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After leaving JR and Ameyoko, Erica advanced towards the direction of nearby Yushima, with Godou trailing after her. |
After leaving JR and Ameyoko, Erica advanced towards the direction of nearby Yushima, with Godou trailing after her. |
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Assuming JR is some sort of train/station, I think this should be changed to "After leaving the JR at Ameyoko, Erica advanced towards the direction of nearby Yushima, with Godou trailing after her." No idea about the geography around Japan so I could be completely wrong --[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 18:45, 9 September 2012 (CDT) |
Assuming JR is some sort of train/station, I think this should be changed to "After leaving the JR at Ameyoko, Erica advanced towards the direction of nearby Yushima, with Godou trailing after her." No idea about the geography around Japan so I could be completely wrong --[[User:Drowzycow|Drowzycow]] ([[User talk:Drowzycow|talk]]) 18:45, 9 September 2012 (CDT) |
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| + | JR and Ameyoko are separate items of an nonexhaustive list, but I agree it can be reworded clearer. Thanks for pointing it out. --[[User:Zzhk|Zzhk]] ([[User talk:Zzhk|talk]]) 04:37, 10 September 2012 (CDT) |
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After leaving JR and Ameyoko, Erica advanced towards the direction of nearby Yushima, with Godou trailing after her. Assuming JR is some sort of train/station, I think this should be changed to "After leaving the JR at Ameyoko, Erica advanced towards the direction of nearby Yushima, with Godou trailing after her." No idea about the geography around Japan so I could be completely wrong --Drowzycow (talk) 18:45, 9 September 2012 (CDT)
JR and Ameyoko are separate items of an nonexhaustive list, but I agree it can be reworded clearer. Thanks for pointing it out. --Zzhk (talk) 04:37, 10 September 2012 (CDT)
