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|11|春希|Haruki
 
|11|春希|Haruki
 
|「始業式からずっと登校してなかったよな?<br>体調の方、大丈夫か?」
 
|「始業式からずっと登校してなかったよな?<br>体調の方、大丈夫か?」
|"You haven't attended school since the graduation ceremony, yeah?<br>Are you doing all right?"
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|"You haven't attended school since the graduation ceremony, yeah? Are you doing all right?"
 
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|16|春希|Haruki
 
|16|春希|Haruki
 
|「それとこれ…<br>学割の申請書も念のため取っておいた。<br>岩津町だから電車通学だよな?」
 
|「それとこれ…<br>学割の申請書も念のため取っておいた。<br>岩津町だから電車通学だよな?」
|"Oh and also... the student discount form's here, just in case.<br>You go by train from Iwazuchou, right?"
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|"Oh and also... the student discount form's here, just in case. You go by train from Iwazuchou, right?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|20|春希|Haruki
 
|20|春希|Haruki
 
|「本当は家に直接届ければよかったんだけど、<br>俺の方も色々あって…悪かった」
 
|「本当は家に直接届ければよかったんだけど、<br>俺の方も色々あって…悪かった」
|"I was hoping to bring this directly to your house,<br>but I had a lot of things come up... sorry about that."
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|"I was hoping to bring this directly to your house, but I had a lot of things come up... sorry about that."
 
|}}
 
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|「………(ふるふる)」
 
|「………(ふるふる)」
 
|"......... (shaking head no)"
 
|"......... (shaking head no)"
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|Is there a smoother way to put this?
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|34|春希|Haruki
 
|34|春希|Haruki
 
|「よく言われるけど、これは必要なことなんだ。<br>俺がウザいなら一回で覚えた方がお得だと思うぞ」
 
|「よく言われるけど、これは必要なことなんだ。<br>俺がウザいなら一回で覚えた方がお得だと思うぞ」
|"Many tell me that, but this is important.<br>If I'm annoying you, I'm sure remembering all this will help."
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|"Many tell me that, but this is important. If I'm annoying you, I'm sure remembering all this will help."
 
|}}
 
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|38|春希|Haruki
 
|38|春希|Haruki
 
|「さっきから『誰だお前?』って顔してたから」
 
|「さっきから『誰だお前?』って顔してたから」
|"Well, your face seemed to ask, 'Just who are you?', you see."
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|"Well, your face seemed to ask, 'Just who are you?' you see."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|あの時は心の中で<br>『だから触ってないじゃん』<br>なんて突っ込んでたっけ。
 
|あの時は心の中で<br>『だから触ってないじゃん』<br>なんて突っ込んでたっけ。
|At the time,<br>I think I thought up a retort in my mind going, "I wasn't touching you anywhere."
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|At the time, I was prepared to say, "I wasn't touching you anywhere."
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|Still not perfect, but "was prepared to say" sounds a lot better than "think I thought up a retort in my mind going"
 
|}}
 
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|49||
 
|最初から彼女…冬馬かずさは、<br>言葉通りの『触るな』なんて言ってなかった。
 
|最初から彼女…冬馬かずさは、<br>言葉通りの『触るな』なんて言ってなかった。
|From the beginning... Touma Kazusa didn't ever say, "Don't touch me".
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|From the beginning... Touma Kazusa never said, "Don't touch me."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|ずっと、『入ってくるな』って…<br>自分の中に『触れるな』と言ってたんだって、<br>すぐに思い知ったっけ。
 
|ずっと、『入ってくるな』って…<br>自分の中に『触れるな』と言ってたんだって、<br>すぐに思い知ったっけ。
|She'd always said, "Don't come near me"...<br>I'd soon realized that her saying, "Don't touch me",<br>was something that I'd come up with.
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|She always said, "Don't come near me"... I soon realized that her saying "Don't touch me" was something that I'd come up with.
 
|}}
 
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|53||
 
|あまりの退屈…いや、あまりの自戒の念にかられ、<br>ついつい過去へと逃避してたらしい。
 
|あまりの退屈…いや、あまりの自戒の念にかられ、<br>ついつい過去へと逃避してたらしい。
|I was so bored... rather, I was blaming myself so much,<br>that I'd unconsciously escaped to the past.
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|I was so bored... rather, I was blaming myself so much, that I'd unconsciously escaped to the past.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|54||
 
|ま、逃避先の記憶のほうも、<br>あまり美しくもない思い出ではあったけど。
 
|ま、逃避先の記憶のほうも、<br>あまり美しくもない思い出ではあったけど。
|Well, the memories I escaped to<br>weren't really all that beautiful either.
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|Well, the memories I escaped to weren't really all that beautiful either.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|55|担任教師|Homeroom Teacher
 
|55|担任教師|Homeroom Teacher
 
|「なぁ、どうしてあんなことをしたんだ?<br>下手したら怪我で済まないってことくらい、<br>お前にわからないはずがないよなぁ?」
 
|「なぁ、どうしてあんなことをしたんだ?<br>下手したら怪我で済まないってことくらい、<br>お前にわからないはずがないよなぁ?」
|"Come on, why'd you do something like that?<br>You already know how much you'd get hurt if you fell from there, right?"
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|"Come on, why'd you do something like that? You already know how much you'd get hurt if you fell from there, right?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|59||
 
|現場で散々叱られたにも関わらず、<br>翌朝あらためて担任の口からお小言を頂戴するくらい、<br>俺のしでかしたことは問題になっているようだった。
 
|現場で散々叱られたにも関わらず、<br>翌朝あらためて担任の口からお小言を頂戴するくらい、<br>俺のしでかしたことは問題になっているようだった。
|Despite being harshly criticized, it'd become so much of a problem that the homeroom teacher also scolded me the next morning.
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|Despite being harshly criticized, it'd become such a problem that the homeroom teacher also scolded me the next morning.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|62|指導部長|Guidance Counsellor
 
