increase the number of debates due to conflicting opinions regarding translations of the original text. The translators have far greater "power" in terms of the decision making of how the original Japanese text should be interpreted, much like how many people can look at the same picture in an art gallery and interpret its meaning in multitudes of ways. Editors on the other hand, can't do such a thing as their source material tends to be the result of the translators' work. |
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| − | As long as the translators can reach agreements on their styles of interpretation, then having more translators should be highly beneficial to this project. |
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| − | --[[User:Da~Mike|Da~Mike]] 18:12, 6 May 2006 (GMT) |
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| − | Another thing I'd like to note is that, some of the volumes have chapters which chain together (for example, volume 1). On the other hand, other volumes (such as volume 8) have standalone chapters which are meant to be read on their own. Correct me on this one if I'm wrong, but if this is the case then volumes like say, volume 3, could have as many as 5 or 6 translators all working at the same time. And since the chapters are all not connected together (theoretically?), this would make it easier on translators to some extent. |
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| − | --[[User:Velocity7|velocity7]] 22:08, 6 May 2006 (EDT) |
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| − | Yes you are correct, Volume 03 chapters are individual stories. It has already been decided that on volume 03, that all the translators are allowed to register one chapter. |
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| − | Besides 03, 05 (is undecided yet. possibility is allow one translator to a "pair". Prologue & a corrosponding chapter), 06 & 08, the other chapters in the remaining volumes are more or less connected, and what i'am proposing is allowing more then two translators per volume, This means while the maximum of half a volume for any one translator, the volume will effectively split into three sections. So for example, 8 chapters are in one volume, one translator can register four of them, while two other translators can still register for two each. |
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| − | [[User:Onizuka-gto|Onizuka-gto]] 20:00, 6 May 2006 (PDT) |
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No one's really discussed this, so I've added a navigation bar of sorts to the bottom of all completed chapters/entries/etc. Note that I had to use hardcoded values since for some reason the [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/skins/monobook/main.css main.css] does not include "wikitable" or "prettytable" as a class, let alone have the values required for it. Values in question can be found [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/MediaWiki:Common.css here]. |
No one's really discussed this, so I've added a navigation bar of sorts to the bottom of all completed chapters/entries/etc. Note that I had to use hardcoded values since for some reason the [http://www.baka-tsuki.net/project/skins/monobook/main.css main.css] does not include "wikitable" or "prettytable" as a class, let alone have the values required for it. Values in question can be found [http://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/MediaWiki:Common.css here]. |
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| − | == Solution to Partial Script Contributed == |
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| − | == Templates for common entities == |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=303 anything to put on the front page?]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=304 Chapters with multiple Translators Conflicting]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=302 Kyon's Narration Tense]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=17 Markup: CAPITALS, ''italics'' and bold, oh my!]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=96 Page names]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=299 Proposal to revise the number of Translators per volume]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=14 Solution to Partial Script Contributed]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=15 Templates for common entities]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=301 Chinese vs. Japanese Translation]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=306 Common Japanese terms carried over]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=323 Correct English terms for "Shinjins" and "Locked Space"]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=322 Dialogue syntax issues]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=283 SOS-Dan's full name]''' |
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| + | *'''[http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=305 Standard English Words? i.e. "Consortium"]''' |
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| + | == Page formatting in full-text PDFs == |
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| + | I noticed that the Utsuro no Hako to Zero no Maria full-text PDF is extremely difficult to read. I noticed multiple reasons for this. For one, the lines are very long, over 100 characters per line. Secondly, it's in Calibri, a sans-serif font that is the default in Microsoft Office 2007. That it's sans-serif doesn't really matter, but that font in particular doesn't seem to work well. |
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| + | This came to mind because I'm currently doing major offline edits for the first chapter of a teaser project, Tabi ni Deyou, and I'm working in the LaTeX typesetting program. I'm using the A5 paper size instead of A4 and the default LaTeX font (Computer Modern), and I find that it's far more readable than the aforementioned PDF I downloaded, with about 60 characters per line and really smooth typesetting. It's far more like reading a real light novel, except on a computer screen. I compared it to my official Suzumiya Haruhi English translations, and the pages are about the same physical size, but the margins are slightly smaller in my PDF, though it's not a drastic difference. |
