Difference between revisions of "White Album 2/Script/1005"

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|その後…
 
|その後…
 
|Afterwards...
 
|Afterwards...
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|I got an error message here, but afterwards things continued as normal. "そんな識別コードはopr[30]"
 
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|419||
 
|俺が扉の外からどれだけ呼びかけても、<br>冬馬がふたたび第二音楽室の鍵を開けることはなかった。
 
|俺が扉の外からどれだけ呼びかけても、<br>冬馬がふたたび第二音楽室の鍵を開けることはなかった。
|Even if I called from beyond the door,<br>Touma didn't unlock the door to the second room again.
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|Even if I called to her, Touma didn't unlock the door to the second room again.
 
|}}
 
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|421||
 
|何が冬馬の逆鱗に触れてしまったんだ?<br>俺はまったくいつも通りにしてたはずなのに…
 
|何が冬馬の逆鱗に触れてしまったんだ?<br>俺はまったくいつも通りにしてたはずなのに…
|What did I do to aggravate her?<br>I was only doing what I usually did...
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|What did I do to aggravate her? I was only doing what I usually did...
 
|}}
 
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|423|春希|Haruki
 
|423|春希|Haruki
 
|「…そういうわけで、ごめん。<br>俺、小木曽に少しだけ嘘ついてた」
 
|「…そういうわけで、ごめん。<br>俺、小木曽に少しだけ嘘ついてた」
|"... anyway, I'm sorry.<br>I lied a little to you, Ogiso."
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|"... anyway, I'm sorry. I lied a little to you, Ogiso."
 
|}}
 
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|425||
 
|小木曽は、俺の話に興味がないような感じで、<br>変装のための眼鏡を空に透かしたりしている。
 
|小木曽は、俺の話に興味がないような感じで、<br>変装のための眼鏡を空に透かしたりしている。
|Ogiso looked at the sky through her disguise glasses, as if she hadn't any interest in what I said.
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|Ogiso looked at the sky through her disguise glasses, as if she had no interest in what I said.
 
|}}
 
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|426|春希|Haruki
 
|426|春希|Haruki
 
|「あのときのピアノなんだけどさ、<br>実は、同好会のメンバーじゃなかったんだよな…<br>たまたま隣にいて、お遊びで合わせてくれてただけで」
 
|「あのときのピアノなんだけどさ、<br>実は、同好会のメンバーじゃなかったんだよな…<br>たまたま隣にいて、お遊びで合わせてくれてただけで」
|"That pianist from before wasn't actually from any of our members... she just happened to be around and play with us from time to time.
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|"That pianist from before wasn't actually one of our members... she just happened to be around and play with us from time to time.
 
|}}
 
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|「それにしては息ピッタリだったよね。<br>時々屋上で聞いてたけど、いつも楽しそうでさ…」
 
|「それにしては息ピッタリだったよね。<br>時々屋上で聞いてたけど、いつも楽しそうでさ…」
 
|"It really seemed just like that. I heard her from the rooftop here and there, always having fun..."
 
|"It really seemed just like that. I heard her from the rooftop here and there, always having fun..."
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|This seems like a very ambiguous response. Perhaps, "It really seemed like she was." would be better?
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|433|春希|Haruki
 
|433|春希|Haruki
 
|「だからその…<br>キーボードがいるみたいに嘘ついてたこと。<br>本当は、小木曽以外にはギターしかいないのに」
 
|「だからその…<br>キーボードがいるみたいに嘘ついてたこと。<br>本当は、小木曽以外にはギターしかいないのに」
|"Well, you know... lying that we had a keyboardist. We really don't have anyone else other than you and the guitarist."
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|"Well, you know... lying that we had a keyboardist. We really don't have anyone else other than you and the guitarists."
 
}}
 
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|その割には、この妙な圧迫感はなんだろう?
 
|その割には、この妙な圧迫感はなんだろう?
 
|Relatively speaking, what's this strange oppressive feeling I'm getting?
 
|Relatively speaking, what's this strange oppressive feeling I'm getting?
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|Rather than "relatively speaking," something that flows better and sounds more natural would be preferable.
 
|}}
 
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|442||
 
|442||
 
|もしそんな事態になったとしたら、<br>それってきっとこういう態度なんだろうなぁって…<br>今の小木曽を見てるとそう思えるのは気のせいか?
 
|もしそんな事態になったとしたら、<br>それってきっとこういう態度なんだろうなぁって…<br>今の小木曽を見てるとそう思えるのは気のせいか?
|And if it did turn out that way, I wonder just how bad it would be...? Maybe it's my imagination's doing for seeing Ogiso the way she is now?
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|And if it did turn out that way, I wonder just how bad it would be...? Maybe I'm seeing Ogiso as she is now because of my imagination?
 
