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07:1507:15, 15 March 2014 diff hist +70 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 5 No edit summary
06:5106:51, 15 March 2014 diff hist +14 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 5 →Part 1
03:0003:00, 15 March 2014 diff hist +5 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 5 →Part 1: Because it is an existence I hate since my sister’s life got taken away in front of me, so each time I swing it down. Should put in a reference like her sister was killed by a sword so sentence makes more sense.
02:5102:51, 15 March 2014 diff hist −7 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 5 →Part 1: remove opponents from opponent students, doesn't make sense plus it redundant

01:5601:56, 12 March 2014 diff hist −3 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 4 →Part 2: Suggestion change lights off to lights outs, I just think it sounds better.
01:3301:33, 12 March 2014 diff hist +16 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 4 →Part 1: I have performed dissemble and re-construction many times already” Maybe changed to I have dissemble and reassemble guns many times already? Same meaning I thinking, sounds better and what the sentence is talking about is clearer.
00:5200:52, 12 March 2014 diff hist +21 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 4 →Part 1: Even when you ask me that, these are circumstances between the training is different, and also-----“ I changed this is to these are as circumstances is plural. However the sentence doesn't make sense.
00:3500:35, 12 March 2014 diff hist +3 Absolute Duo:Volume 2 Chapter 4 →Part 1: gold changed to golden, same meaning, sounds better, and it's not likehe referring to her being made of gold, just that her hair is gold and stuff.

02:0902:09, 10 March 2014 diff hist +28 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 2 If shock wave is used later on in other chapters please put in a space between shock and wave as that the correct form. Shockwave is only in like games or programs like shockwave player.
01:4801:48, 10 March 2014 diff hist +58 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 2 It was Torbalan who with even the right arm which was cut would very easily connect. Changed to this It was Torbalan who with even his right arm severed, would very easily reconnect it.
01:2101:21, 10 March 2014 diff hist +761 User talk:Setsuna86 →Madan no Ou to Vanadis
01:1101:11, 10 March 2014 diff hist −2 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 2 →Chapter 2 – {{furigana|Bird of Fire|Phoenix}}: heaped up hard fighting, changed to kept fighting hard, same meaning flows better. urge to kill changed to killing intent, same meaning and sounds better.

08:2708:27, 9 March 2014 diff hist −21 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 2 →Chapter 2 – {{furigana|Bird of Fire|Phoenix}}: thinking was troublesome shook her head left and right. Added thinking was troublesome, to make sentence make sense. Added new to clothes to clarify about where the letter was.

07:5307:53, 15 February 2014 diff hist +14 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 1 two breath minute. Since been seeing these breath minutes, could you clarify on them,not sure of my edits on them are accurate. Or held boat for work with several people and threw. Need some fixing on this sentence,
06:5006:50, 15 February 2014 diff hist +1 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 1 →Chapter 1 - Olsina: Leave my edit of removing the from Olsina Island as you already introduced the island, you don't have to keep adding the to it, unless there more then one of them or its a collective group of islands baring the same name.
06:2906:29, 15 February 2014 diff hist −10 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 1 →Chapter 1 - Olsina
06:1806:18, 15 February 2014 diff hist +10 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 1 →Chapter 1 - Olsina: While putting the twin swords in which flame disappeared in her waist. Do you mean the swords disappear when she put them in their sheaths at her waist, or the flames of the sword did?
06:1306:13, 15 February 2014 diff hist +2 Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Volume 08 Chapter 1 Since it was an opponent on whom blades had no effect, she did not hesitate. I think you mean 'since it was an opponent on whom blades had an effect, she did not hesitate" or "blades had no effect she hesitated.

22:3922:39, 11 February 2014 diff hist +8 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 3 Chapter 2 Last I check the world total population was only 7 billion.Even if its Chiharu's world I don't think they got a population of trillions...

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