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| + | In short, I was wondering: should there be guidelines for PDF conversions of fully translated novels for readability and consistency? Also, should they reference Baka-Tsuki (which the Utsuro no Hako one has no mention of)? Should they credit the translators and editors? [[User:CarVac|CarVac]] 05:25, 21 March 2011 (EDT) |
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| + | 3 things: [http://www.baka-tsuki.org/forums/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=2864 guidelines], or the closest we have. Additionally, I've worked with LaTeX, admittedly more on the mathematics side, and it seems like converting a whole text to it would be resource intensive, unless there exists scripts to do so. Additionally different typesetters for LaTeX may have different default fonts (I know that the major implementation is different for Mac and Windows, at least). What program are you using, and is the font available online somewhere? I also observe that many of the PDF translations are available only on the forum: I would definitely run a poll (I think translators have permission to make them, I know project editors don't), in addition to any debate here on wiki, before creating any policy, especially with regards to giving credit. --[[User:Saganatsu|Saganatsu]] 07:26, 21 March 2011 (EDT) |
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| + | LaTeX is designed so that no matter what system you run it on, you will always get the same result. It's free and open-source, and it's available for basically any system ever. Personally I use LaTeX 2e on Linux, but you should get the same exact result for any operating system, and Computer Modern comes with every install of LaTeX so far as I know. Also, LaTeX is designed for books as well as mathematics; several publishing companies use it to typeset their books. |
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| + | It's actually not that hard to convert a novel to LaTeX; the hardest part was formatting the title page photo to fill the sheet, but I could take what I have done and make it into a template for future use. My code could use a little neatening and documentation in that case, though. Then, you could simply download the images, copy the wiki code into a new file, and use find-and-replace on things like ellipses, quotes, photos, italics, and section breaks. I converted a chapter to LaTeX in about half an hour that way, so it's not a big time investment to create a PDF, unless the chapter started out with extremely inconsistent formatting. --[[User:CarVac|CarVac]] 16:07, 21 March 2011 (EDT) |
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| + | That's great! I'm going to look for a wikicode->LaTeX converter, and If I don't find one, probably try tot build one myself. If I end up building one myself could I look at what you've produced to get the formatting looking correct? --[[User:Saganatsu|Saganatsu]] 16:21, 21 March 2011 (EDT) |
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| + | One thing is that any existing wikicode->LaTeX converter is not likely to be suitable to typesetting light novels as books. There are other issues such as the fact that different projects format the novels slightly differently. So, I just created a LaTeX document that explains mostly everything on how to convert the wikicode to LaTeX, and also doubles as a template; you copy it into a new file, modify it, and compile it, and it'll render a nice novel! I'm gonna post it on the forum thread you linked to earlier. --[[User:CarVac|CarVac]] 19:26, 21 March 2011 (EDT) |
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| + | == Translation to italian == |
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| + | Hello! Can I translate the Project Presentation in Italian? [[User:NiwaKonzen|NiwaKonzen]] 28 January 2014 |
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| − | How should we name the pages for the translated chapters? Currently, [[Suzumiya Haruhi:Volume2 Chapter 1]] is named differently that all of the other numbered chapters because there is a space between "Chapter" and "1". Rather than just moving the page, I think we should discuss how we want to continue naming pages as more are created. |
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| + | Feel free to do a Project Guidelines page. - [[User:Misogi|Misogi]] 16:04, 28 January 2014 (GMT+1) |
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| − | Discuss at http://www.baka-tsuki.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=96 |
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| + | ==Baka Ex Reader Formatting== |
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| − | [[User:BlckKnght|BlckKnght]] 15:21, 25 May 2006 (PDT) |
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| + | Hello I'm just wondering if there are certain guidelines that need to be followed to get pages to work with the Baka Ex Reader because I don't have an android phone to do tests with I'm wondering what they are so I can fix problems where people can't read them on their phones. If there are already guidelines on this somewhere I apologize but I cannot find them. If there are no existing guidlines please tell me what you know or get apge with that info. It would be quite helpful to know what is wrong with a page for the reader. Thanks in advance =)<br> |
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| + | - [[User:Yascob99|Yascob99]] ([[User talk:Yascob99|talk]]) 13:31, 10 March 2014 (CDT) |
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Latest revision as of 03:24, 13 April 2016
Hello, so let's kick this up, what things should we address first?