|}}
 
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|446|春希|Haruki
 
|446|春希|Haruki
 
|「けど、これは謝って然るべきだし。<br>実際、俺が強引に誘ったから」
 
|「けど、これは謝って然るべきだし。<br>実際、俺が強引に誘ったから」
|"Still, this is the sort of thing I should apologize for.<br>After all, I was the one who forcibly invited you."
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|"Still, this is the sort of thing I should apologize for. After all, I was the one who forcibly invited you."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|448|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|448|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「ううん、仕方ないとか全然思ってないから」
 
|「ううん、仕方ないとか全然思ってないから」
|"It's fine. I'm not thinking that this could have been avoided or anything at all."
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|"It's fine. I don't think that this could have been avoided or anything at all."
 
|}}
 
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|457|春希|Haruki
 
|457|春希|Haruki
 
|「あ、あ、ああ…うん。<br>えっと、そうだな…頑張らないと」
 
|「あ、あ、ああ…うん。<br>えっと、そうだな…頑張らないと」
|"Y, y, yeah... right.<br>Umm, yeah... gotta work hard."
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|"Y, y, yeah... right. Umm, yeah... gotta work hard."
 
|}}
 
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|459||
 
|その、なんというか、変装用の眼鏡越しでも、<br>十分に相手をへにゃへにゃさせることのできる、<br>タチの悪い罠みたいな表情に。
 
|その、なんというか、変装用の眼鏡越しでも、<br>十分に相手をへにゃへにゃさせることのできる、<br>タチの悪い罠みたいな表情に。
|It was, well, a face that was like a nasty trap. Even when wearing those disguise glasses, it was enough to make someone really curl up.
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|It was, well, a face like a nasty trap. Even when wearing those disguise glasses, it was enough to make someone really curl up.
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|I have a feeling "like a nasty trap" isn't quite what was originally intended.
 
|}}
 
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|464|春希|Haruki
 
|464|春希|Haruki
 
|「うん…<br>ついさっき、強烈に断られたけど、な」
 
|「うん…<br>ついさっき、強烈に断られたけど、な」
|"Yeah...<br>Though she profusely refused just now."
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|"Yeah... Though she profusely refused just now."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|475|春希|Haruki
 
|475|春希|Haruki
 
|「…悪い、聞いてなかった。<br>なんだって?」
 
|「…悪い、聞いてなかった。<br>なんだって?」
|"... sorry, I wasn't listening.<br>What was it?"
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|"... sorry, I wasn't listening. What was it?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|476|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|476|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「なんでもない!<br>ほんと、なんでもないから!」
 
|「なんでもない!<br>ほんと、なんでもないから!」
|"It's nothing!<br>Really, it's nothing!"
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|"It's nothing! Really, it's nothing!"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|479|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|479|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「でも、だったらどうする?<br>冬馬さん、難しそうなんでしょう?」
 
|「でも、だったらどうする?<br>冬馬さん、難しそうなんでしょう?」
|"So, what'll you do then?<br>Touma-san seems pretty complicated, right?"
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|"So, what'll you do then? Touma-san seems pretty complicated, right?"
 
|}}
 
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|480|春希|Haruki
 
|480|春希|Haruki
 
|「だな。<br>2、3日のうちに承諾してもらわないと、<br>いくらなんでももう間に合わないし」
 
|「だな。<br>2、3日のうちに承諾してもらわないと、<br>いくらなんでももう間に合わないし」
|"Yeah.<br>If I can't get her to join along in two or three days,<br>we won't be able to make it at all."
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|"Yeah. If I can't get her to join along in two or three days, we won't be able to make it at all."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|481||
 
|今週を逃すと、もう来週は11月。<br>学園祭当日まで、あと三週間にまで迫ってしまう。
 
|今週を逃すと、もう来週は11月。<br>学園祭当日まで、あと三週間にまで迫ってしまう。
|Once this week passes, it'll already be November.<br>There'll only be three weeks before the school festival.
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|Once this week passes, it'll already be November. There'll only be three weeks before the school festival.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|483|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|483|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「まずは彼女に話を聞いてもらわないと…<br>何かいい方法でもある?」
 
|「まずは彼女に話を聞いてもらわないと…<br>何かいい方法でもある?」
|"First, we have to have her listen to us...<br>Do you have anything in mind?"
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|"First, we have to have her listen to us... Do you have anything in mind?"
 
