Difference between revisions of "White Album 2/Script/2011"

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|そして、最後の力を振り絞って送信された、<br>俺の渾身の第二稿は…
  
|そして、最後の力を振り絞って送信された、<br>俺の渾身の第二稿は…
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|The second copy of the manuscript that I sent with the last ounce of strength I could muster...
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|The second draft of the manuscript that I sent with the last ounce of strength I could muster...
 
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|初稿のときと、<br>ほとんど変わらないリアクションで迎えられた。
  
|初稿のときと、<br>ほとんど変わらないリアクションで迎えられた。
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|...Seems to be getting a similar reaction as my first copy did.
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|...Seems to be getting a similar reaction as my first draft did.
 
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|11|春希|Haruki
  
|11|春希|Haruki
 
|「少なくとも、その時点で本人はそう思ってました。<br>…後で誤解だったって判明する訳ですけど」
  
|「少なくとも、その時点で本人はそう思ってました。<br>…後で誤解だったって判明する訳ですけど」
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|"At the very least, that's what she thought at that time... She did admit that it was just a misconception on her part later on, though."
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|"At the very least, that's what she thought at that time...<br>She did admit that it was just a misconception on her part later on, though."
 
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|12|麻理|Mari
  
|12|麻理|Mari
 
|「峰城大付では周りとのレベルが合わず、<br>ついでに周りとのコミュニケーションも取れず、<br>クラスメートと一年間一言も喋らなかった？」
  
|「峰城大付では周りとのレベルが合わず、<br>ついでに周りとのコミュニケーションも取れず、<br>クラスメートと一年間一言も喋らなかった？」
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|"Because she was so far above her peers in terms of ability and her refusing to communicate with others, she spent a whole year<br>without speaking to a single classmate?"
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|"Because she was so far above her peers in terms of ability and her refusing to communicate with others, she spent a whole year... without speaking to a single classmate?"
 
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|13|春希|Haruki
  
|13|春希|Haruki
 
|「一応、入学したての頃は<br>少しは話してたみたいですけど。<br>…主に酷い喧嘩だったそうです」
  
|「一応、入学したての頃は<br>少しは話してたみたいですけど。<br>…主に酷い喧嘩だったそうです」
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|"From what I've heard, she did talk a little bit when she first entered the school... Though it mainly took place during arguments and fights."
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|"From what I've heard, she did talk a little bit when she first entered the school...<br>Though it mainly took place during arguments and fights."
 
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|14|麻理|Mari
  
|14|麻理|Mari
 
|「遅刻、無断欠席は当たり前。<br>教師からも見捨てられ、素行不良で何度も問題を起こし、<br>２年の終わりにとうとう音楽科から放出？」
  
|「遅刻、無断欠席は当たり前。<br>教師からも見捨てられ、素行不良で何度も問題を起こし、<br>２年の終わりにとうとう音楽科から放出？」
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|"She was constantly late or absent from class, abandoned by her teachers, caused endless numbers of incidents due to bad behavior,<br>and was removed from the music program at the end of her second year?"
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|"She was constantly late or absent from class, abandoned by her teachers, caused a countless number of incidents due to bad behavior, and was removed from the music program at the end of her second year?"
 
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|15|春希|Haruki
  
|15|春希|Haruki
 
|「でも、卒業だけはなんとかなりました」
  
|「でも、卒業だけはなんとかなりました」
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|"But, she did managed to graduate one way or another."
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|"But, she did manage to graduate one way or another."
 
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|25|春希|Haruki
  
|25|春希|Haruki
 
|「まぁ、３年前のことですけど。<br>でも、エピソードそのものは<br>それよりも前のことばかりなので、問題ないかなと」
  
|「まぁ、３年前のことですけど。<br>でも、エピソードそのものは<br>それよりも前のことばかりなので、問題ないかなと」
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|"Well, it has been 3 years since I heard it, <br>but all the events described here took place even earlier than that, so I don't think there's a problem."
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|"Well, it has been 3 years since I heard it, but all the events described here took place even earlier than that, so I don't think there's a problem."
 