Which things should be established first?
- Please use the "add comment" icon above (the + symbol).
- Please scroll down to view current discussions.
- Previous discussions on related format guideline topics have been copied here for reference.
Unresolved Issues[edit]
The link that says that this page [format guidelines] is available in Spanish is incorrect. If you click on the Spanish link, the language displayed is actually Portuguese. I will change the label if I can. --popocatepetl (talk) 13:30, 3 June 2013 (CDT)
Where's the "References & Translator's Notes" section?[edit]
So we've agreed to link terms and references in some separate Notes/References section, but where should this be? [Option 1] The Discussion pages of each chapter? If so, we'll have to clean up those pages - old discussions archived away (or just deleted) while leaving space for current issues to still be debated. GTO, perhaps they should be unified to look something like this?
- Table of contents
- References & Translator's Notes
- Current translation issues (with optional link to old discussions elsewhere?)
- (or maybe have Old Discussions stuck as an appendix at the bottom of the chapter's discussion page?)
Or would we rather hide casual readers from all our talk, therefore [Option 2] place Notes/References at the bottom of the main chapter's text after a horizontal line?
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But i guess thats not going to happen when people will continue to use the indivual chapters page, while it'll be great to have everything organised you must admit what you are proposing is going to a signifcant amount of time, if we use [option 1]
[option 2]
At the same time i don't think its right to mess up the chapters with the notes at the bottom. But i do like the idea of linking the words to something us, saves us all the restructuring.
I mean why don't we jus link the word when it first appears on the chapter, to the related notes/refs in the talk pages, once only.
That way if peope don't understand it, they can click it ,and get cluded in.
but once only, it'll save time from changing all the same words to have the link.
Onizuka-gto 09:17, 27 April 2006 (PDT)
Oh of course I meant we only link them once. My question was: where will that link point to? As in where do we explain what the Reference is? In the chapter's talk pages (so that people don't get spoilt of future things as might be the case in an 'all references are on this page' situation)?
Besides, Option 1 really shouldn't take much time. Ok fine, delay the "sort out discussions into current vs resolved" - how much work is it to create 1 section at the top of each chapter's talk page? Actually, this'll be much easier if I show you what I mean won't it? Ok, give me a few hours to deal with other things first, then I'll do Ch 2's talk page in what I mean by Option 1.
--Psieye 10:51, 27 April 2006 (PDT)
Ok, Chapter 2's Talk page has been formated as per Option 1. If you want me to do the other chapters, I'll have to do them another day as I've got approaching deadlines now.
--Psieye 12:18, 27 April 2006 (PDT)
I've given this matter some thought, and here's how I've tried to resolve it. I'm currently working on vol.2 ch.4, and in the Talk page for that chapter, I've set up three main sections: Original Text for the original text of the novel (which is temporary - we're not producing a Japanese bootleg, here - and only while I'm translating, as a reference); Translation Notes for my translation notes (that is, my cleaned-up versions of whatever discussion has taken place on each thorny spot, as well as remarks on in-text references); and Comments (which is where the editors, myself, and other visitors to the page can discuss the issues. The Comments section is obviously intended to be messy -- but ideally, when the translation is over, the Translation Notes section will be clean and immediately useable. When the project is complete, we can move the Translation Notes to a separate wikipage, one for each chapter), and maybe include links in the text to the relevant notes.
How's that?
--Freak Of Nature 13:01, 27 April 2006 (PDT)
So in the short-term, it means it'll boil down to "Translation Notes" and then a Discussion section as before. Well, certainly you've hammered out details which are plausible and I have no objections. I guess it is more sensible to just leave Discussions/Comments as a mess and leave them like that, instead of wasting time organising them into "present" and "past". Aye ok, seems we're going for Option 1 with FON's details then.
--Psieye 13:23, 27 April 2006 (PDT)
Well if you blokes have the time to do it, then i have no objections.
Onizuka-gto 15:24, 27 April 2006 (PDT)
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No one's really discussed this, so I've added a navigation bar of sorts to the bottom of all completed chapters/entries/etc. Note that I had to use hardcoded values since for some reason the main.css does not include "wikitable" or "prettytable" as a class, let alone have the values required for it. Values in question can be found here.