|62|指導部長|Guidance Counsellor
 
|「どうせ冬馬に唆されでもしたんだろう?<br>北原が自分からあんな馬鹿をしでかすはずがない」
 
|「どうせ冬馬に唆されでもしたんだろう?<br>北原が自分からあんな馬鹿をしでかすはずがない」
|"I bet you Touma was the one who provoked you anyway.<br>There's no way you'd do something so foolish, Kitahara."
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|"I bet you Touma was the one who provoked you anyway. There's no way you'd do something so foolish, Kitahara."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|63|春希|Haruki
 
|63|春希|Haruki
 
|「は、はぁ?<br>あの、言ってる意味がわかりません。<br>どうして冬馬のせいになるんです?」
 
|「は、はぁ?<br>あの、言ってる意味がわかりません。<br>どうして冬馬のせいになるんです?」
|"W, wha?<br>Umm, I'm not sure what you're talking about.<br>Why is it Touma's fault now?"
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|"W, wha? Umm, I'm not sure what you're talking about. Why is it Touma's fault now?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|66|指導部長|Guidance Counsellor
 
|66|指導部長|Guidance Counsellor
 
|「音楽科を勝手に辞めたと思ったら普通科でも問題ばかり。<br>冬馬、お前卒業する気あるのか?」
 
|「音楽科を勝手に辞めたと思ったら普通科でも問題ばかり。<br>冬馬、お前卒業する気あるのか?」
|"Leaving the music program on your own and causing trouble among the regulars.<br>Touma, do you plan on graduating?"
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|"Leaving the music program on your own and causing trouble among the regulars. Touma, do you plan on graduating?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|78||
 
|次々と意外な事実と理不尽な糾弾が入り乱れ、<br>どこにどう突っ込んでいいのやら…
 
|次々と意外な事実と理不尽な糾弾が入り乱れ、<br>どこにどう突っ込んでいいのやら…
|Each of these unexpected realities and unreasonable charges jumbled up,<br>being thrust in all directions...
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|Each of these unexpected realities and unreasonable charges jumbled up, being thrust in all directions...
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|79|春希|Haruki
 
|79|春希|Haruki
 
|「…って、何を冬馬に注意するんです?<br>そもそも何で冬馬まで俺と一緒に叱られるんです?<br>言っておきますが、俺の命の恩人ですよ?」
 
|「…って、何を冬馬に注意するんです?<br>そもそも何で冬馬まで俺と一緒に叱られるんです?<br>言っておきますが、俺の命の恩人ですよ?」
|"... hey, why are you warning Touma?<br>And why is she being blamed alongside me?<br>I'll have you know, she saved my life."
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|"... hey, why are you warning Touma? And why is she being blamed alongside me? I'll have you know, she saved my life."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|80||
 
|と、迷っていても仕方ないので、<br>とりあえず安っぽい正義感を振りかざしてみる。
 
|と、迷っていても仕方ないので、<br>とりあえず安っぽい正義感を振りかざしてみる。
|As getting off-topic couldn't be helped,<br>for the time being I brought up that cheap sense of justice I had.
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|As getting off-topic couldn't be helped, for the time being I brought up my cheap sense of justice.
 
|'Possible Edit: As it couldn't be helped that we'd get off-topic,<br>for the time being I brought up the cheap sense of justice that I had.' This variation flows better but has some significant addenda.}}
 
|'Possible Edit: As it couldn't be helped that we'd get off-topic,<br>for the time being I brought up the cheap sense of justice that I had.' This variation flows better but has some significant addenda.}}
   
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|87|指導部長|Guidance Counsellor
 
|87|指導部長|Guidance Counsellor
 
|「本当に関係ないのか?<br>冬馬にそう言わされてるだけじゃないのか?」
 
|「本当に関係ないのか?<br>冬馬にそう言わされてるだけじゃないのか?」
|"Is that really the case?<br>You're not just telling Touma to say that, are you?"
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|"Is that really the case? You're not just telling Touma to say that, are you?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|94||
 
|それにしても、あの先生達の態度…何だよあれは。<br>思い出しただけで胸糞悪くなる。
 
|それにしても、あの先生達の態度…何だよあれは。<br>思い出しただけで胸糞悪くなる。
|Still though, the attitude those teachers had... what was that?<br>Just remembering it disgusts me.
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|Still though, the attitude those teachers had... what was that? Just remembering it disgusts me.
 
|}}
 
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|99|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|99|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「教師なんかに何言ったって無駄。<br>大人がわかってくれる訳ない」
 
|「教師なんかに何言ったって無駄。<br>大人がわかってくれる訳ない」
|"It's useless to tell the teachers anything.<br>Adults won't understand a thing."
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|"It's useless to tell the teachers anything. Adults won't understand a thing."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|105|春希|Haruki
 
|105|春希|Haruki
 
|「………災難だったな。<br>悪い、俺のせいで」
 
|「………災難だったな。<br>悪い、俺のせいで」
|"......... that was a disaster.<br>I'm sorry, it's my fault."
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|"......... that was a disaster. I'm sorry, it's my fault."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|107||
 
|なんとなく、今の冬馬の表情で、<br>全部帳消しにしてもいいような気もしないでもなかった。
 
|なんとなく、今の冬馬の表情で、<br>全部帳消しにしてもいいような気もしないでもなかった。
|Somehow, from Touma's looks right now;<br>even if I'd written off what had happened, it didn't look like she'd be in a good mood.
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|Somehow, from Touma's looks right now, even if I'd written off what had happened, it didn't look like she'd be in a good mood.
 
|}}
 
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|109|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|109|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「あんたみたいに上にへつらいつつ、<br>平穏でつまらない人生を歩むのはお断り」
 
|「あんたみたいに上にへつらいつつ、<br>平穏でつまらない人生を歩むのはお断り」
|"I refuse to live a tranquil, boring life like yours- sucking up to the higher-ups."
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|"I refuse to live a tranquil, boring life like yours - sucking up to the higher-ups."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|110|春希|Haruki
 
|110|春希|Haruki
 
|「俺の人生の目標は、<br>平均寿命より長く生きることでさ…」
 
|「俺の人生の目標は、<br>平均寿命より長く生きることでさ…」
|"The goal of my life,<br>is to extend my life expectancy, you see..."
+
|"The goal of my life is to extend my life expectancy, you see..."
  +
|Possibly change this to something like "My intention is to extend my life expectancy, you see..." It's a bit redundant otherwise.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|111|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|111|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「本っ当につまんない奴。<br>まさしく典型的な委員長タイプ」
 
|「本っ当につまんない奴。<br>まさしく典型的な委員長タイプ」
|"You really are a dull guy.<br>The stereotypical class representative, without a doubt."
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|"You really are a dull guy. The stereotypical class representative, without a doubt."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|113|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|113|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「あんたね、<br>前から言おう言おうと思ってたんだけど…」
 
|「あんたね、<br>前から言おう言おうと思ってたんだけど…」
|"You know,<br>I've been telling you this before so many times but..."
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|"You know, I've been telling you this before so many times, but..."
 
