Difference between revisions of "Category:ClannadCleanup"

The following pages have been marked for cleanup. See Template:Clannad:Cleanup for more information.

Files To be TL Checked

Translators, please pass over the list of files here and mark when it's done. Thanks.

• Clannad:SEEN6801
• Clannad:SEEN6802
• Clannad:SEEN6803

Files to be reviewed

Editors, please enter here any SEEN files that you feel you would like to change tense for, but have no idea if it will affect Japanese meaning. A Translator will look over your change and approve it if it is deemed acceptable. Format is the following:

*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~
*[[Clannad:SEENxxxx]]
**Line ####, <insert note here> --~~~~

• Clannad:SEEN2419
  • Line 0000, <Sunohara appeared after first period ended, so the tense should reflect this.> --A 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN2421
  • Line 0038, <This line should be the same tense as line 39.> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0069, <There's and was should be the same tense> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0105, <"They made a bitter smile" sounds weird - maybe "They smiled bitterly"? Also, who are they bidding farewell?> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0174, <showed, pretend, and doesn't should be the same tense> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0229, <called and we're should be the same tense> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0385, <tumbles and started should be the same tense> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0395, <arrive and rang should be the same tense> --A 15:34, 8 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN2426
  • Line 0031, <Check that revision is correct> --A 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0033, <Check that revision is correct> --A 23:09, 7 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN3416
  • Line 0081, <talked should be the same tense as walk> --A 13:04, 8 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN3424
  • Line 0010, <Although the sentence is grammatically correct, I recommend changing it to "She stares at me with her hands on her hips."> --A 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0191, <left and move should be the same tense> --A 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0401, <says and showed should be the same tense> --A 23:04, 9 March 2008 (PDT)
• Clannad:SEEN4423 === *Checked*
  • Line 0112, I can't quite put my finger on why, but this sentence needs to be reworded. --A 17:42, 8 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6421
  • Line 0168, <First part of the sentence should happen before or at the same time as the second.> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0181, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0423, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6422
  • Line 0403, <Fuuko should use third person, right? This also applies to lines 405-408.> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0558, <Check that revision is still correct(See history for details)> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0763, <Have should be had so that it matches the tense of the rest of the clause> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0816, <Sentence should be one tense> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6423
  • Line 0325, <Both verbs should be the same tense> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6425
  • Line 0296, <Should this be "Just let him go"?> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6426
  • Line 0268, <Check that revision is correct(See history for details)> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
  • Line 0470, <"Stepped out" sounds awkward> --A 17:19, 7 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6427
  • Line 0086, <Needs clarification> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0199, <Should this be "that big of an accomplishment"?> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0400, <Needs clarification (What does 'a notes' mean?)> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0434, <Needs clarification (What does 'please tuck in' mean?)> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0462, <Needs clarification> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0465, <pressed, reads, and packs should be the same tense> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
  • Line 0499, <See line 400> --A
  • Line 0540, <See line 434> --A 00:09, 11 March 2008 (PDT)
• Clannad:SEEN6726
  • Line 0116, <Check that revision is correct ("for that" seems redundant)> --A 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6727
  • Line 0118, <what is plotters supposed to mean?> --A 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)
• Clannad:SEEN6729
  • Line 0268, <Should this be "Furukawa Bakery's land mine"?> --A 19:18, 5 March 2008 (PST)

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