Please use the following example source code at the end of each chapter when you are finished with it:
{| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"
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| Return to [[Suzumiya Haruhi|Main Page]]
| Back to [[Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter1|Chapter 1]]
| Forward to [[Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter3|Chapter 3]]
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|}
Proof of Concept:
| Return to Main Page | Back to Chapter 1 | Forward to Chapter 3 |
If there are no problems with this format, please move this comment to the main page. :) -- velocity7, 7 May 2006 22:00 EDT
- I like the idea, but have some small changes to suggest:
- My changes are changing "Return to" into "Up to" and changing the order. Also, I made the whole text be part of the links, not just the name of the destinations. Take a look at the markup if you want the details.
- Thanks, velocity7, for finding the markup to make this work!
- --BlckKnght 19:42, 7 May 2006 (PDT)
- Looks fine, have at it. :)
- By the way, initially my first proposal for this was that the navigation would be at the top and bottom. Should this be kept, or is the bottom enough?
- For everyone else, the new source code is as follows:
{| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"
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| [[Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter1|Back to Chapter 1]]
| [[Suzumiya Haruhi|Up to the Main Page]]
| [[Suzumiya_Haruhi:Volume1_Chapter3|Forward to Chapter 3]]
|-
|}
- -- velocity7, 7 May 2006 23:28 EDT
mmm......to be honest i'am undecided about this, it does look like a pretty interesting idea, but at the same time it is a pretty big implimentation in terms of layout and im sure there are alot of people who will fall into both camps.
I think we more input from the other Project Translators,Dedicated Editors and other users before we can consider this.
I don't think there is a rush at the moment as only one volume has been done, but when more are completed, i can see how this might be a benefit for those fast readers and are too lazy to go back to the previous page just to click the next chapter for the 12th time.
Onizuka-gto 21:19, 7 May 2006 (PDT)
In my opinion the code should go in a template and provide links to all chapters. You only need to add the template, e.g. {{Navbox_Volume_1}}, at the end of each chapter. See wikibooks.org for some examples. --89.53.204.166 08:12, 8 May 2006 (PDT)
Ok, I've risen to the challenge and created Template:V1TOC:
| Color Illustrations | Prologue | Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4 |
| Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Epilogue | Author's Notes | Editor's Notes |
To include it, as I did above, use this code:
{{V1TOC}}
Note that when it is included from one of the chapter pages, the current page will show up in bold and will not be a link.
If the template is edited, the included text will change on every page on which it is used (including this one!).
What does everyone think? It will certainly be easier to use templates for this kind of thing, rather than hand crafting navigation boxes on each page. I thank the anonymous editor above for the suggestion.
--BlckKnght 19:34, 8 May 2006 (PDT)
mmm...i'am abit skeptical about this....
I've thought about it, and i do agree that eventually we will need some sort of internal navigation links, but im not so sure about your "boxy" design. how about you make a dummy page so we can have a general idea of what it will look like?
Onizuka-gto 05:46, 9 May 2006 (PDT)
I like where this is going. I've modified the template a little bit; maybe width: 100% is going overboard? Also, made the table go in the center in this way, and made text in the boxes go in the center. Looks a lot simpler, no?
Onizuka-GTO: Here's an example page, with the TOC at the top. Maybe we need a second part at the bottom without the title? Suggestions?
-- velocity7, 10 May 2006 16:53 EDT
Thanks for the example page, i now know why i did not like this current design, it seems unnecessary to have a link for all the chapters.
In the other hand if it had the links for only next chapter and the previous one and was at the end of thr page, it will not disrupt the overall chapter with its minimal presents.
To be honest, i do not see why you need to have a box around the links, prehaps a simple "Previous Chapter" and "Next Chapter" would be sufficient.
Onizuka-gto 14:58, 10 May 2006 (PDT)
I have no idea how we could make the template dynamic enough to do a previous/next chapter business sort of thing. Anyone?
-- velocity7, 10 May 2006 19:21 EDT
Maybe not even dynamic, we can simply just link it to the next chapters the old fashion way....
Onizuka-gto 17:10, 10 May 2006 (PDT)
The previous discussions have been moved to the forum. Please click on the following links to view them.
Resolved Issues[edit]
The previous discussions have been moved to the forum. Please click on the following links to view them.