|}}
 
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|486||
 
|…ある。<br>実は、一つだけ心当たりが。
 
|…ある。<br>実は、一つだけ心当たりが。
|... there is.<br>Actually, only one thing comes to mind.
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|... there is. Actually, only one thing comes to mind.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|493||
 
|493||
 
|第一の条件に合致するのは、今のところ三人。<br>その中から、第二の条件に合致するのは…
 
|第一の条件に合致するのは、今のところ三人。<br>その中から、第二の条件に合致するのは…
|There are three people who match the first condition.<br>And within that, the one who matches the second condition...
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|There are three people who match the first condition. And within that, the one who matches the second condition...
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|494|春希|Haruki
 
|494|春希|Haruki
 
|「あのさ、小木曽。<br>実は、頼みたいことがあるんだけど…」
 
|「あのさ、小木曽。<br>実は、頼みたいことがあるんだけど…」
|"Hey, Ogiso.<br>I actually have a request I'd like to make..."
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|"Hey, Ogiso. I actually have a request I'd like to make..."
 
|}}
 
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|497||
 
|武也も、もし冬馬が初対面の時のことを覚えてたら…<br>いや、それ以前にあいつら二人は根本的に合わなそうだし。
 
|武也も、もし冬馬が初対面の時のことを覚えてたら…<br>いや、それ以前にあいつら二人は根本的に合わなそうだし。
|And if Touma remembered her first meeting Takeya...<br>,Well, they were never really meant for each other to begin with.
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|And if Touma remembered the first time she met Takeya... Well, they were never really meant for each other to begin with.
 
|}}
 
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|504|春希|Haruki
 
|504|春希|Haruki
 
|「で、さ…<br>ほんの少しだけ、<br>小木曽を利用させてもらいたいんだけど」
 
|「で、さ…<br>ほんの少しだけ、<br>小木曽を利用させてもらいたいんだけど」
|"You, see...<br>I was wondering if you could be of assistance to me, for just a little bit."
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|"You, see... I was wondering if you could be of assistance to me, for just a little bit."
 
|}}
 
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|509|春希|Haruki
 
|509|春希|Haruki
 
|「頼む!<br>今、冬馬を説得するためには、<br>小木曽のことをわかってもらうしかないんだ!」
 
|「頼む!<br>今、冬馬を説得するためには、<br>小木曽のことをわかってもらうしかないんだ!」
|"Please!<br>The only way I can persuade Touma,<br>is to have her understand you!"
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|"Please! The only way I can persuade Touma is to have her understand you!"
 
|}}
 
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|510|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|510|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「だ、だからって…いきなり<br>一度しか会ったことのない人の話なんかしたって、<br>向こうも『だから何?』ってなっちゃうだけだって…」
 
|「だ、だからって…いきなり<br>一度しか会ったことのない人の話なんかしたって、<br>向こうも『だから何?』ってなっちゃうだけだって…」
|"E, even so... suddenly talking to someone who I'd never met... it feels like they'd just go, 'So what'..."
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|"E, even so... suddenly talking to someone who I'd never met... it feels like they'd just go, 'So what?'..."
 
|}}
 
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|512|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|512|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「それとこれとは話が違うよ…<br>全然違うよ…」
 
|「それとこれとは話が違うよ…<br>全然違うよ…」
|"That's different from what you're asking...<br>Totally different..."
+
|"That's different from what you're asking... Totally different..."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|515|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|515|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「だ…大体、<br>あれはわたしと北原くんの、二人だけの…」
 
|「だ…大体、<br>あれはわたしと北原くんの、二人だけの…」
|"B... besides,<br>that was just between you and me, Kitahara-kun..."
+
|"B... besides, that was just between you and me, Kitahara-kun..."
 
|}}
 
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|516|春希|Haruki
 
|516|春希|Haruki
 
|「それに関しては誠に申し訳ないと思ってる!」
 
|「それに関しては誠に申し訳ないと思ってる!」
|"I really apologize for that, I truly am!"
+
|"I really apologize for that, I truly do!"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|519|春希|Haruki
 
|519|春希|Haruki
 
|「でも、冬馬って本当はいい奴なんだよ。<br>絶対に他人にバラしたりしないから!」
 
|「でも、冬馬って本当はいい奴なんだよ。<br>絶対に他人にバラしたりしないから!」
|"But, Touma is a really good person.<br>I promise no one else will find out!"
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|"But, Touma is a really good person I promise no one else will find out!"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|520||
 
|520||
 
|そう、冬馬はいい奴だ…<br>だから、今の俺みたいな最低な真似はしないだろう。
 
|そう、冬馬はいい奴だ…<br>だから、今の俺みたいな最低な真似はしないだろう。
|Yes, Touma is a good person...<br>She wouldn't do anything horrible like I am right now.
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|Yes, Touma is a good person... She wouldn't do anything horrible like I am right now.
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|529|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|529|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「それとも…<br>それって、冬馬さんと北原くんの、二人だけの…」
 
