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== Đội ngũ dịch == | == Đội ngũ dịch == | ||
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Revision as of 10:01, 14 February 2018
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<4702>
// Carefully leveling the grounds, we then opened the clubroom door.
<4703>
// Already six or seven club members were left, changing into their school uniforms.
<4704>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Ah... we're done."
<4705>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Oh, good work."
<4706>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Umm, where's everyone else..."
<4707>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Went home."
<4708>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Eh...?"
<4709>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Because club activities are already over."
<4710>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "B-but... about... what we talked about..."
<4711>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Now, now, you'll hear it from us."
<4712>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Well, I dunno about the other guys agreeing with what we say."
<4713>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "No way..."
<4714>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "So, what was it?"
<4715>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "About my brother... Sunohara Youhei!"
<4716>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "I thought that I'd like for him to return to the club."
<4717>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "If that can't be done, just let him play for a little bit."
<4718>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "That's all I want..."
<4719>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Oh, was that it?"
<4720>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Nah, sorry."
<4721>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "........."
<4722>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "... Eh?"
<4723> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} (... These assholes...)
<4724>
// ... Certainly there was nothing to be hopeful about.
<4725>
// Mei-chan had worked so hard.
<4726>
// They didn't feel anything seeing her like this?
<4727>
// They didn't even think the least bit, taking any of her feelings...?
<4728>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Having said that, give it up."
<4729>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "P-please, somehow, anything!"
<4730>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Please, let my brother play soccer once again!"
<4731>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "No."
<4732>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Why... not?"
<4733>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Because I hate him."
<4734>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Hate...?"
<4735>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Is there anyone here who likes him?"
<4736>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Of course not."
<4737>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He's cheeky and annoying."
<4738>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He's crappy, I don't want to be with him."
<4739>
// Each one of them put him down.
<4740>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Well, that's how it is."
<4741>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Want me to make it easy on you? They hate your brother."
<4742>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "That's why, you can't...?"
<4743>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "... Why..."
<4744>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Does... everyone hate my brother?"
<4745>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Because, he's incompetent."
<4746>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} ".........?"
<4747>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He's got no guts."
<4748>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He's weak and cries."
<4749>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Guess he's a loser?"
<4750>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Loser...?"
<4751>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "He quit soccer, and can't keep up with studies."
<4752>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "That's a loser, isn't it?"
<4753>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan is a loser...?"
<4754>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "However you think it."
<4755>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Speaking of which, he got any reason to live?"
<4756>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "None."
<4757>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "........."
<4758>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Well, little sister?"
<4759>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Is there any reason to be working hard for crap such as him?"
<4760>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan... isn't crap..."
<4761>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Garbage is fine."
<4762>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "...!"
<4763>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "You knew from the start, didn't you?"
<4764>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Sunohara knows that this stuff is happening to you, you know?"
<4765>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Eh...?"
<4766>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Seems he came to our club."
<4767>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Looks like he heard about you."
<4768>
// ... He probably investigated after I told him about Mei-chan.
<4769>
// About where she was, and about what she was doing.
<4770>
// Sunohara knew.
<4771>
// Knowing that, he...
<4772>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "So, how's that?"
<4773>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Your big brother ain't coming."
<4774>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "T... that's..."
<4775>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "He's abandoned you."
<4776>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "He's afraid of fighting with us, and ran off."
<4777>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He can't save a single person."
<4778>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He's probably shaking in his boots at home right now."
<4779>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Actually, will he even come to school starting tomorrow?"
<4780>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Maybe he'll give up?"
<4781>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Sunohara being scared and dropping out is just like him."
<4782>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Since that suits crap like him!"
<4783>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "... Uh..."
<4784>
// Mei-chan only closed her eyes, bearing those words.
<4785>
// She had decided not to cry... no matter what treatment or pain she felt.
<4786>
// Her shoulders began to faintly tremble.
<4787>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Ahh, you made her cry."
<4788>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Is that my fault?"
<4789>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Come on, don't be sad, Mei-chan!"
<4790>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Uh... uh..."
<4791>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Rather, get ahold of yourself."
<4792>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "You can, go home now, you know?"
<4793>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Even if you cry, onii-chan ain't coming."
<4794>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "... Wrong......"
<4795>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "... Huh?"
<4796>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "You're wrong..."
<4797>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "You're... wrong...!"
<4798>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan will come...!"
<4799> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Mei-chan..."
<4800>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "He'll definitely come..."
<4801>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "What's with that?"
<4802>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "He ain't coming, he ain't..."
<4803>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "He will...!"
<4804>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan will come to save me...!"
<4805>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "He'll definitely, definitely come...!"
<4806>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "... What's with her?"
<4807>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "She an idiot?"
<4808>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "She's Sunohara's sister after all."