|}}
 
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|そして、廊下から近づく駆け足の主を見て、<br>ごく不自然に下へと向けられる。
 
|そして、廊下から近づく駆け足の主を見て、<br>ごく不自然に下へと向けられる。
|And then, seeing someone running down the hallway coming near us,<br>she unnaturally brought her finger down.
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|And then, seeing someone running down the hallway coming near us, she unnaturally brought her finger down.
 
|}}
 
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|122|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|122|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「ん~…見た感じじゃよくわかんないな。<br>突き指とかない?<br>窓から落ちそうになったんでしょ?」
 
|「ん~…見た感じじゃよくわかんないな。<br>突き指とかない?<br>窓から落ちそうになったんでしょ?」
|"Hmm~... I can't tell just by looking here.<br>Your fingers weren't jammed or anything?<br>You were gonna fall from the window, weren't you?"
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|"Hmm~... I can't tell just by looking here. Your fingers weren't jammed or anything? You were gonna fall from the window, weren't you?"
 
|}}
 
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|123||
 
|あまりにあっさり俺の手を掴むと、<br>自分の両手の上に拡げてまじまじと吟味する。
 
|あまりにあっさり俺の手を掴むと、<br>自分の両手の上に拡げてまじまじと吟味する。
|Easily picking up my hands just like that,<br>she spread them out and carefully investigated them worriedly.
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|Easily picking up my hands just like that, she spread them out and carefully examined them.
  +
|Changed "carefully investigated them worriedly" to "carefully examined them." It was originally a bit redundant and worded oddly (with the two adverbs).
 
|}}
 
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|124||
 
|俺の怪我を心配してくれてるのはありがたいけど、<br>俺の手のひらの上を小木曽の指が這い回るのは、<br>なんというか、相当に、えっと…
 
|俺の怪我を心配してくれてるのはありがたいけど、<br>俺の手のひらの上を小木曽の指が這い回るのは、<br>なんというか、相当に、えっと…
|I'm happy she's worried about whether I got hurt or not,<br>but for Ogiso's fingers to be creeping about my palm;<br>it was well, befitting, umm...
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|I'm happy she's worried about whether I got hurt or not, but for Ogiso's fingers to be creeping about my palm... it was, well, befitting, umm...
 
|It doesn't seem syntactically correct- but as it's a thought stream I guess I have to take liberty with sentence structure.}}
 
|It doesn't seem syntactically correct- but as it's a thought stream I guess I have to take liberty with sentence structure.}}
   
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|126|春希|Haruki
 
|126|春希|Haruki
 
|「大丈夫大丈夫大丈夫だから!<br>ホント無傷だから。むしろ心配事はそこじゃないから!」
 
|「大丈夫大丈夫大丈夫だから!<br>ホント無傷だから。むしろ心配事はそこじゃないから!」
|"I'm fine, I'm fine, I'm fine already!<br>I'm not hurt anywhere. Anyway, that's not what you should be worried about!"
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|"I'm fine, I'm fine, I'm fine already! I'm not hurt anywhere. Anyway, that's not what you should be worried about!"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|思わず小木曽の手の届かない頭上へと両手を掲げ、<br>至福の感触を放棄してしまう俺は、<br>真面目と自己弁護するには虚しすぎる。
 
|思わず小木曽の手の届かない頭上へと両手を掲げ、<br>至福の感触を放棄してしまう俺は、<br>真面目と自己弁護するには虚しすぎる。
|Unknowingly pulling both of Ogiso's hands overhead where she couldn't reach, I felt it impossible to seriously justify abandoning the absolute bliss I had felt.
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|Unknowingly pulling both of Ogiso's hands overhead where she couldn't reach, I felt it impossible to seriously justify abandoning the sheer bliss I had felt.
 
|Unknowingly has an alternate meaning in this context that has to do with his lack of volition in the matter- it's something like involuntarily but it's done grudgingly. I think 'Reluctantly' would work well with the two connected clauses but I'm unsure if it's an appropriate change to make.}}
 
|Unknowingly has an alternate meaning in this context that has to do with his lack of volition in the matter- it's something like involuntarily but it's done grudgingly. I think 'Reluctantly' would work well with the two connected clauses but I'm unsure if it's an appropriate change to make.}}
   
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|131|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|131|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「そうなんだ…よかったぁ。<br>学園祭まであと一月もないもんね」
 
|「そうなんだ…よかったぁ。<br>学園祭まであと一月もないもんね」
|"I see... thank god.<br>There's only a month until the school festival, right?"
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|"I see... thank god. There's only a month until the school festival, right?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|…時々視線が横にずれるのはご愛嬌、なのか?
 
|…時々視線が横にずれるのはご愛嬌、なのか?
|... does she enjoy bringing her glance aside at times?
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|... does she enjoy glancing sideways from time to time?
 
|}}
 
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|最後に諏訪が示した『軽い処罰』の可能性は、<br>実は今の俺たちにとっては、下手したら致命的だった。
 
|最後に諏訪が示した『軽い処罰』の可能性は、<br>実は今の俺たちにとっては、下手したら致命的だった。
|The "light punishment" that Suwa revealed at the end,<br>would have indeed been fatal if he handed that down to us now.
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|The "light punishment" that Suwa revealed at the end, would have indeed been fatal if he handed that down to us now.
 