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|他の部員の人たちも、<br>麻理さんが放り投げた原稿を回し読みして、<br>食い入るように頭を抱えてる。
  
|他の部員の人たちも、<br>麻理さんが放り投げた原稿を回し読みして、<br>食い入るように頭を抱えてる。
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|The other employees present took a look at the manuscript Mari-san passed over to them just now,<br>and started grasping at their heads in uncertainty like predators grasping at their prey.
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|The other employees present take a look at the manuscript Mari-san passed over to them just now, and start grasping at their heads in uncertainty like predators grasping at their prey.
 
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|けど、麻理さんのその表情は、<br>実はこの間総没食らったときとは、<br>明らかに違ってることには気づいてた。
  
|けど、麻理さんのその表情は、<br>実はこの間総没食らったときとは、<br>明らかに違ってることには気づいてた。
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|But, Mari-san's expression is certainly different than the one she had when she rejected my first copy. That much I'm sure of.
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|But, Mari-san's expression is certainly different than the one she had when she rejected my first draft. That much I'm sure of.
 
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|39|松岡|Matsuoka
  
|39|松岡|Matsuoka
 
|「これＯＫなんですか…？」
  
|「これＯＫなんですか…？」
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|"You're okaying this...?"
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|"You're giving this the green light...?"
 
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|それどころか、その口から出てくる言葉たちは、<br>『この原稿をどう直すか』ではなく、<br>『この原稿をどう通すか』に移ってる。
  
|それどころか、その口から出てくる言葉たちは、<br>『この原稿をどう直すか』ではなく、<br>『この原稿をどう通すか』に移ってる。
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|That's not all. Her words no longer carry the tone of "how do we fix this thing", but rather that of "how do we get this thing to pass".
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|That's not all. Her words no longer carry the tone of "How do we fix this thing", but rather that of "How do we get this thing to pass".
 
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|41|麻理|Mari
  
|41|麻理|Mari
 
|「私が『いいんだな』って聞いたのは、<br>そんな形式上の意味なんかじゃない」
  
|「私が『いいんだな』って聞いたのは、<br>そんな形式上の意味なんかじゃない」
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|"I didn't mean anything formal when I asked if we can 'really print this as the article' just now."
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|"I didn't mean anything formal when I asked if we can 'really print this' just now."
 
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|43|麻理|Mari
  
|43|麻理|Mari
 
|「これがそのまま掲載されて、<br>日本中の人の目に触れることになっても。<br>もう、北原だけの真実じゃなくなったとしても…」
  
|「これがそのまま掲載されて、<br>日本中の人の目に触れることになっても。<br>もう、北原だけの真実じゃなくなったとしても…」
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|"Printing this as is, letting all of Japan know about it... Making it no longer knowledge that only belongs to you, Kitahara..."
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|"What I meant was printing this, and letting all of Japan know about it... Making it no longer knowledge that only belongs to you, Kitahara..."
 
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|52|麻理|Mari
  
|52|麻理|Mari
 
|「初仕事でいきなり酷なことやらせた。<br>実は、相当後悔してる」
  
|「初仕事でいきなり酷なことやらせた。<br>実は、相当後悔してる」
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|"I made you suffer through some terrible stuff for your first job. To be honest, I'm sort of regretting the whole thing right now."
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|"I made you suffer quite a lot for your first job. To be honest, I'm sort of regretting the whole thing right now."
 
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|55|麻理|Mari
  
|55|麻理|Mari
 
|「そうじゃない。<br>そうじゃないんだ…」
  
|「そうじゃない。<br>そうじゃないんだ…」
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|"That's not it. <br>That's not it..."
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|"That's not it. <br>That's not what I mean..."
 
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|しかも言葉は男っぽいのに、<br>内容がちっとも竹を割れてない。
  
|しかも言葉は男っぽいのに、<br>内容がちっとも竹を割れてない。
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|Despite her forceful tone, however, <br>she isn't speaking straightforwardly at all.
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|Despite her forceful tone, however, she isn't speaking straightforwardly at all.
 