Page formatting in full-text PDFs[edit]
I noticed that the Utsuro no Hako to Zero no Maria full-text PDF is extremely difficult to read. I noticed multiple reasons for this. For one, the lines are very long, over 100 characters per line. Secondly, it's in Calibri, a sans-serif font that is the default in Microsoft Office 2007. That it's sans-serif doesn't really matter, but that font in particular doesn't seem to work well.
This came to mind because I'm currently doing major offline edits for the first chapter of a teaser project, Tabi ni Deyou, and I'm working in the LaTeX typesetting program. I'm using the A5 paper size instead of A4 and the default LaTeX font (Computer Modern), and I find that it's far more readable than the aforementioned PDF I downloaded, with about 60 characters per line and really smooth typesetting. It's far more like reading a real light novel, except on a computer screen. I compared it to my official Suzumiya Haruhi English translations, and the pages are about the same physical size, but the margins are slightly smaller in my PDF, though it's not a drastic difference.
In short, I was wondering: should there be guidelines for PDF conversions of fully translated novels for readability and consistency? Also, should they reference Baka-Tsuki (which the Utsuro no Hako one has no mention of)? Should they credit the translators and editors? CarVac 05:25, 21 March 2011 (EDT)
3 things: guidelines, or the closest we have. Additionally, I've worked with LaTeX, admittedly more on the mathematics side, and it seems like converting a whole text to it would be resource intensive, unless there exists scripts to do so. Additionally different typesetters for LaTeX may have different default fonts (I know that the major implementation is different for Mac and Windows, at least). What program are you using, and is the font available online somewhere? I also observe that many of the PDF translations are available only on the forum: I would definitely run a poll (I think translators have permission to make them, I know project editors don't), in addition to any debate here on wiki, before creating any policy, especially with regards to giving credit. --Saganatsu 07:26, 21 March 2011 (EDT)
LaTeX is designed so that no matter what system you run it on, you will always get the same result. It's free and open-source, and it's available for basically any system ever. Personally I use LaTeX 2e on Linux, but you should get the same exact result for any operating system, and Computer Modern comes with every install of LaTeX so far as I know. Also, LaTeX is designed for books as well as mathematics; several publishing companies use it to typeset their books.
It's actually not that hard to convert a novel to LaTeX; the hardest part was formatting the title page photo to fill the sheet, but I could take what I have done and make it into a template for future use. My code could use a little neatening and documentation in that case, though. Then, you could simply download the images, copy the wiki code into a new file, and use find-and-replace on things like ellipses, quotes, photos, italics, and section breaks. I converted a chapter to LaTeX in about half an hour that way, so it's not a big time investment to create a PDF, unless the chapter started out with extremely inconsistent formatting. --CarVac 16:07, 21 March 2011 (EDT)
That's great! I'm going to look for a wikicode->LaTeX converter, and If I don't find one, probably try tot build one myself. If I end up building one myself could I look at what you've produced to get the formatting looking correct? --Saganatsu 16:21, 21 March 2011 (EDT)
One thing is that any existing wikicode->LaTeX converter is not likely to be suitable to typesetting light novels as books. There are other issues such as the fact that different projects format the novels slightly differently. So, I just created a LaTeX document that explains mostly everything on how to convert the wikicode to LaTeX, and also doubles as a template; you copy it into a new file, modify it, and compile it, and it'll render a nice novel! I'm gonna post it on the forum thread you linked to earlier. --CarVac 19:26, 21 March 2011 (EDT)
Translation to italian[edit]
Hello! Can I translate the Project Presentation in Italian? NiwaKonzen 28 January 2014
Feel free to do a Project Guidelines page. - Misogi 16:04, 28 January 2014 (GMT+1)
Baka Ex Reader Formatting[edit]
Hello I'm just wondering if there are certain guidelines that need to be followed to get pages to work with the Baka Ex Reader because I don't have an android phone to do tests with I'm wondering what they are so I can fix problems where people can't read them on their phones. If there are already guidelines on this somewhere I apologize but I cannot find them. If there are no existing guidlines please tell me what you know or get apge with that info. It would be quite helpful to know what is wrong with a page for the reader. Thanks in advance =)
- Yascob99 (talk) 13:31, 10 March 2014 (CDT)
