Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Story1 Chapter1: Revision history

17 March 2008

• curprev 22:3522:35, 17 March 2008 M talk contribs m 35,233 bytes +65 Various minor grammar changes: noble(s) -> Nobles, various verb-object corrections, and quote connection/disjunction; done to upper 50% of work undo

30 December 2007

• curprev 11:3011:30, 30 December 2007 Vaelis talk contribs m 35,168 bytes −1,162 moving the translator's note undo
• curprev 11:0811:08, 30 December 2007 Vaelis talk contribs m 36,330 bytes −1 →Chapter One: I'm a Familiar undo

22 November 2007

• curprev 00:4300:43, 22 November 2007 Const2k talk contribs m 36,331 bytes 0 Navigation bar formatting undo

19 November 2007

• curprev 21:4421:44, 19 November 2007 Const2k talk contribs 36,331 bytes +6 navigation panel links fixed undo

16 November 2007

• curprev 01:5801:58, 16 November 2007 Delwack talk contribs m 36,325 bytes +388 added navigation undo

1 November 2007

• curprev 12:3112:31, 1 November 2007 220.239.178.138 talk 35,937 bytes +3 No edit summary undo
• curprev 12:2712:27, 1 November 2007 220.239.178.138 talk 35,934 bytes +2 No edit summary undo
• curprev 12:2512:25, 1 November 2007 220.239.178.138 talk 35,932 bytes 0 →Chapter One - I'm a Familiar undo

28 September 2007

• curprev 19:5519:55, 28 September 2007 Const2k talk contribs m 35,932 bytes −62 Removed obsolete mention of raw English TL undo

24 June 2007

• curprev 08:1408:14, 24 June 2007 Kuu talk contribs m 35,994 bytes +7 minor grammar and redundancy of he/she undo

12 June 2007

• curprev 16:2416:24, 12 June 2007 168.212.234.49 talk 35,987 bytes +2 Changed "Chapter 1" to "Chapter One" for continuity (Very minor) undo
• curprev 14:5214:52, 12 June 2007 Rednal talk contribs m 35,985 bytes −2 Changed "Montmorency the Fragrance" to "Montmorency the Perfume" undo

10 June 2007

• curprev 00:0300:03, 10 June 2007 Rednal talk contribs m 35,987 bytes −30 Minor gramattical changes, and rearranged a few sentences so they made more sense. undo

7 May 2007

• curprev 02:1402:14, 7 May 2007 Dan talk contribs 36,017 bytes 0 →Chapter 1 - I'm a Familiar undo
• curprev 02:0802:08, 7 May 2007 Dan talk contribs 36,017 bytes −1 →Chapter 1 - I'm a Familiar undo

18 November 2006

• curprev 20:0620:06, 18 November 2006 89.58.150.116 talk 36,018 bytes +1 typos undo

14 November 2006

• curprev 22:2722:27, 14 November 2006 Onizuka-gto talk contribs 36,017 bytes +15 →Chapter 1 - I'm a Familiar undo
• curprev 21:5421:54, 14 November 2006 134.39.190.200 talk 36,002 bytes +1 →Chapter 1 - I'm a Familiar undo

25 October 2006

• curprev 14:1114:11, 25 October 2006 Ren90270 talk contribs m 36,001 bytes 0 →Chapter 1 - I'm a Familiar undo

28 September 2006

• curprev 01:3001:30, 28 September 2006 Cala-kun talk contribs m 36,001 bytes +103 No edit summary undo
• curprev 01:2301:23, 28 September 2006 SaiyaJedi talk contribs 35,898 bytes +42 →Translator's Notes undo
• curprev 01:0701:07, 28 September 2006 SaiyaJedi talk contribs 35,856 bytes +444 Adding note. undo
• curprev 00:5700:57, 28 September 2006 SaiyaJedi talk contribs 35,412 bytes −177 →Chapter 1 - I'm a Familiar: Various edits and such, inserting a missed passage on the field: re "Montmorency the Flood," etc. up until loss of conscousness. undo