|}}
 
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|142|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|142|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「あ…っ、<br>ええと、そういう意味じゃないから。<br>別に、北原くんのこと責めてる訳じゃ…」
 
|「あ…っ、<br>ええと、そういう意味じゃないから。<br>別に、北原くんのこと責めてる訳じゃ…」
|"Ah...!<br>Umm, that's not what I mean!<br>I wasn't trying to blame you or..."
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|"Ah...!<br>Umm, that's not what I mean! I wasn't trying to blame you or..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|143|春希|Haruki
 
|143|春希|Haruki
 
|「ま、とにかく心配かけて悪かった。<br>とりあえず、そういうことだから」
 
|「ま、とにかく心配かけて悪かった。<br>とりあえず、そういうことだから」
|"Well, anyways, sorry for making you worry.<br>For now, that's just how it is."
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|"Well, anyways, sorry for making you worry. For now, that's just how it is."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|144|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|144|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「そうだね。<br>うん、とっても心配しました。<br>だからとっても反省してください」
 
|「そうだね。<br>うん、とっても心配しました。<br>だからとっても反省してください」
|"That's right.<br>Yup, I was real worried.<br>So be sure to reflect deeply on this."
+
|"That's right. Yup, I was real worried. So be sure to reflect deeply on this."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|146|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|146|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「な~んて、ほんの数分間だけどね。<br>ふふっ」
 
|「な~んて、ほんの数分間だけどね。<br>ふふっ」
|"Li~ke, for maybe a few minutes.<br>Heheh!"
+
|"Li~ke, for maybe a few minutes. Heheh!"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|152||
 
|152||
 
|小木曽のタイミングが絶妙だったことも。<br>冬馬の表情がやたらと微妙だったことも。
 
|小木曽のタイミングが絶妙だったことも。<br>冬馬の表情がやたらと微妙だったことも。
|That Ogiso's timing was particularly perfect.<br>That Touma's expression was profusely delicate.
+
|That Ogiso's timing was particularly perfect. That Touma's expression was profusely delicate.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|159||
 
|159||
 
|だから、普通に冬馬の肩に手を置いて、<br>普通に冬馬にゲンコツで殴られる、<br>半年後の今って時を、普通に嬉しく感じてた。
 
|だから、普通に冬馬の肩に手を置いて、<br>普通に冬馬にゲンコツで殴られる、<br>半年後の今って時を、普通に嬉しく感じてた。
|After all, I'd feel happy about this moment if I looked back at it half a year later; my putting my hand on her shoulder, and her hitting me with her knuckles.
+
|After all, I'd feel happy about this moment if I looked back at it half a year later; putting my hand on her shoulder, and her hitting me with her knuckles.
  +
|"her hitting me with her knuckles" - Shouldn't this simply be "her punching me"?
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|160||
 
|160||
 
|もう、『さわるな』なんて言われない、今を。
 
|もう、『さわるな』なんて言われない、今を。
|With her no longer saying the words, "Don't come near me".
+
|With her no longer saying the words, "Don't come near me."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|168|武也|Takeya
 
|168|武也|Takeya
 
|「冬馬かずさ。<br>3年E組、出席番号32番。帰宅部所属。<br>住所、岩津町6■2■12。電話番号…」
 
|「冬馬かずさ。<br>3年E組、出席番号32番。帰宅部所属。<br>住所、岩津町6■2■12。電話番号…」
|"Touma Kazusa. Class 3-E, attended 32 times. Part of the go-home club.Address is 6-2-1 2, Iwazuchou. Telephone number..."
+
|"Touma Kazusa. Class 3-E, attended 32 times. Part of the go-home club. Address is 6-2-1 2, Iwazuchou. Telephone number..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|170||
 
|170||
 
|というか、全員分を暗記してる。<br>クラス委員として必要だったから。
 
|というか、全員分を暗記してる。<br>クラス委員として必要だったから。
|Actually, I'd memorized the whole thing.<br>Because I need to as the class representative.
+
|Actually, I'd memorized the whole thing. Because I need to as the class representative.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|172|武也|Takeya
 
|172|武也|Takeya
 
|「でもこれは知らなかっただろ?<br>去年までのクラスは、2年H組。<br>一昨年のクラスは、1年H組…」
 
|「でもこれは知らなかっただろ?<br>去年までのクラスは、2年H組。<br>一昨年のクラスは、1年H組…」
|"But you don't know this, right?<br>Her class last year was 2-H.<br>The class before that was 1-H..."
+
|"But you don't know this, right? Her class last year was 2-H. The class before that was 1-H..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|173|春希|Haruki
 
|173|春希|Haruki
 
|「いくらクラスメイトだからって、<br>過去まで詮索していいわけないだろ」
 
|「いくらクラスメイトだからって、<br>過去まで詮索していいわけないだろ」
|"Even if she's a classmate,<br>you shouldn't go prying into their past."
+
|"Even if she's a classmate, you shouldn't go prying into her past."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|176||
 
|176||
 
|各学年の最終クラス。<br>つまり、音楽科クラス。
 
|各学年の最終クラス。<br>つまり、音楽科クラス。
|The last class for each year.<br>In other words, the music program's class.
+
|The last class for each year. In other words, the music program's class.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|177|春希|Haruki
 
|177|春希|Haruki
 
|「でも、ま、<br>道理で去年まで全然見かけなかったわけだ」
 
|「でも、ま、<br>道理で去年まで全然見かけなかったわけだ」
|"But, well,<br>it's no wonder I'd never seen her until last year."
+
|"But, well, it's no wonder I'd never seen her until last year."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|181|武也|Takeya
 
|181|武也|Takeya
 
|「二年の時、年の半分近く欠席してたんだとさ。<br>進級もギリギリだったらしい」
 
|「二年の時、年の半分近く欠席してたんだとさ。<br>進級もギリギリだったらしい」
|"She'd been absent for almost half of second year, barely passing."
+
|"She was absent for almost half of second year, barely passing."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|186|春希|Haruki
 
|186|春希|Haruki
 
|「………いや待て。<br>お前の一つ前の発言に引っかかるところを見つけた。<br>『俺の経験から』ってどういう意味だ?」
 
|「………いや待て。<br>お前の一つ前の発言に引っかかるところを見つけた。<br>『俺の経験から』ってどういう意味だ?」
|"......... wait a sec.<br>I've noticed something that bothers me in your words.<br>What do you mean by, 'From your own experience'?"
+
|"......... wait a sec. I've noticed something you said that bothers me. What do you mean by, 'From your own experience'?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|187|武也|Takeya
 
|187|武也|Takeya
 
|「最初にお前のクラスであの娘見つけた三日後に、<br>つきあわないかって言ったら、いきなり蹴りだぜ蹴り?」
 
|「最初にお前のクラスであの娘見つけた三日後に、<br>つきあわないかって言ったら、いきなり蹴りだぜ蹴り?」
|"Three days after I found her in your class,<br>I tried to ask her out, and she just kicked me all of a sudden!"
+
|"Three days after I found her in your class, I tried to ask her out, and she just kicked me all of a sudden!"
 
