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|明らかに俺を超える家庭の事情を持つ、<br>『小木曽とは違うジャンルのドラマみたいな家族』を<br>地で行ってるはずの冬馬家のご息女は言うことが違った。
 
|明らかに俺を超える家庭の事情を持つ、<br>『小木曽とは違うジャンルのドラマみたいな家族』を<br>地で行ってるはずの冬馬家のご息女は言うことが違った。
 
|Her family issues far surpass mine, since the Touma family also obviously has its own drama, quite similar to the Ogiso family's, yet still very different. It's no surprise that she would react differently to their way of handling things.
 
|Her family issues far surpass mine, since the Touma family also obviously has its own drama, quite similar to the Ogiso family's, yet still very different. It's no surprise that she would react differently to their way of handling things.
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|Singular or plural of "surpass"?}}
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|二度の結婚と、二度の離婚。<br>けれど娘が生まれた時期は、あろうことか独身で。
 
|二度の結婚と、二度の離婚。<br>けれど娘が生まれた時期は、あろうことか独身で。
 
|She'd married and divorced twice. However, of all the times, she'd given birth when she was single.
 
|She'd married and divorced twice. However, of all the times, she'd given birth when she was single.
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|"However, she'd given birth when she was single.". There aren't ALL, there are only 2 marriages, and we don't know how many affairs, and they aren't included in that sentence anyway.}}
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|一度空中分解した軽音楽同好会は、<br>最低限の、本当に最低限の体裁を取り戻し、<br>いよいよ最後の学園祭へと突き進んでいく。
 
|一度空中分解した軽音楽同好会は、<br>最低限の、本当に最低限の体裁を取り戻し、<br>いよいよ最後の学園祭へと突き進んでいく。
 
|But at last, the Light Music Club which was once disbanded has now managed to regain its form at the bare minimum,<br>finally pushing towards its final school festival.
 
|But at last, the Light Music Club which was once disbanded has now managed to regain its form at the bare minimum,<br>finally pushing towards its final school festival.
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|It was never disbanded, it was _almost_ disbanded. Should "was once disbanded" be changed to "was almost disbanded"?}}
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Translation Notes

1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the White Album 2 Omake page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:

  • Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with Chapter 1 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.
  • Lines 534-595 coincide with Chapter 2 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
  • Lines 676-677 coincide with the Epilogue of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.
  • Line 836 coincides with Chapter 3 (all-ages) of The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像(アイドル).

2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):

  • 春希
    「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、
    お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
  • 春希
    「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、
    友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

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