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|38|春希|Haruki
 
|38|春希|Haruki
 
|「さっきから『誰だお前?』って顔してたから」
 
|「さっきから『誰だお前?』って顔してたから」
|"Well, your face seemed to ask, 'Just who are you?', see."
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|"Well, your face seemed to ask, 'Just who are you?', you see."
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|The 'see' at the end just hangs out awkwardly. Deleting it or replacing it with 'you see(after 'Well' or as it is)' would do it a world of good.}}
 
   
 
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|次々と意外な事実と理不尽な糾弾が入り乱れ、<br>どこにどう突っ込んでいいのやら…
 
|次々と意外な事実と理不尽な糾弾が入り乱れ、<br>どこにどう突っ込んでいいのやら…
 
|Each of these unexpected realities and unreasonable charges jumbled up,<br>being thrust in all directions...
 
|Each of these unexpected realities and unreasonable charges jumbled up,<br>being thrust in all directions...
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|I replaced 'blame' with 'charge' because charge is countable and gives better parallelism in this sentence}}
 
   
 
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|「あんたみたいに上にへつらいつつ、<br>平穏でつまらない人生を歩むのはお断り」
 
|「あんたみたいに上にへつらいつつ、<br>平穏でつまらない人生を歩むのはお断り」
 
|"I refuse to live a tranquil, boring life like yours- sucking up to the higher-ups."
 
|"I refuse to live a tranquil, boring life like yours- sucking up to the higher-ups."
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|}}
|'Yours/Your own/You' all seem acceptable. The last part seems to be a standalone clause but a semicolon is not really appropriate for speech so I used a dash. }}
 
   
 
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|「俺の人生の目標は、<br>平均寿命より長く生きることでさ…」
 
|「俺の人生の目標は、<br>平均寿命より長く生きることでさ…」
 
|"The goal of my life,<br>is to extend my life expectancy, you see..."
 
|"The goal of my life,<br>is to extend my life expectancy, you see..."
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|}}
|The original 'see' at the end for some reason reminds me of the 1950s New York Italian Mafia's dialect.}}
 
   
 
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Revision as of 11:40, 22 May 2014

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Translation

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Translation Notes

1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the White Album 2 Omake page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:

  • Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with Chapter 1 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.
  • Lines 534-595 coincide with Chapter 2 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
  • Lines 676-677 coincide with the Epilogue of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.
  • Line 836 coincides with Chapter 3 (all-ages) of The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像(アイドル).

2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):

  • 春希
    「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、
    お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
  • 春希
    「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、
    友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

Text

{{WA2ScriptLine |113|かずさ|Kazusa |「あんたね、
前から言おう言おうと思ってたんだけど…」 |"You know,
I've been telling you this before so many times but..." |

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