|Reference to event from chapter 1 of Kazusa novel
 
|Reference to event from chapter 1 of Kazusa novel
 
|}}
 
|}}
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|188|春希|Haruki
 
|188|春希|Haruki
 
|「待て待て待て!<br>お前、一言も俺に断りなしで何やってやがる!?」
 
|「待て待て待て!<br>お前、一言も俺に断りなしで何やってやがる!?」
|"Wait wait wait!<br>What are you doing, not saying a word of warning to me!?"
+
|"Wait wait wait! What are you doing, not giving me a word of warning!?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|190|武也|Takeya
 
|190|武也|Takeya
 
|「いや…だってお前のクラスの中じゃダントツだろ?<br>付き合うならあのコしかいないって思ってさぁ」
 
|「いや…だってお前のクラスの中じゃダントツだろ?<br>付き合うならあのコしかいないって思ってさぁ」
|"Well... she's the best in your class, isn't she?<br>She'd be the only one I'd ask out, you see."
+
|"Well... she's the best in your class, isn't she? She'd be the only one I'd ask out, you see."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|191|春希|Haruki
 
|191|春希|Haruki
 
|「お前はクラスごとに女がいないと気が済まないのか?<br>全学年全クラス24人の彼女を作る気か?」
 
|「お前はクラスごとに女がいないと気が済まないのか?<br>全学年全クラス24人の彼女を作る気か?」
|"You're not satisfied with the girls in your class?<br>Do you plan to get 24 girlfriends across all years and classes?"
+
|"You're not satisfied with the girls in your class? Do you plan to get 24 girlfriends across all years and classes?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|193|武也|Takeya
 
|193|武也|Takeya
 
|「やだなぁ、音楽科はパスに決まってんじゃん。<br>だから全部で21人…」
 
|「やだなぁ、音楽科はパスに決まってんじゃん。<br>だから全部で21人…」
|"No way, I'd definitely pass on the music students.<br>So that makes 21 in all..."
+
|"No way, I'd definitely pass on the music students. So that makes 21 in all..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|195||
 
|195||
 
|今まで俺に紹介してくれようとした女の子たちは、<br>全21人中何番目くらいだったんだろう…
 
|今まで俺に紹介してくれようとした女の子たちは、<br>全21人中何番目くらいだったんだろう…
|And what exactly is his ranking for all the 21 girls he's introduced to me so far...?
+
|And what exactly are his rankings for the 21 girls he's introduced to me so far...?
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|196|武也|Takeya
 
|196|武也|Takeya
 
|「いいじゃんか、昔のことだ。<br>それにお前の彼女って訳でもないだろ?」
 
|「いいじゃんか、昔のことだ。<br>それにお前の彼女って訳でもないだろ?」
|"It's okay, that's in the past.<br>Besides, she's not really your girlfriend either, right?"
+
|"It's okay, that's in the past. Besides, she's not really your girlfriend either, right?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|201|武也|Takeya
 
|201|武也|Takeya
 
|「…彼女ではないにしても、<br>なんだかんだ仲良くやってるみたいだな」
 
|「…彼女ではないにしても、<br>なんだかんだ仲良くやってるみたいだな」
|"... even if she isn't,<br>somehow you've gotten along with her."
+
|"... even if she isn't, somehow you've gotten along with her."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|205|武也|Takeya
 
|205|武也|Takeya
 
|「冬馬かずさはな…<br>入学当時、音楽科始まって以来の優等生だったんだとよ」
 
|「冬馬かずさはな…<br>入学当時、音楽科始まって以来の優等生だったんだとよ」
|"Touma Kazusa, you see...<br>was an honors student ever since she enrolled in the music program."
+
|"Touma Kazusa, you see... was an honors student ever since she enrolled in the music program."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|207||
 
|207||
 
|そこから武也がもたらしてくれた情報は、<br>いつものように精度と密度の高い、<br>信用に値するものだった。
 
|そこから武也がもたらしてくれた情報は、<br>いつものように精度と密度の高い、<br>信用に値するものだった。
|From that point on, the information Takeya gave me,<br>was so accurate and detailed as always,<br>that it had merit in believing.
+
|From that point on, the information Takeya gave me was so accurate and detailed as always that it was worth believing.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|208||
 
|208||
 
|…問題は、いつも性別が偏ることだけで。
 
|…問題は、いつも性別が偏ることだけで。
|... the only problem, was with the other gender.
+
|... the only problem was with the other gender.
 
|This line has something to do with gender bias, I think. Is it point out that Takeya's flaw with information has to do with gender bias?}}
 
|This line has something to do with gender bias, I think. Is it point out that Takeya's flaw with information has to do with gender bias?}}
   
