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With word choice "''He did miss ...''" in the first line, and the context in the second line, I'm guessing that the first line was intended to be "''He did '''not''' miss ...''"? --[[User:Cthaeh|Cthaeh]] ([[User talk:Cthaeh|talk]]) 22:49, 3 February 2013 (CST) |
With word choice "''He did miss ...''" in the first line, and the context in the second line, I'm guessing that the first line was intended to be "''He did '''not''' miss ...''"? --[[User:Cthaeh|Cthaeh]] ([[User talk:Cthaeh|talk]]) 22:49, 3 February 2013 (CST) |
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| + | "Did NOT miss" would be correct.--[[User:Zzhk|Zzhk]] ([[User talk:Zzhk|talk]]) 23:33, 3 February 2013 (CST) |
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Latest revision as of 07:33, 4 February 2013
At the very end of part 1, regarding the following lines,
- He did miss the slightly hurt expression that only flashed across the girl's face momentarily--
- The boy felt a mysterious sense of turmoil stirring within himself.
With word choice "He did miss ..." in the first line, and the context in the second line, I'm guessing that the first line was intended to be "He did not miss ..."? --Cthaeh (talk) 22:49, 3 February 2013 (CST)
"Did NOT miss" would be correct.--Zzhk (talk) 23:33, 3 February 2013 (CST)
