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Yes, there's a "not" missing. -[[User:Zzhk|Zzhk]] ([[User talk:Zzhk|talk]]) 18:56, 13 June 2013 (CDT) | Yes, there's a "not" missing. -[[User:Zzhk|Zzhk]] ([[User talk:Zzhk|talk]]) 18:56, 13 June 2013 (CDT) | ||
The latter half of this sentence seems rather odd. I think it could benefit from some rewording/rephrasing. [[User:Kory|<span style="color:Green;font:normal 10pt Papyrus, fantasy">Kory</span>]] 10:49, 15 June 2013 (CDT) | |||
Fear argued noisily, Konoha sighed in exasperation, Kuroe stirred things up from the said in amusement. | |||
Latest revision as of 15:49, 15 June 2013
Is this sentence supposed to be negative?
Anyway, I still have heard you explain in detail.
She then proceeds to ask him about it and based on the wording I thought it was possibly supposed to be "haven't" instead of "have." Kory 16:42, 13 June 2013 (CDT)
Yes, there's a "not" missing. -Zzhk (talk) 18:56, 13 June 2013 (CDT)
The latter half of this sentence seems rather odd. I think it could benefit from some rewording/rephrasing. Kory 10:49, 15 June 2013 (CDT)
Fear argued noisily, Konoha sighed in exasperation, Kuroe stirred things up from the said in amusement.