<4809>\{C?u Th?} ""
// \{Soccer Player} "Cry a lot louder, onii-chan can't hear you~"
<4810>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "U-uu...!"
<4811>
// They grab her arm and swing it.
<4812>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Fuuuu... it hurts...!"
<4813>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "It hurts... it hurts...!"
<4814>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Come on, say onii-chan!"
<4815>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Uuu... onii-chan...!"
<4816>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "Like that, onii-chan ain't coming."
<4817>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan, onii-chan...!"
<4818>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan...!!"
<4819> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "........."
<4820>
// ... There was nothing more to wait for.
<4821>
// We had gone past the point of no return.
<4822>
// I'll give Mei a lot of respect for being so patient for what she wanted...
<4823>
// That somewhere, she might have believed in him.
<4824>
// But, that was also over.
<4825> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} (Sorry, Mei-chan...)
<4826>
// Watching only to the end...
<4827>
// But, I couldn't just watch anymore.
<4828>
// It's several guys against me.
<4829>
// It feels bad, but this is the only thing left.
<4830> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} (... Sunohara...)
<4831>
// Cursing him, I remember his face at the end.
<4832>
// But, I shook that off quickly.
<4833>
// I formed a tight fist.
<4834>
// Taking a breath, I looked straight ahead.
<4835>
// I take one step forward.
<4836>
// I swing my arm, and then...
<4837> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Don't make Mei cry-----!"\shake{4}
<4838>
// I see someone come sprinting right in, jumping with a kick.
<4839>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "... Ah..."
<4840> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Are you bullying Mei?!"
<4841> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "People who bully Mei, people who bully Mei...!"
<4842> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "I definitely won't forgive that!!!"
<4843>\{??i Tr??ng} ""
// \{Captain} "You bastard..."
<4844> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Uraagggghhhhh---!"
<4845>
// Bringing up his fist, he hits them.
<4846>
// It became anarchy all at once.
<4847>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii... chan..."
<4848>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan...!"
<4849> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Step back, Mei-chan."
<4850> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "It'll be fine, onii-chan definitely won't lose."
<4851>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "O-okay..."
<4852> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "All right..."
<4853>
// I take a step back slowly and make sure, and then looked ahead again..
<4854>
// I saw the club members had grabbed ahold of Sunohara.
<4855> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Don't forget me!!"
<4856>
// Raising my fist, I rush right in.
<4857>
// Hitting them, a thick sound echoed.
<4858>
// The tall night sky spread out across my view.
<4859>
// It was terribly suffocating. I breathed hard, grabbing air.
<4860>
// Every time I did, everywhere around my chest hurt.
<4861>
// I had lied down with my body spread out across the dirt.
<4862>
// I didn't care that my hair or my clothes had all been dirtied.
<4863>
// My lips were beginning to dry with the sand and blood, and just that felt terrible.
<4864> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "\m{A}..."
<4865>
// Sunohara said, his body laid out in the same way.
<4866> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Did we win...?"
<4867> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Who knows."
<4868> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Then, did we lose?"
<4869> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "I'm pretty sure we didn't lose..."
<4870>
// I didn't know what the reality was.
<4871>
// At the time we jumped at the soccer club, my memories were all jumbled.
<4872>
// There was only one faint scene I remembered.
<4873>
// But, for my fists to hurt this much was probably because of that.
<4874>
// I had only been hit as much so that the blood in my mouth went into my throat...
<4875>
// I'm not exactly sure how it all ended.
<4876>
// "You guys have lost." Those lines were said, with the figure of the club members stepping back.
<4877>
// Though we made chase after them, our legs wouldn't move.
<4878>
// With a staggering way of walking they left. The only thing I remember about that was continuing our glare at them.
<4879>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "F... fueee..."
<4880>
// Mei-chan remained sitting there, sobbing.
<4881>
// The voice of her crying came through.
<4882> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You idiot."
<4883> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Who's an idiot...?"
<4884> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Who else would it be other than you?"
<4885>
// I struggle to move my painful body.
<4886> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You're a really big idiot."
<4887> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Apologize."
<4888> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Apologize to Mei-chan!"
<4889> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Why do I have to apologize...?"
<4890> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You're still saying that?"
<4891> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You're a failure as a brother."
<4892> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "What'd you say?"
<4893> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Mei-chan also waited, suffering for this older brother."
<4894> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "If you had done things properly, something like this wouldn't have happened."
<4895> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You really are a hopeless brother."
<4896> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "You picking a fight?"
<4897> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Guess so."
<4898>
// With an infuriated face, Sunohara also got up, facing me with a sharp glance.
<4899>
// Yet staggering, I got close to his chest. We both stared each other down.
<4900>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Please... stop..."
<4901>
// Mei-chan's thin voice could no longer reach us.