|「それとも…<br>それって、冬馬さんと北原くんの、二人だけの…」
|"Or...<br>Is that something only between Touma-san and Kitahara-kun...?"
+
|"Or... Is that something only between Touma-san and Kitahara-kun...?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|530|春希|Haruki
 
|530|春希|Haruki
 
|「俺のギターを、<br>初めて真面目に聞いてくれた奴だから」
 
|「俺のギターを、<br>初めて真面目に聞いてくれた奴だから」
|"She was the first person,<br>who'd seriously listened to my guitar."
+
|"She was the first person who'd seriously listened to my guitar."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|531|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|531|雪菜|Setsuna
 
|「お互い顔も合わせずに、<br>一緒に演奏してくれたこと?」
 
|「お互い顔も合わせずに、<br>一緒に演奏してくれたこと?」
|"Do you mean how she accompanied you,<br>despite never meeting you?"
+
|"Do you mean how she accompanied you, despite never meeting you?"
 
|}}
 
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|532|春希|Haruki
 
|532|春希|Haruki
 
|「………いや、もうちょっと前。<br>夏休みのとき」
 
|「………いや、もうちょっと前。<br>夏休みのとき」
|"......... no, this is much farther back.<br>During summer."
+
|"......... no, this is much farther back. During summer."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|542|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|542|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「だって…<br>これ、コード押さえてるだけでしょ?<br>それでミスする理由が理解できない」
 
|「だって…<br>これ、コード押さえてるだけでしょ?<br>それでミスする理由が理解できない」
|"Well... you're just holding down cords, right? I can't understand how you can miss."
+
|"Well... you're just holding down chords, right? I can't understand how you can miss."
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|572|春希|Haruki
 
|572|春希|Haruki
 
|「すげぇなしかし…<br>冬馬、お前ギターやってるのか?」
 
|「すげぇなしかし…<br>冬馬、お前ギターやってるのか?」
|"That was amazing though... are you also playing the guitar, Touma?"
+
|"That was amazing though... do you also play the guitar, Touma?"
 
|}}
 
|}}
   
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|585|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|585|かずさ|Kazusa
 
|「ならゆっくりと」
 
|「ならゆっくりと」
|"Then, start slowly."
+
|"Then start slowly."
 
|}}
 
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|599|春希|Haruki
 
|599|春希|Haruki
 
|「ホント性格は悪いんだあいつ。<br>ものすごいスパルタでさ、その後も言うことが酷いの」
 
|「ホント性格は悪いんだあいつ。<br>ものすごいスパルタでさ、その後も言うことが酷いの」
|"She actually has a pretty bad personality. Very spartan-like; saying anything beyond that would be cruel."
+
|"She actually has a pretty bad personality. Very spartan-like. Saying anything beyond that would be cruel."
 
|}}
 
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|「でも逆らえなかった。<br>というより逆らう気になれなかった。<br>何しろ、俺より遙かに上手かったし」
 
|「でも逆らえなかった。<br>というより逆らう気になれなかった。<br>何しろ、俺より遙かに上手かったし」
 
|"But she's one to oppose others. Or rather, she didn't have an interest in doing so. After all, she was far better off than I was."
 
|"But she's one to oppose others. Or rather, she didn't have an interest in doing so. After all, she was far better off than I was."
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|Shouldn't this be "she's ''not'' one to oppose others"? Either way, this entire line needs to be reworked.
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1. Segments of this file will coincide with the digital novels from the White Album 2 Omake page. If any edits are made, please make sure both match up. They are as follows:

  • Lines 1-46 and 328-391 coincide with Chapter 1 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • The VN side appears to have extra sfx text that was added.
  • Lines 534-595 coincide with Chapter 2 of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
  • Lines 676-677 coincide with the Epilogue of The Snow Melts, And Until The Snow Falls (雪が解け、そして雪が降るまで).
    • Line 676 is a bit extended in the VN version.
  • Line 836 coincides with Chapter 3 (all-ages) of The Idol Who Forgot How To Sing / 歌を忘れた偶像(アイドル).

2. The PS3 version changed line 1352 and replaced it with two different lines (likely in order to maintain CERO D rating):

  • 春希
    「友達と一緒に夜の繁華街うろついててさ、
    お互いにアリバイ工作してたんだけど」
  • 春希
    「向こうの家に電話されて、一発でバレて、
    友達と二人揃ってもの凄く叱られたとか」

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