Gekkou:Volume 1 Murder Recipe: Revision history

3 October 2019

• curprev 13:1413:14, 3 October 2019 RS talk contribs m 25,184 bytes −14 Reverted edits by 141.101.77.227 (talk) to last revision by EusthEnoptEron undo
• curprev 11:4311:43, 3 October 2019 141.101.77.227 talk 25,198 bytes +14 →[Murder Recipe] undo

28 February 2014

• curprev 15:2915:29, 28 February 2014 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 25,184 bytes −21 Removed unnecessary category. undo

3 September 2013

• curprev 18:2218:22, 3 September 2013 Morris talk contribs 25,205 bytes −146 Undo revision 283798 by Morris (talk) undo
• curprev 18:2018:20, 3 September 2013 Morris talk contribs 25,351 bytes +146 →[Murder Recipe] undo

11 April 2013

• curprev 18:0118:01, 11 April 2013 BladeUnderHeart talk contribs m 25,205 bytes +2 No edit summary undo

26 August 2012

• curprev 10:2510:25, 26 August 2012 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 25,203 bytes 0 Changed Yōko back to Youko undo

15 December 2011

• curprev 02:4502:45, 15 December 2011 Jonathanasdf talk contribs m 25,203 bytes −13 navbar undo
• curprev 01:0401:04, 15 December 2011 Jonathanasdf talk contribs m 25,216 bytes +2 No edit summary undo
• curprev 01:0001:00, 15 December 2011 Jonathanasdf talk contribs 25,214 bytes +5 No edit summary undo

26 October 2011

• curprev 04:3904:39, 26 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 25,209 bytes −9 Struggled with this sentence for a long time, it read very awkwardly but I'm not sure what it was trying to say, so not positive how to rephrase it; this version reads okay and makes sense, but not sure it matches the author's intent undo

25 October 2011

• curprev 22:5922:59, 25 October 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 25,218 bytes +233 No edit summary undo
• curprev 20:5620:56, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,985 bytes −5 "answered" doesn't work well, since he's not displaying his emotions undo
• curprev 20:5420:54, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,990 bytes +8 "deciding factor" doesn't really make sense, there was no list of possible decisions being debated and chosen from undo
• curprev 20:5220:52, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,982 bytes +1 Trying to make it clear at a glance who's speaking undo
• curprev 20:4220:42, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,981 bytes −1 Extraneous comma, no pause here when reading aloud undo
• curprev 20:4120:41, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,982 bytes +9 "et al" just reads awkwardly in fiction, you don't see it used in novels undo
• curprev 20:3920:39, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,973 bytes 0 "exalted" isn't correct; it would mean that it was something that excessively praised or glorified his imagination, which isn't what's intended. undo
• curprev 20:3720:37, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,973 bytes 0 corrected awkward phrasing undo
• curprev 20:3520:35, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,973 bytes −6 No reason for quotes around "caption", it's a perfectly normal and legitimate use of the word. Also, the word "there" doesn't have a clear antecedent, since an A4 sheet isn't really a place, it's an object. undo
• curprev 20:3120:31, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,979 bytes 0 Changing to common English idiom undo
• curprev 20:2520:25, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,979 bytes −2 "tainted" doesn't work well in English in this context; it implies guilt by association, rather than by intent. "Lecherous" seems to fit in context, but I don't know if that fits the Japanese. "Impure" is a close match to "tainted". undo
• curprev 20:2120:21, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,981 bytes +4 You can't get dumped if you're not already going out. When changing to "rejected", "harshly" seems more natural than "badly", but badly would work if it's clear that's what the author intended. undo
• curprev 20:1920:19, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs 24,977 bytes +4 Very hard to keep track of who's talking. By putting the quotes in the same paragraph as the speaker, it's much clearer. undo
• curprev 20:1220:12, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,973 bytes +6 While technically correct, "et al" is usually used in citations, and usually used to refer to authors, and rarely used in speech or fiction. undo
• curprev 20:0520:05, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,967 bytes +1 Flows better undo
• curprev 19:5619:56, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,966 bytes −1 Previous phrasing parsed to only Tsukimori chattering, which is out of character; I assume all the girls were chattering. Also, it was a pretty comma-heavy sentence. undo
• curprev 19:5419:54, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,967 bytes −9 previous phrasing parsed to Kamogawa being mixed with a sigh, rather than the quote being mixed with a sigh. Not sure this is the proper correction, but at least it's proper. undo
• curprev 19:5319:53, 25 October 2011 Andrewgr talk contribs m 24,976 bytes 0 Assuming this was a typo, if not sentence doesn't make sense undo

24 September 2011

• curprev 09:3409:34, 24 September 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 24,976 bytes +210 No edit summary undo
• curprev 03:2103:21, 24 September 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs 24,766 bytes +291 naming issue. undo

9 September 2011

• curprev 12:4312:43, 9 September 2011 Kadi talk contribs 24,475 bytes +328 No edit summary undo

8 September 2011

• curprev 15:3815:38, 8 September 2011 BladeUnderHeart talk contribs m 24,147 bytes +147 No edit summary undo

18 July 2011

• curprev 15:4715:47, 18 July 2011 195.229.237.36 talk 24,000 bytes +1 →[Murder Recipe] undo
• curprev 02:1402:14, 18 July 2011 Eccles19 talk contribs m 23,999 bytes −554 No edit summary undo
• curprev 01:5701:57, 18 July 2011 Eccles19 talk contribs m 24,553 bytes −1 →[Murder Recipe] undo

15 July 2011

• curprev 01:3601:36, 15 July 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs 24,554 bytes +333 No edit summary undo

14 July 2011

• curprev 17:5317:53, 14 July 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 24,221 bytes −577 No edit summary undo

10 July 2011

• curprev 12:1212:12, 10 July 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 24,798 bytes +326 No edit summary undo
• curprev 11:3811:38, 10 July 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs 24,472 bytes +155 No edit summary undo

8 July 2011

• curprev 21:1321:13, 8 July 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 24,317 bytes +144 No edit summary undo

6 July 2011

• curprev 16:5516:55, 6 July 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs m 24,173 bytes 0 Let's leave it at "Youko" for now. May be a point up for discussion. undo

4 July 2011

• curprev 01:1701:17, 4 July 2011 Senile seinen talk contribs m 24,173 bytes 0 →[Murder Recipe]: a few minor word choice edits. undo

25 June 2011

• curprev 23:2423:24, 25 June 2011 Eccles19 talk contribs m 24,173 bytes +147 changing the dumb quotes to smart quotes, also minnor grammatical corrections undo
• curprev 21:5821:58, 25 June 2011 Eccles19 talk contribs m 24,026 bytes +746 changing the dumb quotes to smart quotes, also minnor grammatical corrections undo

22 June 2011

• curprev 04:0504:05, 22 June 2011 128.227.11.70 talk 23,280 bytes 0 →[Murder Recipe] undo

12 June 2011

• curprev 16:2916:29, 12 June 2011 EusthEnoptEron talk contribs 23,280 bytes +23,280 Created page with "==[Murder Recipe]== There was no day I'd miss hearing that name. "Tsukimori is so lovely...," muttered my classmate Kamogawa mixed with a sigh, upon which the other male stu..."