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|212||
 
|212||
 
|当初、音楽科の教師たちはこぞって冬馬を持ち上げ、<br>クラスメートたちは彼女と比較され、<br>その未熟さを幾度となくこき下ろされたらしい。
 
|当初、音楽科の教師たちはこぞって冬馬を持ち上げ、<br>クラスメートたちは彼女と比較され、<br>その未熟さを幾度となくこき下ろされたらしい。
|At first, the music teachers had all praised Touma,<br>comparing her with her classmates,<br>and denouncing those who were inexperienced.
+
|At first, the music teachers had all praised Touma, comparing her with her classmates and denouncing those who were inexperienced.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|219|春希|Haruki
 
|219|春希|Haruki
 
|「冬馬のお母さんだろ?<br>確か保護者名簿で…」
 
|「冬馬のお母さんだろ?<br>確か保護者名簿で…」
|"She's Touma's mother, right?<br>She should be on the name register..."
+
|"She's Touma's mother, right? She should be on the name register..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|222||
 
|222||
 
|実は保護者名までは、<br>特定の人物についてしか押さえてないけど、<br>そこを突っ込まれなかったのは幸運だった。
 
|実は保護者名までは、<br>特定の人物についてしか押さえてないけど、<br>そこを突っ込まれなかったのは幸運だった。
|The truth is, the name is probably the most I'd know about her,<br>but it was by luck that I hadn't delved any deeper.
+
|The truth is, the name is probably the most I'd know about her, but it was by luck that I hadn't delved any deeper.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|223|武也|Takeya
 
|223|武也|Takeya
 
|「あのさ春希…<br>結構前だけど、ウイスキーか何かのCMでさ、<br>赤いドレスの女がピアノ弾いてるやつ覚えてないか?」
 
|「あのさ春希…<br>結構前だけど、ウイスキーか何かのCMでさ、<br>赤いドレスの女がピアノ弾いてるやつ覚えてないか?」
|"Remember, Haruki...?<br>There was a whiskey commercial or something from far back,<br>with a lady in a red dress playing the piano."
+
|"Remember, Haruki... There was a whiskey commercial or something from far back, with a lady in a red dress playing the piano."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|224|春希|Haruki
 
|224|春希|Haruki
 
|「ええと…それって小学生くらいの頃じゃないか?<br>確か各界の一流アーティストが出てくる<br>シリーズもので…」
 
|「ええと…それって小学生くらいの頃じゃないか?<br>確か各界の一流アーティストが出てくる<br>シリーズもので…」
|"Umm... that was during primary school?<br>There was something like a series of<br>top artists that was coming out or..."
+
|"Umm... that was during primary school? There was something like a series of top artists that was coming out or..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|225|武也|Takeya
 
|225|武也|Takeya
 
|「そうそう、それそれ!<br>で、そのシリーズの一番目がそのピアニストでさ」
 
|「そうそう、それそれ!<br>で、そのシリーズの一番目がそのピアニストでさ」
|"Yeah, yeah, that!<br>In that series, the pianist was number one, right?"
+
|"Yeah, yeah, that! In that series, the pianist was number one, right?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|231|武也|Takeya
 
|231|武也|Takeya
 
|「あの頃は日本で活動してたけど、<br>今はヨーロッパに拠点を移したらしくてな」
 
|「あの頃は日本で活動してたけど、<br>今はヨーロッパに拠点を移したらしくてな」
|"She was performing in Japan at the time,<br>but now she's in Europe it seems."
+
|"She was performing in Japan at the time, but now she's in Europe it seems."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|237||
 
|237||
 
|母親が、自分の環境において、<br>超がつくほどの有名人。
 
|母親が、自分の環境において、<br>超がつくほどの有名人。
|Putting aside her circumstances as a mother,<br>she was extremely famous.
+
|Putting aside her circumstances as a mother, she was extremely famous.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|245|武也|Takeya
 
|245|武也|Takeya
 
|「二年になってからは、<br>ほとんどクラスメートと話したことはなかったって」
 
|「二年になってからは、<br>ほとんどクラスメートと話したことはなかったって」
|"By second year,<br>she'd barely talk to any of her classmates."
+
|"By second year, she'd barely talk to any of her classmates."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|251|武也|Takeya
 
|251|武也|Takeya
 
|「ま、そんなこんなでさすがに居辛くなったんだろうな。<br>三年から普通科に転科してきて今に至る、と」
 
|「ま、そんなこんなでさすがに居辛くなったんだろうな。<br>三年から普通科に転科してきて今に至る、と」
|"Well, just like that, she really couldn't stay there much longer. And then she transferred to the regular program, bringing us to now."
+
|"Well, just like that, she really couldn't stay there much longer. And then she transferred to the regular program, bringing us to the present."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|253|武也|Takeya
 
|253|武也|Takeya
 
|「で、どうする?<br>それでも[R同好会^ウチ]に誘うのか?」
 
|「で、どうする?<br>それでも[R同好会^ウチ]に誘うのか?」
|"So, what'll you do?<br>Will you still recruit her [Rinto the club^in]?"
+
|"So, what'll you do? Will you still recruit her [Rinto the club^in]?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|255||
 
|255||
 
|様々な感情が渦巻いたり軋んだり移入したりして、<br>すぐにはいつも通りの正論反論理想論を唱えられない。
 
|様々な感情が渦巻いたり軋んだり移入したりして、<br>すぐにはいつも通りの正論反論理想論を唱えられない。
|So many emotions swirled around in my head,<br>I couldn't immediately give him an ideal, logical response like I always did.
+
|So many emotions swirled around in my head, I couldn't immediately give him an ideal, logical response like I always did.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|256|武也|Takeya
 
|256|武也|Takeya
 
|「難しいぞ、あのコは。<br>仲間とつるむのに拒否反応があるかもしれない」
 
|「難しいぞ、あのコは。<br>仲間とつるむのに拒否反応があるかもしれない」
|"She's a complicated one.<br>She might refuse, despite being within your circle."
+
|"She's a complicated one. She might refuse, despite being within your circle."
 