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|と、麻理さんは俯いたまま、<br>俺の目の前に、一枚の平たいケースを差し出した。
  
|と、麻理さんは俯いたまま、<br>俺の目の前に、一枚の平たいケースを差し出した。
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|Before I could finish and with her gaze still downcast, Mari-san hands me a flat case.
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|Before I could finish and with her gaze still downcast, Mari-san hands me a flat, plastic case.
 
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|62|麻理|Mari
  
|62|麻理|Mari
 
|「峰城大付から昨日届いた。<br>同封してあった手紙には、<br>８トラック目に冬馬かずさが映ってるって…」
  
|「峰城大付から昨日届いた。<br>同封してあった手紙には、<br>８トラック目に冬馬かずさが映ってるって…」
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|"Houjou High sent this to us yesterday. <br>The letter that came with it mentioned that the 8th part had one of Touma Kazusa's performances..."
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|"Houjou High sent this to us yesterday. The letter that accompanied it mentioned that the 8th part had one of Touma Kazusa's performances..."
 
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|表面には、ぶっきらぼうな太字マジックで<br>『２００×年学園祭　二日目ステージイベント』<br>と書かれている。
  
|表面には、ぶっきらぼうな太字マジックで<br>『２００×年学園祭　二日目ステージイベント』<br>と書かれている。
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|On the cover, <br>"School Festival 200x, Day 2 Stage Performances" <br>is written in bold with a permanent marker.
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|On the cover, "School Festival 200x, Day 2 Stage Performances" is written in bold with a permanent marker.
 
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|66|麻理|Mari
  
|66|麻理|Mari
 
|「…で、言われた通り再生してしまった。<br>本当にすまなかった」
  
|「…で、言われた通り再生してしまった。<br>本当にすまなかった」
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|"...And, I took a look at it like it told me to. <br>I'm really sorry about all this."
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|"...And, I watched it like the letter told me to. I'm really sorry about all this."
 
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|71|麻理|Mari
  
|71|麻理|Mari
 
|「それがどんなにお前を傷つけることになるのか…<br>知らなかったとはいえ、配慮に欠けてた。悪かった」
  
|「それがどんなにお前を傷つけることになるのか…<br>知らなかったとはいえ、配慮に欠けてた。悪かった」
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|"I had no idea how much pain this would put you through... Even though I wasn't informed, it was still inconsiderate. I'm sorry."
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|"I had no idea how much pain this would put you through...<br>Even though I wasn't informed, it was still inconsiderate. I'm sorry."
 
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|なんて下世話な…<br>それって、セクハラですよ、麻理さん。
  
|なんて下世話な…<br>それって、セクハラですよ、麻理さん。
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|What a distasteful... <br>That almost borders on sexual harassment, Mari-san.
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|Such gossip... <br>That almost borders on sexual harassment, Mari-san.
 
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|120|春希|Haruki
  
|120|春希|Haruki
 
|「だから、今度のことも気にしません。<br>…いえ、正直言えば、最初の原稿の時は気にしてました」
  
|「だから、今度のことも気にしません。<br>…いえ、正直言えば、最初の原稿の時は気にしてました」
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|"So, I don't mind what happened this time around. <br>...Well, to be honest, what happened when I handed in my first copy did get to me a little."
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|"So, I don't mind what happened this time around. <br>...Well, to be honest, what happened when I handed in my first draft did get to me a little."
 
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|124|麻理|Mari
  
|124|麻理|Mari
 
|「誰が何と言おうと、最初の記事はボツで、<br>誰が何と言おうと、今回の記事は合格だ。<br>…あれはよく書けてたよ」
  
|「誰が何と言おうと、最初の記事はボツで、<br>誰が何と言おうと、今回の記事は合格だ。<br>…あれはよく書けてたよ」
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|"No matter what anyone says, the first copy belongs in the trash. But no matter what anyone says, the copy this time around gets a pass from me. <br>...It's a fine piece of writing."
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|"No matter what anyone says, the first draft belongs in the trash. But no matter what anyone says, the draft this time around gets a pass from me. <br>...It's a fine piece of writing."
 
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