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19:5819:58, 24 May 2014 diff hist +16 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 3 No edit summary
06:3706:37, 24 May 2014 diff hist +36 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 6 →Part 2: The gun that caused an explosion echoes until the office just now, need to fix this sentence.
06:2506:25, 24 May 2014 diff hist +34 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 6 →Part 1: Does he mean he not wearing the parka or anything on his upper body? Even though I helped in - help is probably the wrong word. she leaked puffing breath, puffing breath doesn't flow well.

20:0320:03, 23 May 2014 diff hist +4 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 3 Changed intend to mean, it's synonym for intend, and make more sense. Things have surpassed the leave you could handle with your selfishness alone… I don't think leave it the right word doesn't really make sense.

20:1120:11, 21 May 2014 diff hist −7 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 3 No edit summary
02:0902:09, 21 May 2014 diff hist +7 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 5 →Part 2: Sakuya only 10 yrs old? I don't recall that detail.
02:0102:01, 21 May 2014 diff hist +40 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 5 →Part 1: I can understand why you used reach, as in he reached the conclusion it was Yurie's breasts, however not the most suitable word so I replaced it.
01:2701:27, 21 May 2014 diff hist +1 User talk:Krytyk →Antimagic Academy "The 35th Test Platoon"
01:2601:26, 21 May 2014 diff hist −11 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 5 →Part 1: there was only one person that I had hesitation adding a child, adding a child this part of the sentence make no sense. Also Miyabi has more then 1 breast, makes more sense if her breasts were swaying, can't have just one.
01:2501:25, 21 May 2014 diff hist +451 User talk:Krytyk →Antimagic Academy "The 35th Test Platoon"
01:2001:20, 21 May 2014 diff hist +1 User:Krytyk Missing he o in do, must edit it lol....

20:0720:07, 20 May 2014 diff hist +1 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 3 No edit summary
04:4704:47, 20 May 2014 diff hist +16 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 3 →Chapter 3: Audience with the king of ghouls: Changed the car running to riding in the car, car running is an expression of the engine being turn on and running, the car is stationary as well e.g taxi driver saying the meter running.

22:3822:38, 17 May 2014 diff hist +5 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 2 Substituted great rejoice for pretty damn awesome, hell if this isn't enough to convey that "greatness" meaning I got a whole bunch of other lines to try.

20:3120:31, 16 May 2014 diff hist −2 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 2 “if I live until I’m 80, there will be great rejoice”. This line sounds weird I think the last line would make more sense as that would be great.

20:2920:29, 15 May 2014 diff hist +1 Maou na Ore to Fushihime no Yubiwa:Volume 4 Chapter 2 GG Yandere sister going to have to rely on oniichan pwr to lengthen her life span....

06:3906:39, 10 May 2014 diff hist +25 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 →Part 2: Miyabi got shocked at those vulgar words which cannot be topped any more. The last part is weird.
06:3106:31, 10 May 2014 diff hist +9 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 →Part 2: he main school girl guided here and Tomoe nodded as if she understood. Guided here sounds awkward. “Kokonoe’s <<Duo>> and roommate must not be forgotten about him. Forgotten sounds wrong.
06:1606:16, 10 May 2014 diff hist +1 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 →Part 1: Not knowing anything about there being sentence I swallowed which was close to coming out
06:0406:04, 10 May 2014 diff hist +22 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 →Part 1: Wow he sees both of them completely naked, their whole body every part, I'm so jelly. I made a sigh deeper than the see to the 2 beauties sleeping comfortably, need to fix.
05:4405:44, 10 May 2014 diff hist +22 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 →Part 1: it was the in the afternoon. Missing a word here.
04:5104:51, 10 May 2014 diff hist −4 Absolute Duo:Volume 3 Chapter 4 →Part 1

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