<4902> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You damn asshole!"\shake{4}
<4903>
// I catch Sunohara's head, butting it.
<4904>
// Holding his nose, he staggered backward, and fell like that.
<4905> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Don't screw around, Sunohara!"
<4906>
// I get on top of him and grab his blonde hair.
<4907> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "How do you think Mei-chan feels thanks to you?!"
<4908>
// I beat him with all my might.
<4909> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "How... miserable do you think she feels?!"\shake{4}\wait{300}\shake{4}\wait{300}\shake{4}
<4910>
// I hit him in the cheek two, three times.
<4911> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "It's all your fault!"
<4912> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "What are you going to do with you being unreliable?!"
<4913> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Are you a damn brother?!"
<4914>
// Blood spilled from the spilled tissue around his forehead. Did I wound him?
<4915> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Apologize...!"
<4916> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Apologize to Mei-chan...!"
<4917>
// The flowing blood fell to the ground, creating a dark blot.
<4918> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Damn you..."
<4919> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Huh?"
<4920>
// The bottom of his eyelids were swollen black.
<4921>
// Glancing at me, I could tell he was scowling.
<4922> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "\m{A}...!"
<4923>
// His hand stretches out, and also grabs my hair.
<4924> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You got no excuses, do you?!"
<4925> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You never thought of Mei-chan, did you?!"
<4926> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "I have...!"
<4927> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You liar!"
<4928> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Even though your sister was tricked by weird guys..."
<4929> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "You didn't do anything! You weren't worried, were you?!"
<4930> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "I was! I was worried!"
<4931> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Then, why'd you do nothing?!"
<4932> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Why'd you leave it be?!"
<4933> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Isn't that obvious?!"
<4934> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Then, tell me!!"
<4935> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "If you got any excuses, spill it!!"
<4936> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Because I thought it'd be fine if it were you!"
<4937>
// I stopped my hand at those words.
<4938>
// At that moment, my vision went blank.
<4939>
// Sunohara got in a punch in that space of time.
<4940>
// Right between the eyebrows, the light blurs.
<4941>
// It continued with a thick pain at the nose bridge.
<4942> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "... Gah!"
<4943>
// I could tell the blood was running.
<4944>
// Taking the opportunity, he pushed me off him.
<4945> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "You apologize as well!"
<4946> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Apologize to Mei!"
<4947>
// I stood up, leaned over pretty badly.
<4948>
// There was a gap in my guard, where he hit me many times.
<4949> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Why'd you bring Mei this far?!"
<4950> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "You should protect Mei!!"
<4951> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "That's your damn responsibility!!"
<4952> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Sunohara, you asshole!"
<4953> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "\m{A}--!"
<4954>
// Grappling each other, a cloud of dust builds up.
<4955>
// Pulling off each others' hair, we continued our fist fight, blood-stained.
<4956>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Please... stop..."
<4957>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Please stop!!"
<4958>
// Mei-chan's voice echoed.
<4959>
// Our breathing was wild. Scowling at each other, we realized what we were doing upon hearing that shout.
<4960>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Hic, uu... uuu..."
<4961>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Please... don't fight..."
<4962>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "I'm, fine!"
<4963>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "I'm not sad at all!"
<4964>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Because, because...!"
<4965> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Mei..."
<4966> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "Mei-chan..."
<4967>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Uu... uuu..."
<4968>
// A lot of tears streamed as she groggily stood up.
<4969>
// She wipes her cheek, frequently rubbing her eyes, and then...
<4970>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan...!"
<4971>
// She jumped into her brother's arms.
<4972>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "Onii-chan... onii-chan...!"
<4973>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "U-uuu...!"
<4974>\{Mei} ""
// \{Mei} "I'm so sorry... I'm so sorry...!"
<4975>
// Mei-chan cried like a child.
<4976>
// Sunohara watched that look of hers for a while, dumbfounded.
<4977>
// But, that was also fleeting.
<4978> \{Sunohara} ""
// \{Sunohara} "Mei..."
<4979>
// He softly hugs her.
<4980>
// And gently brushes her head.
<4981> \{\m{B}} ""
// \{\m{B}} "........."
<4982>
// I watch them for a while.
<4983>
// And then finally get up.
<4984>
// Being covered in mud and blood stains here and there, it looked pretty bad, even for me.
<4985>
// I fix up my hair, which is in disarray and mixed with sand.
<4986>
// I'll have to take a shower when I get back.
<4987>
// I'll also have to get a change of my school uniform from the closet.
<4988>
// What should I eat for dinner...?
<4989>
// I absent-mindedly thought about it.
<4990>
// Putting my hands in my pockets, I turn around.
<4991>
// I walk for a while, then take a look around.
<4992>
// I see the figure of a brother hugging his younger sister.
<4993>
// Taking a breath of awe...
<4994>
// I begin walking again.
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