27 September 2006

• curprev 12:3212:32, 27 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs m 35,589 bytes 0 zeroNT:Komgvol01edit moved to Zero no Tsukaima:Volume1 Chapter1: making ch1 public along with history and talk page, as per B-T tradition. undo

26 September 2006

• curprev 13:5113:51, 26 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 35,589 bytes −4,338 formatted for reading pleasure (initial draft) undo
• curprev 11:4711:47, 26 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,927 bytes −4 →Insert: "Currently drawing an illustration while..." -> "Currently doing illustrations while..." undo
• curprev 11:0911:09, 26 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,931 bytes +2 →Page 14: favoring readability over precision. The "or" didn't really have a valid alternative, considering there can be theme parks in Japan too... undo
• curprev 09:2809:28, 26 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,929 bytes +115 integrated some of lambchopsil's changes + some rewording undo

25 September 2006

• curprev 04:1804:18, 25 September 2006 Cala-kun talk contribs m 39,814 bytes −132 No edit summary undo

24 September 2006

• curprev 12:4612:46, 24 September 2006 Cala-kun talk contribs m 39,946 bytes +2 →Page 17 undo

23 September 2006

• curprev 15:5215:52, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,944 bytes −7 →I'm a familiar spirit: "familiar spirit" -> "familiar" (note that this changes the section name) undo
• curprev 15:5115:51, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,951 bytes −14 →Back Cover: "familiar spirit" -> "familiar" undo
• curprev 14:3314:33, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,965 bytes +5 →I'm a familiar spirit: author attribution changes previously discussed with Cala-kun undo
• curprev 14:0914:09, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,960 bytes +50 →Page 31: changed a lot of attribution to the author, using SaiyaJedi's text + minor edits undo
• curprev 13:1113:11, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,910 bytes −3 →Page 33: the "stopped airing" quote -- Cala found the sentence ambiguous enough that I just tried to have something that made sense in context. undo
• curprev 13:0013:00, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,913 bytes −15 →Page 45: "I guess that means there really is no need for electricity" + remove "enveloping it in shadow." undo
• curprev 12:2312:23, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,928 bytes +5 →Page 38: "There obviously is one, if I'm here!" (match change on p37) undo
• curprev 12:2212:22, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,923 bytes −17 →Page 37: "Nobody's even heard of another world." undo
• curprev 10:4610:46, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,940 bytes +9 →Page 23: "That commoner, he's perfect as your familiar!" undo
• curprev 10:1710:17, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,931 bytes +9 →Page 45: splice in saiyajedi paragraph (3 sentences) undo
• curprev 10:1510:15, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,922 bytes −54 →Page 43: splice in saiyajedi sentence with appropriate changes undo
• curprev 09:5709:57, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 39,976 bytes −146 →Chapter 01 - Part 1.2: change terms relating to spell names and familiars undo
• curprev 09:3509:35, 23 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 40,122 bytes +2 →I'm a familiar spirit: "Louise, what are you trying to do, calling a commoner with your 'Summon Servant'?" undo
• curprev 09:1909:19, 23 September 2006 Cala-kun talk contribs m 40,120 bytes −53 →Page 28 undo

18 September 2006

• curprev 06:3606:36, 18 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 40,173 bytes −2 →Page 36: something like this. -> anything like this. [x2] undo
• curprev 06:2206:22, 18 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 40,175 bytes −1 →Page 35: cannot -> can't [tone consideration again] undo
• curprev 06:1606:16, 18 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 40,176 bytes −2 →I'm a familiar spirit: Perhaps she’s ... -> Maybe she’s ... [sounds more Saito, as in more informal.] undo
• curprev 06:1306:13, 18 September 2006 The naming game talk contribs 40,178 bytes 0 →Page 29: helpless personality. -> hopeless personality. undo

7 September 2006

• curprev 04:3804:38, 7 September 2006 Bicube talk contribs 40,178 bytes 0 →Translator's Notes: Moved punctuation inside quotation marks. undo