|Literally, being within a circle of friends, but implicitly probably Haruki
 
|Literally, being within a circle of friends, but implicitly probably Haruki
 
|}}
 
|}}
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|258|武也|Takeya
 
|258|武也|Takeya
 
|「何しろこの俺を振るくらいだからな。<br>他のどんな男にだって心を開くとは…」
 
|「何しろこの俺を振るくらいだからな。<br>他のどんな男にだって心を開くとは…」
|"After all, she did reject me.<br>For any other man to open up her heart..."
+
|"After all, she did reject me. For any other man to open up her heart..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|266|春希|Haruki
 
|266|春希|Haruki
 
|「あんだけ上手くて、帰宅部で、しかも普通科で…<br>誘わない手なんかないだろ?」
 
|「あんだけ上手くて、帰宅部で、しかも普通科で…<br>誘わない手なんかないだろ?」
|"She's that good, goes home every day, and is in the regular program...<br>There has to be a way to recruit her."
+
|"She's that good, goes home every day, and is in the regular program... There has to be a way to recruit her."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|268|武也|Takeya
 
|268|武也|Takeya
 
|「小木曽には何て言うんだ?<br>ピアノ担当のこと、今まで嘘ついてたろ?」
 
|「小木曽には何て言うんだ?<br>ピアノ担当のこと、今まで嘘ついてたろ?」
|"What'd Ogiso say?<br>You still haven't told her the truth about this all, right?"
+
|"What'd Ogiso say? You still haven't told her the truth about this all, right?"
 
|literally, still lying about who's playing the piano for the club
 
|literally, still lying about who's playing the piano for the club
 
|}}
 
|}}
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|269|春希|Haruki
 
|269|春希|Haruki
 
|「きちんと説明する。しっかり謝る。<br>でも…冬馬が必要だって、わかってもらう」
 
|「きちんと説明する。しっかり謝る。<br>でも…冬馬が必要だって、わかってもらう」
|"I'll properly explain to her. And I'll apologize.<br>But... I'll make sure she understands Touma is needed."
+
|"I'll properly explain to her. And I'll apologize. But... I'll make sure she understands Touma is needed."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|271|春希|Haruki
 
|271|春希|Haruki
 
|「絶対に諦めない。<br>だって、俺にはどうしても、二人とも必要なんだ。<br>どっちも大事なんだよ」
 
|「絶対に諦めない。<br>だって、俺にはどうしても、二人とも必要なんだ。<br>どっちも大事なんだよ」
|"I won't give up.<br>Because, I need the two of them.<br>They're both important."
+
|"I won't give up. Because, I need the two of them. They're both important."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|275||
 
|275||
 
|俺を信じて集ってくれた仲間に嘘をついて、<br>俺を助けてくれた友達に大きな迷惑をかけて。
 
|俺を信じて集ってくれた仲間に嘘をついて、<br>俺を助けてくれた友達に大きな迷惑をかけて。
|Lying to an acquaintance I recruited who believed in me,<br>while greatly troubling the friend that saved me.
+
|Lying to an acquaintance I recruited who believed in me, while greatly troubling the friend that saved me.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|276||
 
|276||
 
|でも、もう止まれない。<br>止まる必要を感じない。
 
|でも、もう止まれない。<br>止まる必要を感じない。
|But, nothing can stop me now.<br>I don't feel the need to stop.
+
|But, nothing can stop me now. I don't feel the need to stop.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|今から思い直したり、後悔したり、迷ったりなんて…<br>そんな時間、とっくに残されてないんだから。
 
|今から思い直したり、後悔したり、迷ったりなんて…<br>そんな時間、とっくに残されてないんだから。
 
|There isn't any time left to think this over, have any regrets, or lose my way now.
 
|There isn't any time left to think this over, have any regrets, or lose my way now.
  +
|DON'T LOSE YOUR WAYYYYYYYY
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|283|武也|Takeya
 
|283|武也|Takeya
 
|「あと、いつもみたいな説教もやめとけ。<br>お前は気を使ってるつもりで、<br>実は一歩も退かなかったりすることがあるからな」
 
|「あと、いつもみたいな説教もやめとけ。<br>お前は気を使ってるつもりで、<br>実は一歩も退かなかったりすることがあるからな」
|"Also, don't go off lecturing like you always do.<br>Sure you're trying to play nice, but there are also times where you shouldn't be so stubborn."
+
|"Also, don't go off lecturing like you always do. Sure you're trying to play nice, but there are also times where you shouldn't be so stubborn."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|284|春希|Haruki
 
|284|春希|Haruki
 
|「何度も言わせるな。<br>自分のことは自分が一番よく知ってる」
 
|「何度も言わせるな。<br>自分のことは自分が一番よく知ってる」
|"No need to tell me twice.<br>I understand myself the most."
+
|"No need to tell me twice. I understand myself the most."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|286|春希|Haruki
 
|286|春希|Haruki
 
|「だから…そんなウザい真似しないって。<br>もう、半年もあいつと付き合ってるんだぞ?<br>何の心配もいらないって」
 
|「だから…そんなウザい真似しないって。<br>もう、半年もあいつと付き合ってるんだぞ?<br>何の心配もいらないって」
|"I'm telling you... I'm not that annoying.<br>You've been with me for half a year now.<br>There's nothing to worry about."
+
|"I'm telling you... I'm not that annoying. You've been with me for half a year now. There's nothing to worry about."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|292||
 
|292||
 
|放課後、さっさと第二音楽室に<br>しけ込もうとした冬馬が扉を開けたとき。
 
|放課後、さっさと第二音楽室に<br>しけ込もうとした冬馬が扉を開けたとき。
|Right after school, I headed straight to the second music room,<br>opening up the door where Touma was holed up.
+
|Right after school, I headed straight to the second music room, opening up the door where Touma was holed up.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|293|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|293|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「自分とこの練習は?<br>もう一月もないって騒いでたくせに」
 
|「自分とこの練習は?<br>もう一月もないって騒いでたくせに」
|"What about your practice?<br>You've only got a month to rush things."
+
|"What about your practice? You've only got a month to rush things."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|296|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|296|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「そんなのんきに構えてて、<br>本気で間に合うと思ってるわけ?」
 
|「そんなのんきに構えてて、<br>本気で間に合うと思ってるわけ?」
|"Do you honestly believe you'll make it,<br>being so carefree like that?"
+
|"Do you honestly believe you'll make it, being so carefree like that?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|297|春希|Haruki
 
|297|春希|Haruki
 
|「大丈夫。<br>近日中に、凄い仲間が加わることになってる」
 
|「大丈夫。<br>近日中に、凄い仲間が加わることになってる」
|"It'll be fine.<br>In a few days, we'll get someone amazing to join us."
+
|"It'll be fine. In a few days, we'll get someone amazing to join us."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|299|春希|Haruki
 
