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(cur | prev) 15:14, 3 October 2019‎ RS (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,184 bytes) (-14)‎ . . (Reverted edits by 141.101.77.227 (talk) to last revision by EusthEnoptEron) (undo)
(cur | prev) 13:43, 3 October 2019‎ 141.101.77.227 (talk)‎ . . (25,198 bytes) (+14)‎ . . (→‎[Murder Recipe]) (undo)
(cur | prev) 17:29, 28 February 2014‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,184 bytes) (-21)‎ . . (Removed unnecessary category.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 20:22, 3 September 2013‎ Morris (talk | contribs)‎ . . (25,205 bytes) (-146)‎ . . (Undo revision 283798 by Morris (talk)) (undo)
(cur | prev) 20:20, 3 September 2013‎ Morris (talk | contribs)‎ . . (25,351 bytes) (+146)‎ . . (→‎[Murder Recipe]) (undo)
(cur | prev) 20:01, 11 April 2013‎ BladeUnderHeart (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,205 bytes) (+2)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 12:25, 26 August 2012‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,203 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Changed Yōko back to Youko) (undo)
(cur | prev) 04:45, 15 December 2011‎ Jonathanasdf (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,203 bytes) (-13)‎ . . (navbar) (undo)
(cur | prev) 03:04, 15 December 2011‎ Jonathanasdf (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,216 bytes) (+2)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 03:00, 15 December 2011‎ Jonathanasdf (talk | contribs)‎ . . (25,214 bytes) (+5)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 06:39, 26 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,209 bytes) (-9)‎ . . (Struggled with this sentence for a long time, it read very awkwardly but I'm not sure what it was trying to say, so not positive how to rephrase it; this version reads okay and makes sense, but not sure it matches the author's intent) (undo)
(cur | prev) 00:59, 26 October 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (25,218 bytes) (+233)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:56, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,985 bytes) (-5)‎ . . ("answered" doesn't work well, since he's not displaying his emotions) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:54, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,990 bytes) (+8)‎ . . ("deciding factor" doesn't really make sense, there was no list of possible decisions being debated and chosen from) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:52, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,982 bytes) (+1)‎ . . (Trying to make it clear at a glance who's speaking) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:42, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,981 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (Extraneous comma, no pause here when reading aloud) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:41, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,982 bytes) (+9)‎ . . ("et al" just reads awkwardly in fiction, you don't see it used in novels) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:39, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,973 bytes) (0)‎ . . ("exalted" isn't correct; it would mean that it was something that excessively praised or glorified his imagination, which isn't what's intended.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:37, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,973 bytes) (0)‎ . . (corrected awkward phrasing) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:35, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,973 bytes) (-6)‎ . . (No reason for quotes around "caption", it's a perfectly normal and legitimate use of the word. Also, the word "there" doesn't have a clear antecedent, since an A4 sheet isn't really a place, it's an object.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:31, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,979 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Changing to common English idiom) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:25, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,979 bytes) (-2)‎ . . ("tainted" doesn't work well in English in this context; it implies guilt by association, rather than by intent. "Lecherous" seems to fit in context, but I don't know if that fits the Japanese. "Impure" is a close match to "tainted".) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:21, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,981 bytes) (+4)‎ . . (You can't get dumped if you're not already going out. When changing to "rejected", "harshly" seems more natural than "badly", but badly would work if it's clear that's what the author intended.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:19, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ . . (24,977 bytes) (+4)‎ . . (Very hard to keep track of who's talking. By putting the quotes in the same paragraph as the speaker, it's much clearer.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:12, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,973 bytes) (+6)‎ . . (While technically correct, "et al" is usually used in citations, and usually used to refer to authors, and rarely used in speech or fiction.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 22:05, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,967 bytes) (+1)‎ . . (Flows better) (undo)
(cur | prev) 21:56, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,966 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (Previous phrasing parsed to only Tsukimori chattering, which is out of character; I assume all the girls were chattering. Also, it was a pretty comma-heavy sentence.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 21:54, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,967 bytes) (-9)‎ . . (previous phrasing parsed to Kamogawa being mixed with a sigh, rather than the quote being mixed with a sigh. Not sure this is the proper correction, but at least it's proper.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 21:53, 25 October 2011‎ Andrewgr (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,976 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Assuming this was a typo, if not sentence doesn't make sense) (undo)
(cur | prev) 11:34, 24 September 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,976 bytes) (+210)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 05:21, 24 September 2011‎ Senile seinen (talk | contribs)‎ . . (24,766 bytes) (+291)‎ . . (naming issue.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 14:43, 9 September 2011‎ Kadi (talk | contribs)‎ . . (24,475 bytes) (+328)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 17:38, 8 September 2011‎ BladeUnderHeart (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,147 bytes) (+147)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 17:47, 18 July 2011‎ 195.229.237.36 (talk)‎ . . (24,000 bytes) (+1)‎ . . (→‎[Murder Recipe]) (undo)
(cur | prev) 04:14, 18 July 2011‎ Eccles19 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (23,999 bytes) (-554)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 03:57, 18 July 2011‎ Eccles19 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,553 bytes) (-1)‎ . . (→‎[Murder Recipe]) (undo)
(cur | prev) 03:36, 15 July 2011‎ Senile seinen (talk | contribs)‎ . . (24,554 bytes) (+333)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 19:53, 14 July 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,221 bytes) (-577)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 14:12, 10 July 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,798 bytes) (+326)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 13:38, 10 July 2011‎ Senile seinen (talk | contribs)‎ . . (24,472 bytes) (+155)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 23:13, 8 July 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,317 bytes) (+144)‎ . . (undo)
(cur | prev) 18:55, 6 July 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,173 bytes) (0)‎ . . (Let's leave it at "Youko" for now. May be a point up for discussion.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 03:17, 4 July 2011‎ Senile seinen (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,173 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎[Murder Recipe]: a few minor word choice edits.) (undo)
(cur | prev) 01:24, 26 June 2011‎ Eccles19 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,173 bytes) (+147)‎ . . (changing the dumb quotes to smart quotes, also minnor grammatical corrections) (undo)
(cur | prev) 23:58, 25 June 2011‎ Eccles19 (talk | contribs)‎ m . . (24,026 bytes) (+746)‎ . . (changing the dumb quotes to smart quotes, also minnor grammatical corrections) (undo)
(cur | prev) 06:05, 22 June 2011‎ 128.227.11.70 (talk)‎ . . (23,280 bytes) (0)‎ . . (→‎[Murder Recipe]) (undo)
(cur | prev) 18:29, 12 June 2011‎ EusthEnoptEron (talk | contribs)‎ . . (23,280 bytes) (+23,280)‎ . . (Created page with "==[Murder Recipe]== There was no day I'd miss hearing that name. "Tsukimori is so lovely...," muttered my classmate Kamogawa mixed with a sigh, upon which the other male stu...")

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