|299|春希|Haruki
 
|「そっか、冬馬も喜んでくれるか。<br>なら話は早…」
 
|「そっか、冬馬も喜んでくれるか。<br>なら話は早…」
|"I see, so even you're also glad about that.<br>Then let's get straight to..."
+
|"I see, so even you're also glad about that. Then let's get straight to..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|302||
 
|302||
 
|今年の春先に比べると、<br>『黙れ』『消えろ』『さわるな』以外の語彙が<br>なんと増えたことか…
 
|今年の春先に比べると、<br>『黙れ』『消えろ』『さわるな』以外の語彙が<br>なんと増えたことか…
|It seems her vocabulary since the beginning of this spring has increased beyond words like, "Shut up", "Disappear", or "Don't come near me"...
+
|It seems her vocabulary since the beginning of this spring has increased beyond words like, "shut up," "disappear," or "don't come near me"...
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|307|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|307|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「と、こっちがいくら言ったって、<br>どうせ出ていく気なんかないくせに」
 
|「と、こっちがいくら言ったって、<br>どうせ出ていく気なんかないくせに」
|"Though, no matter how many times I tell you,<br>you probably wouldn't go anyway."
+
|"Though, no matter how many times I tell you, you probably wouldn't go anyway."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|308|春希|Haruki
 
|308|春希|Haruki
 
|「よく俺のこと知ってるな。<br>さすがは友達」
 
|「よく俺のこと知ってるな。<br>さすがは友達」
|"You sure know me well.<br>As expected of a friend."
+
|"You sure know me well. As expected of a friend."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|310||
 
|310||
 
|今となっては、『黙れ』『消えろ』『さわるな』の後に、<br>こうしてきっちりフォローを入れてくれるのが、<br>何度もあれを食らった身としては嬉しいの一言で。
 
|今となっては、『黙れ』『消えろ』『さわるな』の後に、<br>こうしてきっちりフォローを入れてくれるのが、<br>何度もあれを食らった身としては嬉しいの一言で。
|Personally, I thought it was nice that she now follows up beyond words such as "shut up", "disappear", or "don't come near me".
+
|Personally, I thought it was nice that she now follows up beyond words such as "shut up," "disappear," or "don't come near me."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|326||
 
|326||
 
|俺たちが出会って一月後に得た、<br>『シカトの権利』を、気づかないうちに行使してる。
 
|俺たちが出会って一月後に得た、<br>『シカトの権利』を、気づかないうちに行使してる。
|Without realizing it, she'd started making use of that "privilege of ignoring me", which she'd earned a month after we met.
+
|Without realizing it, she'd started making use of that "privilege of ignoring me," which she'd earned a month after we met.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|350|春希|Haruki
 
|350|春希|Haruki
 
|「ちゃんと事前に電話して回収に行った。<br>みんな熱があってもしっかり書いてくれたぞ」
 
|「ちゃんと事前に電話して回収に行った。<br>みんな熱があってもしっかり書いてくれたぞ」
|"I gave them a phone call and picked them up. They filled them out, even though they caught cold."
+
|"I gave them a phone call and picked them up. They filled them out, even though they caught colds."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|354|春希|Haruki
 
|354|春希|Haruki
 
|「大体、ウチなんか付属なんだから、<br>とりあえず『[R峰城大^うえ]に進学』って書いておけばいいんだよ。<br>何も書かないよりよっぽど放っておいてくれるぞ」
 
|「大体、ウチなんか付属なんだから、<br>とりあえず『[R峰城大^うえ]に進学』って書いておけばいいんだよ。<br>何も書かないよりよっぽど放っておいてくれるぞ」
|"Besides, the school is affiliated with a university, so you can write down 'Enrolling in Houjou University'. They would care more if you left it empty."
+
|"Besides, the school is affiliated with a university, so you can write down 'Enrolling in Houjou University.' They would care more if you left it empty."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|360|春希|Haruki
 
|360|春希|Haruki
 
|「ほら、『不良が猫に餌やってた』とかいう<br>落差による高評価がなくなるから、<br>みんな普通に評価してくれるだろ?」
 
|「ほら、『不良が猫に餌やってた』とかいう<br>落差による高評価がなくなるから、<br>みんな普通に評価してくれるだろ?」
|"Look, going with the idea of, 'A delinquent that feeds a cat' isn't going to get you much recognition, but going with the flow would, right?"
+
|"Look, going with the idea of 'A delinquent that feeds a cat' isn't going to get you much recognition, but going with the flow would, right?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|367|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|367|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「………北原」
 
|「………北原」
|"......... Kitahara,"
+
|"......... Kitahara..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|375|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|375|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「別に、見られたって構わない。<br>あんたの言うとおり『[R峰城大^うえ]に進学』って<br>書いただけだから」
 
|「別に、見られたって構わない。<br>あんたの言うとおり『[R峰城大^うえ]に進学』って<br>書いただけだから」
|"I don't really care if you look at it. I just wrote, 'Enrolling in Houjou University', like you said."
+
|"I don't really care if you look at it. I just wrote, 'Enrolling in Houjou University,' like you said."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|393||
 
|393||
 
|冬馬は、俺が『おはよう』とか『さよなら』を言うのを、<br>ありがたくも許してくれるようになった。
 
|冬馬は、俺が『おはよう』とか『さよなら』を言うのを、<br>ありがたくも許してくれるようになった。
|Touma was willing to allow me to say things like, "Good morning" or "Farewell".
+
|Touma was willing to allow me to say things like, "Good morning" or "Farewell."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|413|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|413|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「出て行け。<br>もう二度とここに来るな」
 
|「出て行け。<br>もう二度とここに来るな」
|"Get out.<br>Don't come here anymore."
+
|"Get out. Don't come here anymore."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   

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1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the White Album 2 Omake page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:

  • Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with Chapter 1 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.
  • Lines 534-595 coincide with Chapter 2 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
  • Lines 676-677 coincide with the Epilogue of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.
  • Line 836 coincides with Chapter 3 (all-ages) of The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像(アイドル).

2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):

  • 春希
    「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、
    お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
  • 春希
    「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、
    友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

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